Reviewer: Samcentric Chick (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
i liked it! and had i not already known it was ellen, i would've been surprised. this part: "Ellen insisted on taking Jo home, she would deal with her daughter's body and didn’t want anyone else there. Dean understood, when they burnt John’s body, it had been just him and Sam, his family. No one else had a right to be there, because no one had known John the way his boys had and Ellen was doing the same, for no one had known Joanna-Beth Harvelle like her mother." i so almost cried, and i don't cry easy when reading stories. good job and stuff!
Author's Response: yey, she liked it! I'm glad you enjoyed it and it's nice to know that you'da been surprised about Ellen. Thanks for picking out a part that you liked in particular, I haven't checked back with this story in so long, it was nice to have a reason to come back to it. Almost cried is good...yey!
Reviewer: Samcentric Chick (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 1- The Boys Are Back!
i hope this is the story i'm supposed to be reading. lol. either way, i'm intrigued.
Author's Response: Yeap it is and I'm glad you're intrigued =D
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 20/04/08 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
Schelz, Very well done. Heartbreaking to think of the damage demons do to those they leave behind. Crys
Author's Response: Aww thanks Crys! They do cause a lot of Damage don't they? ;) Thnx alot Schelz
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
Brilliant, I like it although it is sad what happened.
Author's Response: Aww sharx, sorry I made you cry! *grins* thanks for calling this brilliant. Schelz x x
Author's Response: Forget the response above, I got confused, was meant to put that response for If I lost you! Duhh...Thanks anyway
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
Though I don't like Jo, you made me feel for her in this chapter. You did Ellen justice, very heart breaking scene her rocking Jo in her arms. I love how you went through what everyone was feeling in the moment Ellen held Jo. Ash, Dean, Sam and Ellen. Brilliant story, bittersweet! Can't wait for your next story, what is it?
Author's Response: Aww I'm glad you felt that way, thanks for saying I did Ellen justice, as first I found it quite hard writing her emotionally but it's nice to know it worked for you. Thanks for letting me know what parts you liked and describing it as a brilliant story! Hmm, my next story is already finished and waiting to be posted. It's called 'Beast of Prey' dunno when I will post it though...hopefully after secrets is finished. I finished secrets I just keep getting caught up and need to focus on posting the chapters again. Thanks for the stars too. Schelz x x
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
Love the attitude of the demon, how sneaky is she? Really good. I think you're very smart and kind of have the same thought process as the kripke team. After watching 'Malleus Malificarum' Ruby said some of the demons were humas first and so does the demon possessing Ellen in your story. This was posted before that episode! You rock!!! I like how you blamed the demon for killing William Harvelle so it wouldn't be John's fault. Hehehe Ooo Jo's run into the house without Sam's back up.
Author's Response: Heya Suga, Glad you like the attitude of the demon. wow!!! Suga, you saying you think my thought process is kinda the same to the kripke team, that is a huge compliment!!! Thank you very much. Yep, don't blame it on John Winchester, blame it on a demon. Hehehe
Reviewer: JJ_Heaven (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
In my last review I forgot to mention I love how your so discriptive and how you describe each emotion, mood and the silences. my favorite is wen you sed "silence owned the Winchester boys". I really felt how quiet it was and how they actually COULDNT say a word. brilliant im goin off to review sumfin else of yours. I get great plessuere and such a good read. so thank you.jj_heaven
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!!! It was a great pleasure to read reviews from such apprecitiative readers xx
Reviewer: JJ_Heaven (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 2- Brain Damage!?!
I really want to know who did that to Bobby. brain damge. nooooooooo. like i sed i will come 4u. lol.Poor Sam and Dean I dont know what they would do if anything were to happen to Bobby he is all they have left. they would be crushed. but i must admit i love the way you portray emotion dead on the mark.But bad news for whoever did it Sam and Dean will tear that person to shredds. (it will be well deserved too).jj_heaven
Author's Response: You'll soon find out hun, all in good time. Thanks for thinking I hit emotion dead on the mark.
Reviewer: JJ_Heaven (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 1- The Boys Are Back!
