This was freakin’ HILARIOUS!!! Just the best fun!! I loved the way you went from ‘us’ to ‘them’ – of course no boundaries. I always tell everyone that I live in a world of vamps, werewolves, wendigos and vengeful spirits – oh, but not to worry coz the Winchester brothers keep me and my friends safe!! And here we are in this fab fic, being protected!! Very funny, very clever. Loved being mentioned!!!
Your description of Celeste getting sucked into her computer, I tried sooo hard to be serious. .After all this is terrifying stuff right?? But “her bottom half burned as if she were being pulled into a fire of volcanic liquid” Kill me now girl!!! Then this “Only her head remained free, and with her last effort she opened her mouth and let out the loudest, shrillest of screams” OMG! Please don’t let the boys see this undignified exit!! Too freakin’ funny!!! You are to blame for a bad dose of the hiccups!!
I swear your lines came from my house too! I’ve added the necessary responses… with your approval of course!!
"I swear you're obsessed with this damn show" – …and your point is???????
"If you’re not watching those boys on DVD then you’re on this damn thing writing about them." – not true, you forgot the part where we chat to un-gen-friends about them, and email cute pictures and banners of them around the world!!
"Yeah well, let’s see how funny it would be if your computer shut down on you." – store credit, here I come!!!
"…live virtual life.” – no it’s REAL!!!
“…her typing had slowed down and her vision had blurred. …determined to get … finished even if it killed her, typos started to cover the page, the clock at the bottom of her computer read 2.15am” – it’s ok, we soldier on regardless.
"What are you doing here so late?" – no, this is early…I didn’t actually get to bed, but *yawn* don’t *yawn* worry *yawn* I’m *yawn* not *yawn* tired
"I’ve just been so hooked, reading and reviewing most of the night” – damn straight!
I have to say I’m quite hooked to The Rapture." – what’s not to love?!?!
And now to the boys!!!
"this demon only goes after chicks." – Help! Help!
"Whoa! Those freakin' dudes look a bit like us." – Welcome home Honey’s!!
"Latest fics?" – Dean, you must read ‘Darlene’ by thebypassed. Actually, it’s really called ‘Lou, Jude, Bex, Merrie, Petra, Laura, Lorraine, Bev, Gen, Crystal, Jeannette, Vanessa, Petra, Petra, Petra’ (oops, sorry, carried away…)
"These girls are loyal fans” – and don’t Kripke and Co know it!!
"Another big problem, all the girls were friends." – just the best bunch!! Go Amazons!!
"Dude, check out some of these awesome pennames…Bulletbabe, that name rocks big time. And look at this one, Supernaturaljunkiejude, Andromeda171. Ooh, someone has awesome taste, look at this. Impala!" - nothing to add, perfect!
"We gotta warn em Dean." – My heroes!!!
"Great, we gotta get to the them…. "Come again." – so not gonna touch that one!!! Reading ‘Darlene’ again…
"Just imagine how grateful they’d be?" – you have no idea!!
Who knows Sam, they might wanna thank me alone’ – see, we do have manners here at Un Gen!
"Well who am I to decline? I can’t turned down some and accept others. It just wouldn’t be right would it?" – see, Dean has manners!
"Dean to the rescue, here we come ladies. Hope you’re ready for me." – We were born ready!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow! Petra;) I'm tryna figure out where to start with this. Lol Theres something else we have in common cause I live in a world of vamps, werewolves, wendigos and vengeful spirits too. I have to say when I started writing Celeste's attack it was meant to be scary but by the time I'd finished writing it, I was laughing my ass off too. I'm not surprised those lines are from your house cause I get harrassed too. Lol, but your responses are damn straight- I plan to start using them. I think I might take a peek at 'Charlene' by passerby...love dimensions;) Yes indeed Dean has good manner cause he's gonna sort us all out, one by one.............sorry, I'm back now! Lets not forget Sam, I'd like to thank him too;) Hmm mm. Thanks so much for this crazy review, love it, love it, love it!!! Schelz xxxx |
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Author's Response: | So there I am looking up Thepasserby for 'Charlene.' and its not there. So I come back and check ur review again and DUH!! It says thebypassed...Lol |
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Author's Response: | Ok, so now I've just read Darlene and boy!....speechless, now I want to take a cold shower!!! Where the hell is Dean? I'm waiting.... |
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