Reviewer: Skysalla (Signed) · Date: 17/10/09 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
Hahahahahahahahahaha! Oh, Schelz. Why don't you ever pimp your fics at me. You're far too humble, cause this was awesome. Poor boys. Like Dean said, they're Winchesters...so they may be able to pick up any chick, but the luck counter acts that. XD
Author's Response: =) Darkness!! You're awesome! Thanks for stopping by and letting me know it was worth it! I'm all lkfnsklngiaog after reading this. Hahahaha I wish I could bring myself to pimp my stories, but it does feel SO much better to get a review out of the blue! <333
Reviewer: soncnica (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
"What are you talking about? You don’t need luck, you’re a Winchester. Just give her those puppy dog eyes and she’ll be ripping your clothes off." erm....*giggles* You know!? when I read that Sam started to choke I really thought that the girl was a witch or something! LOL "Oh my god, I can’t breathe." Sam cried. Me too.....rofl!!! damn, girl, you're good with this comedy stuff! ahaha, Dean could get any woman, even a man! ahahhaa :))) S.
Author's Response: So many reviews from you in one day, I'm stoked! This was my first attempt at humour and again, one of my oldest stories. LOL I'm really glad you enjoyed this and was able to share my sense of humour. Thanks for the review hun! <3
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/09 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
Aw oh my gosh! Ahahahahahaha! That was great!!!!!! :'D
Author's Response: :D Thanks Ashon, glad you enjoyed this little fic of mine. It's one of my earlier attempts, so it's nice to have a reason to revisit. Schelz x
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 20/03/08 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
LMAO!!!!!..... NO, NO STILL GOING.... HOLDING SIDES.... AHHH Painfully funny!!!! Quite literally tears with the way you built it up and weaved your story. So many winning lines in this - can't do more than continue to giggle right now - thumbs up... one of my favorite Dean moves!!! LOL (there I go again!!!). SOOOO Enjoyed this. Thank you for the laugh!!!!
Author's Response: Hehe, so glad to have made you laugh! thanks for finding it funny;) ta for the compliments and thumbs up!!! Thanks for the stars too, made my day! Schelz
Reviewer: Huey Riley (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
That is freakin' nasty but the best read!!! Your humor is out of this world, I had to get up off my seat to avoid falling off it. LOL The one liners are brilliant, this situation you put them in is great. You showed you can write whatever you want and still keep Sam and Dean's characters the same which I think is hard not to stray from who they are when writing, but you didn't stray. I'd probably die from bustin a gut if Kripke ever had the guys do this because imagining it was killing my stomach muscles, in front of my eyes would finish me. I definitely want to read more of your work Schelz.
Author's Response: Hahahahaha. Thanks Corey, glad you liked my humor! Very happy that you liked the one liners. I have a pin near by to pop my head when it gets too big, thank you so much for saying I didn't stray from their characters. Ok so now my head aint gonna be able to fit through my door, i'm excited that you want to read more of my work! Lovely stars hun, ta. Schelz x x
Reviewer: Pandemonium (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
sorry its me again fantasy, I just peeped your notes saying it was your first stab at humour: You definately nailed it, I think it takes a great amount of talent to be able to write humor and trust me I am speaking from experience (funny in real life but cant translate in my writing) humor has got to be one of the hardest genres to achieve and you did it effortlessly. When I catch my breath and my stomach ache from laughing to hard subsides, I might risk a heart attack and come read it again. GOD BLESS Kaide xxx
Author's Response: Two reviews??! Ta hun;) No need for sorry, feel free to keep coming back;) thanks again. Whoa!! I agree that comedy is hard to write so it means loads that you think I did it effortlessly. hahahahahahahahaha nice to know its good enough to risk a heart attack. Schelz
Reviewer: Pandemonium (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