Oh im a sucker wen it comes to that brotherly love its so heart warming. me and my sisters are the same you have your good times and you have you bad times but at the end of the day family is more important than any argument and Sam and Dean show me that in your stories every time.I really like Bobby I was gonna say that I hope he is alright but I know Bobby is going to be just fine... and if he's not im coming after you schelz. LOL. but good chapter .jj_heaven
Author's Response: KD, Argh!!! What happened to the order of your reviews hun. Hehehe Sucker for brotherly love, you'll find on this site that your not alone...not one bit. Lol family is defo more important than any arguments. I'm glad you felt I showed that between the boys. hahahah I was gonna say...oooh I'm soo scared, then I realized you can come after me. lol;)
Reviewer: JJ_Heaven (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
Before i say anything else i 1st wana say i love all your chapter titles they really catch you they are so intence. tear drops(friggin awesome lovin it).jesus that whole story was just fantasic as i got further down the last chapter it was so cold it sent a chill down my spine. and these demons are so vicious tey no exactly hoe to get you and make you weeker. they got the boys by killing john and they Ellen by making her kill her only child. luckily the boys sill have Bobby.absolutely loved the part where Dean reminds Sam about willingly going to sleep and Sam responce was kinda like yes or there will be punches thrown and the laughed. theres nothing else i can say it was just superb and im so proud of you schelz. and i cat wait for the series.jj_heaven
Author's Response: Thank you for liking all the titles of my chapters. I always listen to the song 'tear drops' by Massive attack and was listening to it when I wrote the last chapter. good song!!! I know, don't you just hate Demons?!? Apart from Ruby! I liked that part too (Dean threatening Sam to go sleep) thank you so much for using words like superb!!! Thanks for being proud of me too;) thanks for all the stars in every chappy. I look forward to getting out the series to read what you think of it!! I'm hoping its gonna be my best work yet! Schelz
Reviewer: JJ_Heaven (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
SCHELZ THAT CHAPTER WAS FRIGGIN BRILLIANT. ALL THEM TWIST AND TURNS GREAT STUFF.I REALLY LOVE THE FACT THAT THERE IS ELLEN AND JO BLAMING JOHN FOR BILLYS DEATH AND IT WASNT EVEN HIM. OH AN DEAN BEING YHE JOKER THAT HE IS WITH THE
"YOU AINT GETIN ALL OF THIS". LOVED IT REALLY REALLY AWESOME. JJ_HEAVEN
Author's Response: Thanks hun, really glad you liked the twists. Well I love John, so any excuse to get him out of something...hehehehe blame it on a demon off course! ;) Thanx for review!
Reviewer: JJ_Heaven (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
Oh schelz i love the, that shit stings bit. Bobby seems like a natural joker.yay Ash, Ash, Ash. im so glad that ash is still alive. its Ellen thats not cool atall. i must admit that i was abit suspicious the way Ellen was the only one that wasnt in the road house wen it burnt down. for me you hit the nail on the head cos i did think there was sumfin wrong with Ellen. good job.JJ_HEAVEN
Author's Response: What's funny is I don't think Bobby tries to be a joker, he's just funny;) gotta love Ash!!! I too was very cautious of Ellen in AHBL2 with the pretzels excuse. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: JJ_Heaven (Signed) · Date: 21/02/08 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
That was a great chapter. a know that i have sed it b4 but i really love the genuine concern the boys have 4 Bobby and vise versa. and also i lve the bit wen Dean sed to Sam that he will swing at him if he dont go to sleep voluntarily.And poor Dean having to clean all that blood making him sick, i think its the fact that it was Bobbys blood.And i think that doctor was really genuine.jj_heaven
Author's Response: Thank you, I think Bobby is a defo good addition to the show and I feel the boys genuinely care a lot about him. He's like a father for em. ;) You have a good point about Dean being sick because it was Bobby's blood. Made it real to him that they could've lost him!!!
