Reviewer: lkapp (Signed) · Date: 11/03/09 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 2
I think these are great. I can't really tell that English is your second language. I don't think that I could sum up each episode in four lines, but you did a great job.
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 2
Awesome Fredo!!! I'll be expecting one for season three.... paranoid and mandroid ~ LOL!!!
Author's Response: thanks lisa!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 2
Spectacular! Your series 2 wrap up as original and as creative as your first. I laughed, cried and sighed as I relived each eppy in fast forward - your detail was amazing considering each eppy is summed up in only 4 rhyming sentences!! You captured the fun factor with your humour and the serious side with your succinct description. Fan-freakin-tastic!! Your final two verses were just magic, so spot on in that I caught my breath with the imagery they conjured up. Clever concept, clever writing! Love ya work!!
Author's Response: love your review! Didn't think i would have such a great response for this little thing, thank you very much!
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
yet another great trip down memory lain! I laughed, I cried, I sighed it was like watching the whole season over again...come to think of it I think I will lol! Bien fait ma cocotte! Tu vas en faireun pour saison 3 jusqu'a date?
Author's Response: Merci poulette! Je vais attendre un peu pour la saison 3, at least to see if there's gonna be more then twelve episodes. Though a short season would make it easier... But no no no, i prefer to do 22 verses, even if it's more difficult!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
This was really spectacular! Every paragraph summed up that particular show perfectly! Very well done! ~Kayla
Author's Response: thank you so much Kayla, i'm still surprised that something with absolutely no plot or intrigue got such a great response, happy me!
Reviewer: Zoey (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
absolutely too cool! Loved it, very nice, smart and funny, sad and incredibly original.
Author's Response: thank you Zoey, that's a review i could read over and over again!
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 2
fredo, these are wonderful. Crystal
Author's Response: again, thank you very much for the kind words.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
A SWAT team and a guy a bit paranoid, Are we really sure there’s no such thing as a mandroid? I just can't help but laugh everytime I read these lines.. Great job Fredo, and I look forward to more of your work ;)
Author's Response: hehehe, at least you're straight-line as you laughed over it since the very first time you read it! Thanks for everything Kel, and if i try anything else you'll know for sure as i need you to correct my hundreds errors!...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 2
This is just so clever fredo. I'm in awe of your talent! Great job!
Author's Response: well, we're even then as i so much loved your poem! I'd even say that it is your work which gave me the envy to try a little poetry myself, so thank you!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 2
Another strong poem Fredo, love the way you ended this. He’s right, we’ve got work to do... great work hun:) Schelz
Author's Response: thanks Schelz, took great pleasure to write it.
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
This rocks!!! I love how it goes back and from Sam to Dean's perspective. So clever how you wrapped up the whole season using poetry. Excellent work Fredo! Schelz
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great job. I really like this series. Too bad we have to wait until the end of season 3 for the next.
Author's Response: yeah well, don't say it too loud, the season could be over in february..:( Thanks for the R&R.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
oh Fredo, this is just fab full of laughs and tears. You're so clever! Thanks! Bev xx
Author's Response: thank you so much, i was so hesitant to post, finally happy i did it!
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
Fredo. This is really good I can't believe you found rhymes for words likw Wendigo!! Liked verse 5 about the plane especially so funny as was scaredy cat Dean in the episode. Gosh I sooo wanted to go hold his hand and hum with him! And the verse 10 - about Mary. Well my eyes prickled with tears there! You caught Dean's pain at his Dad ignoring his plea for help and his joy at Sam seeing Mary so well. So just when I thought I'd got through without crying you got me with the 'Dean probably has the most devils' and 'I'm proud of you' lines at the end. Loved in going for Chapter two now! Tres Bon! Bev xx
Author's Response: thank you so much for the long and detailed review.
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 2
Fredo, I LOVE IT! Wonderful how you switch between Sam's and Dean's POV. "The easy way is not where he goes" "He's right, we've got work to do".... So many lines I'd like to quote. Spot on, touching! Vielen Dank! You should post more often, you do a great job! Take care, Dagmar :)
Author's Response: thanks again Dagmar for reading and reviewing. See you soon for our little SPN marathon...
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very nice. Indeed it was a trip down memory lane.
Author's Response: well, i think deserving a "very nice" from the poetry pro is pretty good, thanks...
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, a trip down memory lane in a poem! How original. Loved how each verse was dedicated to an eppy and how you continually switched the boy's pov. It's tricky to write poetry - to do it in a second language is exceptional! fantastic work. Looking forward to Season 2!!
Author's Response: well, thank you Petra for reading and reviewing. Like to see words like exceptional and fantastic related to my work, lol!
Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh Fredo, this is great! Awesome job! I love how you go through all the episiodes. Very touching, very well written verses. Thank you and also thanks to Kel! You guys rock!!! It was wonderful seeing you yesterday! Keep it up girl! Merci!!! Hug, Dagmar
Author's Response: hey yeah, we had a great sunday! Thanks for the review, happy you liked my little original experience...
Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
hey fredo!!! very cool!! loved this little trip down memory lane!! excellent job with your poem!! loved it!! bambers;)
Author's Response: thank you so much B, that's a lot of exclamation marks!!!
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
WOW....Very well done.
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
FREDO!!!!!! I dub thee Queen of Poetry!!! This was AWESOME!! I was so thrilled when I saw that you had posted! I had to break my exam lock down to read it -and-.... WOW! This is totally cool. It makes me want to try to dust off my French so I can read some of what you write in French! I love how you have a stanza for each episode - I love how you manage to go back and forth with the POV, I love how you have both angst and humour here. Loved the rhme of decoration and frustration in the Benders.... and exorcism with aneurism - LOL!!! I can't wait for season 2.....
Author's Response: wow Lisa, that's one enthousiastic review, thank you so much! But tell me again, what did you love...? lol:)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it Fredo, and I'm thrilled you decided to post...Kel
Author's Response: Posted thanks to you my friend!
Reviewer: lostatc (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was amazingly done. I was just watchin some of season 1 last night so I really loved every minute. And how true and sad, "What's worse the words that condemn him are, 'I'm proud of you.'" Great poem and great ending! I can't believe English isn't your native language.
Author's Response: wow Kim, thanks for the sweet words, even more appreciated when coming from an author i enjoy.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
very nice Fredo! loyd of funny dean lines there! I loved the way you switched back and forth between pov's with each epi! It was a great way to relive the first season! Can't wait for season two in poetry!
Author's Response: Merci poulette! Wanted to do something original...
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
Fredo, this is sooo cool. I love it. Crystal
Author's Response: Thank you Crystal.
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