This is a DYNAMITE piece of work and I'm kinda glad it was only one chapter long because I damn nearly pee'd me pants with this one. You totally got the boys down pat. Totally Dean - 'ready to get that chasitity belt of yours off?' Sooo Dean. Dean nudged Sam playfully. "Sam, take a walk on the wild side eh? Live dangerously for once." "Gee, there I was thinking I already lived a dangerously life. How silly of me." Sam said sarcastically. Loved this part !!!! What really had my eyes watering, was when Dean decided to play hero and save Sam from chick Jaime!!! "Wow what big hands you have?" OMG! Could you be more funny???? YES.. The best part in this whole brilliant and extrodinary piece.. Sam taking the piss out of Dean non-stop the way you did it is something I would want to see in the show. The last part, the final straw that broke me and made me feel like I had done a hundred sit ups. --"From now on I'm doing Adam checks." I applaud you loudly for this and now I definately have to read all your other stories. GOD BLESS Kaide xxx
Author's Response: WOW!!!!! So sorry for the late response. Where do I start? Thank you for calling my work Dynamite. You nearly peeing your pants is a compliment to me;) thanks for saying I got the boys down and for pointing out all the parts that worked for you. I can hear the applaus *takes a humble bow* thanks soo much for the stars on top of your ace review! Schelz
Reviewer: Pooka Bunny (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
I loved this story soooo much!! I couldn't stop laughing!! Great read! Loved how u had Sam laughing his head off!! HaHa:D ~Ashy~
Author's Response: Hey sweet Ash. I'm soo thrilled you loved this and it made you laugh. Glad you found it to be a great read and ejoyed Sam laughing his head off;) Schelz | |
Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
You should have dozens of reviews for this. I just loved it to bits. What big hands you have.....hilarious and the chastity belt line was the killer for me. Dru, again.
Author's Response: Another one, how lovely of you:) for a one shot I am shocked how many reviews it already has. Glad you found it so darn funny hun. Love the stars Schelz | |
Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
Hey Fantasy I must start by telling you, I only signed up after I read this and this is my first review. This has got to be the funniest thing I have ever read. The onliners had me choking for air, Dean being in a situation he put himself in is hilarious. Work of a genius, you should dozens of reviews for this. ROCK ON!!! Dru
Author's Response: WOW, totally gobsmacked...thanks sooo very much, welcome to the site. My head is getting too big, hold on lemme just try to deflate....no such luck, maybe later. Anyways, thanks, glad you liked my one liners, love reviews that consist of genius...I am very grateful for the reviews I already have, though I'd always welcome more. Its nice enough that you think it deserves more:) ROCK ON DRU!!! Schelz | |
Reviewer: dookie (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
LOL ! nice one
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Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
LOL!! NOW THAT WAS HILARIOUS!! OH MY GOSH!! HAHAHAHAHHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!! I CANT BREATHE!!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it, that all I need to make me smile:) Schelz | |
Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
schelz man this is FREKIN AWESOME. my sides was splitting i thort it was great. wen sam realised the truth and didn't tell dean was was great. and then wen dean started to notice little bit's was real funny bcoz dean was there thinkin he could do a beta job then sam. but to his disgust he does pull but he get a big sand paper hand with an adams apple. instead of a beautiful blond. cracking story schel. i like the that you are versatile you can write anything. and once you can do that your half way there. good work schelz you had me going. 2 THUMBS UP. agoldenrose.XxXx
Author's Response: Thanks for the cracking review hun:) Makes me smile...I'm glad you found this so funny, I am sooo happy you think I'm versatile. Schelz | |
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
OK... I'm still laughing at this one. The one liners were out of this world. You have the Sam and Dean banter down pat. Gee....Dean trying to set Sammy up....too funny...especially when he gets the "girl".....I'm laughing again. I can picture Dean's face when he saw the "Adams Apple" on this woman. You did an AWESOME job !!!!!! Thanks for sharing this - I needed a good laugh, and I'm still chuckling every time i think about it. BRAVO!!!