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
Schelz... You killed Jo!!!!!....not sure how i felt about that...not really a fan of Jo's, but i guess i really read very little deathfics, and that's why it kinda hits me more i think.... Very good story....and i love the ending...not a happily ever after ending, but a more bittersweet one, and i think it's a very very good ending......and leaving readers to wonder about Ellen and Ash...and did i mention i LOVE the ending?? LOL
Author's Response: Aww hun thanks for the stars. Yeah I'm not into deathfics myself, but it's hard when your story telling starts to waver, as a writer you have to make a decision, trust yourself after making that decision and give it your all. Mixed emotions and opinions is a good thing in my book, thanks for your honesty. I'm starting to like the fact that not everyone is going to agree with me and like my style, pace, and outcomes. Ta for saying it was overall a good story I'm glad you liked the ending!!! I try my best to do happy endings (Yes, sap over here) glad its left you wondering. I wonder too because Ellen just disappeared from season2 and I always thought they showed Ash's watch for a reason, apparently not. Yep you mention you loved the ending... thanks Lyn;) Schelz
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
NIce update, had to be hard for the boys to be right there and not save Jo. Poor Ellen, everyone else may forgive her, but she'll not forgive herself. Enjoying the story - Angela
Author's Response: Thanks Angela, defo hard for the boys as Jo was only young and close to them. Ellen will never forgive herself, even though it wasn't her fault:( Glad you enjoyed it hun;) Schelz
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
Wonderful job! I couldn't stop reading! And yes, I forgive you for killing off Jo....it created all the right drama. Nice work! ~Kayla
Author's Response: Aww thanks Kayla, glad you couldn't stop reading, feels good to know you've forgive me;) and even better that you found it created the right drama. Schelz
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
whoa Bebg - my litttle baby girls a killer! Poor Jo and Poor Ellen! I really thought the demon was gonna go after Ash! Caught me there! Good one Hun Aba x
Author's Response: Though a killer, I'm still your baby girl and that means you gotta love me unconditionally And I still stand by what I said, Mickey paid me a visit and after what he did to Dean I thought it would be smart to do as he said. I know right now your  but it's not my fault it's that horrid Mickey!!! Poor Ellen and Jo indeed:( Thanks for reading hun. Bebg xx
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
Bebg! Oh you smutty Bebg you! Demons smooching and snogging Dean! I thought Ellen licking Deans cheek was especially cool! Worried for Ash tho! Off to chapter 6 now
Author's Response: Aba! I thought you might like that cheek licking bit, put it in there especially for your enjoyment. hehehe! Forgot to do the barefoot thing. Soz ooo worried for Ash, I'm too busy worrying about myself and what your going to do to me once you've read chap 6
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
Aww Bails, this was amazing. Damn you for making me cry. Again. It's absolutely beautifully written as always. Thanks for a great story! ber xxx
Author's Response: So many lovely stars! Thanks so much Ber;) Yay! I made you cry (in a good way off course) hehehe. Thanks for saying, 'beautifully written, as always.' Thanks for reading and thanks for all your support and special friendship on and off the site hun. CFM! Bails xxx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 6- Tear drops
This is just SUCH a sad chapter Schelz, and just so beautifully written. I think it's very brave of you to write this particular bit of plot (don't want to say what happens in case anyone is review surfing and I give the game away) but it's just fantastically done. You really do write 'emotional' beautifully...and I'm very sorry Bev if I've beaten you to first review...I apologise...not.
Author's Response: Almost blinded by the beauty of your stars. hehehe Thanks so much Flo, for saying this was beautifully written. Boy was I shaking in my imaginary boots about this last chapter. I hope everyone else see's it the way you do and don't string me up alive!! LOL Thanks for all the support!!! Ahhh Bev won't mind;) I hope... Schelz
Reviewer: X5 494 (Signed) · Date: 18/02/08 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
what happens.....i need to know. the story is excellent so far.
Author's Response: I too was a dark angel fan in the days of Alex! Hehehe. Very cool name you've got there. I'm glad you want to know what happens next, thank you so much for saying it's excellent;) The final chappy should be up this week. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this
Jo is silly to run into the house like that, especially without Sam, she isnt even a hunter.
Author's Response: Your right there, Jo is silly to run in like that, especially as she's not an experienced hunter...But...this is Ellen we're talking about and, Jo isn't running in there as a hunter, she's running in there as a daughter who wants to protect her mum. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I love responding! Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo
That woman is weird, I would have never guessed that, I'm very surprised.
Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you didn't see the twist coming otherwise that would make me predictable...and as Lou says and I have to agree, I am a spontaneous writer!!! Hehehe Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 3- He moved!
I'm happy that bobby's alright, it wouldnt be the same without him in it.
Author's Response: You absolutely right, it wouldn't be the same without our Bobby. Glad your glad he's alright! Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 2- Brain Damage!?!
This is a good chapter and I have no idea what subdural hematoma is.
Author's Response: Thanks sharky;) well...the hematoma can result from a heavy blow to the head and basically cause a blood clot to form around the brain. Don't you just love writing?!? We have to research just like Sammy. Lol Schelz | |
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