Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 15
Now this is interesting...Hendrickson being told and believing all about the SPN world? Now that's a nice twist for the future...and this exorcism is gonna be a humdinger...
Author's Response: I have written more exorcisms than I care to share but this one is one of my favorite. hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 14
I have never been so relieved at a plot development in any fanfic I've ever read in my life...but he must still die slowly... Very cool to see Hendrickson acting like a good guy by the way.
Author's Response: I always liked Hendrickson. My husband is a cop and I can understand their need to understand and explain even those things that have no explination. I have attempted many stories about Hendrickson but this is the only one that has worked. He's a good guy deep down just a little misguided. How many ways can I say 'thank you"? I think I've used them all but thanks again.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 13
This man/demon must die...slowly, horribly, painfully...but most importantly...slowly, very slowly... Horrifying, but in a 'must read next chapter' kind of way...
Author's Response: As long as you have to desire to go on I must be doing something right. I don't know how to explain how difficult this was to post. Writing was easy; putting it out there for people to read....much harder. I thought for sure people would say that I was sick in the head and move on. Thanks for the reviews and for reading!
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 12
God - you weren't joking were you, this is as dark as they come...and if they hurt Ben...there's gonna be hell to pay...without a doubt. Sooo dark...but sooo compelling.
Author's Response: I like social commentary, what can I say and when I wrote this I had seen something about human trafficking. Gruesome business and one that I hope never touches my life. It never ceases to amaze me how horrible human beings can be to one another. Thanks again.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 11
Damn, you're cranking up the tension big time now...I was wondering what was going to happen about the other hunters trying to take Ben away from Dean - although I can't see him letting them...
Author's Response: I don't think Dean would let them either but kids can be unpredistable and stupid in their understanding of safety. Thanks for the continued reading and reviewing. You make me smile as I sneak onto the site at work.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 10
Great action chapter...edge of my seat AGAIN...moving on...
Author's Response: You're going to fall off that seat if you move any closer to the edge. Glad you are enjoying! Thanks again.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 9
And there was me, looking for the supernatural plot line and you've delivered big time. Nice cliffy by the way, I do love a cliffy...but only when there is another chapter to go straight on to...lol
Author's Response: I couldn't write a story based in Supernatural without introducing at least a little of the supernatural into it. Thanks again. I really can't express how much I appreciate those who read and review.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 8
This was a great chapter. I like the way you're taking specific events and building a chapter round them, and Sam did a great job with Ben here... ...I was a paediatric oncology nurse for a good few years before doing what I do now, and I remember conversations just like this...sounds like you write from experience...
Author's Response: I little bit of medical experience (very little) and a whole lotta research plus I'm rather good at BSing anything. I have lots of experience explaining things to kids since I have three so I just pretend I'm explaining it all to one of them. I really appreciate the kind words and you reading my story.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 13
Didn't expect the story to take this direction but you've handled the sensitive material well. *remove hand from eyes* *read* *place hand over mouth* *repeat* its beginning to be a mantra. Dean is handling things remarkably. Sure hope it turns out to be supernatural.....at least then I can sleep at night. People? They are truly evil!
Author's Response: I think people are far scarier than anything Supernatural. Sorry if this was too much sometimes stories take on a life of their own. Thanks so much for reading and for the great review.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 2
Did I say didn't appeal....hm... can't remember why. Great story, I"m officially hooked - K
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like it! I think everything is a matter of perspective and with the heavyhanded way that they handled the introduction of Ben (his age alone should've been enough to alert Dean to the possibility that the boy was his) I can understand why so many people didn't like the idea of Ben. I hope you continue enjoy. Thanks again.
Reviewer: brat713 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 16
This is such an awesome story. Any chance you'll be writing a sequel?
Author's Response: I don'tknow about a sequel. I'm writing another story right now that I should be posting on here soon and it's kicking my bootie. Thanks for the reading and the kind review.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 16
All i got to say is that is 6 kinds of awesome.
Author's Response: Wow, you finished it. Thanks alot, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 7
...and now you are writing chapters that make me sad one minute at yet another lost childhood, and then laugh out loud the next...great descriptions, again beautifully written... ...and now I need to go make tea, will resume mammoth read tomorrow...can't wait...