Author's Response: Wow!!! I am delighted to get such wonderful stars from you and a nice chunky review:) Glad you liked the one liners so much, just floating on air right now. I have a grin bigger than my head reading this, glad to know you found it so funny. Happy to share and happy this gave you the laugh you needed. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Makoto Kou (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
Schelz, my mom told me i HAD to read your story. I was falling out of my chair laughing it was so funny. Thanks for making mom (Crys) smile. ~Mako~
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks Courtney:) I am glad you found it funny. I am so glad I was able to make Crys smile, your mum is lovely women and I'm glad I know her. Tell Crys I said thanks for recommending my story to you. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
How freakin' funny was that?!?!?! I loved it!! What an absolute gem! Clever, well written, hilarious *hiccup* Your dialogue and portrayal of the boys personalities was so true to Sam and Dean that it could have come straight out of Kripke's team. Purple Nurples? Kill me now!! Your oneliners was awesome! Two of my favs - "You ready to take that chastity belt of your off?" What a classic! Pure Dean! And this is just the best -"Just be yourself with a bit of me" Tooo funny, gotta love that Dean charm!! Big hands..."all the better to feel you with" I laughed harder than Sammy here! Dean, upstairs brain!!!!!! Schelz, you are a legend and this work of yours is priceless. Great work! Please pass on my congrats to Lou for that banner, Sam's face just perfect for this story!! ...and I'm a Leo!!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow Pet:) Where to start with this...you write such beautiful reviews that makes my smile wider than cheshire cat. lol First of all I am so thrilled you thought this was true to Sam and Dean characters. I am just floating on air right now, I can't thank you enough for saying this could've come straight from the Kripke team. Glad you liked my one liners, the chastity belt line is one of my favs too, gotta love the Dean charm. lol This review is going to have me on a high for weeks to come, thank you sooo much Petra:) Oops, a Leo...Bev had my head earlier for that one. lol Schelz | |
Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
LMAO!!!!!!!!!! FREAKING HILARIOUS! GENIUS! PURE GENIUS!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks a whole heap Gyspyw1. I am so happy to get this review, touched by your compliment. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Freedom (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
I'm speechless, you've outdone yourself here, really really funny. I haven't laughed so hard in a while, fantastic writing, and ridiculously funny when Sam got into the car and teased the hell out of Dean. Excellent one-shot, first attempt at humour? Nailed it! Freedom
Author's Response: Thanks for a really sweet review, makes me extra happy to know I have succeeded being funny aswell as all the emotional stuff I usually write. Thrilled you think I nailed it. Schelz | |
Reviewer: kitten25 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
Hilarious stuff, Its taken me half an hour to calm down so I can write this...genius, girl your mighty talented, you've made me cry, get angry and now you're making me laugh. Wicked. 10/10 Kitten:)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the top rating, I am really glad you found it so funny. I am extra happy that you feel I can take you through all the emotions. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Eternity12 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
omg that was hilarious, have tears in my eyes! "what big hands you have" AHAHAHAAHAHAHAAHAAHAHAHA oh god your a genius.
Author's Response: You're the sweetest, thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I am so glad you found it funny. Feels great to know it had you in tears of laughter. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
Hilarious! When I realized what he/she was I almost died!
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks alot Shannon, glad it was funny and thanks for reading. Schelz | |
Reviewer: eye4u (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
Ahahaha! Funny story!!! Dean's desperation on getting Sam laid almost put them to their misery! hahaha! Thanks for writing this! Kudos!
Author's Response: Thanks alot eye4u, glad you found it funny and thanks for reading. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
hehehe Yikes! What a surprise for Dean.
Author's Response: I know, I can just imagine Dean in that situation acting exactly how I wrote it. Thanks for reading and reviewing hun. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
This is a really funny story, i hope it doesnt really happen to them. But i guess that Sam needed a laugh.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review hun, I don't know...if it happened, wouldn't be so bad would it? Teach our Dean an idy bidy lesson, plus it would really funny. Schelz | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 1- Zodiac
Your on my favorites, I get a email ever time you have something new. Loved this. This was sooooooo funny, I was laughing every few lines when they were in the bar. I couldn't breath, my belly was hurting, especially when Sam was teasing him in the car. Excellent work, you're a real talent. Suga
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, really glad you liked it and thanks for the shout box shout out! Schelz | |
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