Author's Response: Thank you so much. The entire story such be up by tomorrow. I hope you like it all.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay I have to admit I'm thrilled to see you and this story on the featured. After doing such a terrific job on Ghost, you deserve it. I'm normally not a fan of Dean as a Dad stories but this one's got me hooked. Thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that was one of the most flattering things you could have said to me. I know there are a lot of people who don't like Dean as a dad stores (including funny enough - myself) but I do think the idea as plot device works. I think watching Dean and Sam with kids tells more about them and how they were raised than falsebacks. I was floored when I got featured so I'm trilled too. Thanks for reading (even a story that didn't appeal to you) and for reviewing.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 6
And now Bobby's in the mix...one of my all time fav. characters..didn't think this could get any better but it just did...
Author's Response: Love Bobby too. I usually have him in each of my stories even if just a little bit. I think the boys need a sounding board besides just each other. Thanks again.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 5
Speechless...well almost, this plot is hotting up and I'm physically sitting on the edge of my seat here... Moving on straight away...
Author's Response: The edge of the seat is good. Hope it continues to work well for you. I went into a weird place later on and it makes me nervous as people read. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 4
Speaking as someone who lost their dad a few years ago...you just took me right back there. Out of all the fanfic I have read on this site (and many others) this has got to be one of the most personal and emotional stories out there...and very real, almost nothing supernatural as yet, just concentrating on the boys and Dean's relationship with his new son...although I've got a feeling the supernatural element will be gracing this story very soon... Just beautiful... moving on...
Author's Response: I hope it's good memories that are coming to you and not bad. I have a great relationship with my dad but I've been watching him battle cancer for about 5 years now. He's doing great and still going strong. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 3
Okay, more kleenex required...moving on to next chapter...*sniff*
Author's Response: I made you cry....that feels good (for me at least). Thanks again.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 2
Damn, this is good - I agree with you, Dean and children go sooo well together, he's a born parent. You've written this so beautifully and in such a very real way, I can see the emotion unfolding on the screen as I go...this is a great read!! Moving on...
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are enjoying it. Thanks for reading and the great reviews.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great first chapter Kim, I'm moving on straight away...you have me hooked on this story, and beautifully written by the way, love your style!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 12
I've been reading this as I validate, and wanted to say that you've caught me up in the story. I suspect by the way you write Ben that you have children, or are at least close to a child, so I think that where you're planning to take this story will only amp up the angst factor for what Dean is going through. I decided to Feature it because I wanted others to be able to see what they've been missing. It deserves a bit of a spotlight. Thanks for writing. Gaelic
Author's Response: I do have a son. He's twelve and just as much of a handle full that I suspect Ben would have been had they continued the character in the show. My son has a mohawk and the personality to go with it. Things are going to get much nastier before they get batter. You flater me terribly and I am so honored. I love this site because I know that people are actually looking at what is being read. I have several storied posted in ff.net but there it's hit and miss on whether people will see your writing or not. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 4
I just came across this stroy and I wanted to tell you how much I really enjoy this so far. I always wondered how it would be like if Dean was Ben's father. I like the way this story is written. love the way you portray the judge. I will be away for a long weekend and I am really looking forward to reading the other chapters when I return. Great work so far, thank you for sharing this with us.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I wondered that as soon as I became spoiled for the new season and knew there was a possibility. I love the idea of learning how Sam and Dean were raised by watching raise and clash over a child. Won't ever happen but it would be cool to see. Thanks again.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 12
wow! more please....
Author's Response: Life got in the way yesterday, I'm putting more up as soon as I'm done replying to reviews. Thanks again!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 10
great idea to have Dean suspended in air with flashbacks of the demon. I was wondering when Ben would start calling him dad...
Author's Response: I purposely dragged out the name change for a while. I didn't think it was something that any child would jump into imediately. I felt there had to be some sort of catalyst. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Katric (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 12
Just finished Chap. 12, and geez...my heart is pounding. Your descriptions of the events, all happening so fast, and the emotions of the Winchesters, so spot-on, it's an adrenaline rush...
Author's Response: Wow, that review was an adrealine rush. Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it. There are just a few more chapters and they will hopefully be up tomorrow.
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