Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oh wow, the whole part with Dean hanging to the railing and holding on to Sam...was brilliant! I loved it all, I think I was even biting my nails..*looks down at nails*..yep, sure was.. ;P
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 28/01/09 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh jeez!!!!!
Reviewer: Gumnut (Signed) · Date: 31/03/08 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow, this one came across as clear as a bell. I could see that haunted house on the hill, the town taken by time and the characters were highly developed. I particularly liked Kelly - finally someone that Sam has to look up too :D And yes, can you tell I've been going through your stuff? :D It's always great to have an author I know writes exactly what I love to read and have a backlog of stuff just waiting for me :D Thanks heaps for writing and sharing. I thoroughly enjoyed this. Nutty
(PS: write more :D)
Author's Response: HI! Thanks so much for reading! I am so happy to see you wandering around in there and even MORE so that you enjoyed this one. It was my first zine story, so I was nervous about a great many things, but I think it came together in the end. I'm really glad it entertaing you. I'm writing more, I promise. Working on finishing In the Light, have a couple more zines up my sleeve, and a few ideas for random fic. I feel like floodgates have torn loose and I'm really excited. Now... if only I can find that elusive thing called time... GS
Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 16/03/08 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 3
another great story. good one liners; so Dean. love the lines "He fought the urge to hide behind Dean" and "Don't anger the bear Sammy" to funny. keep up the great writing. Renee
Author's Response: Hey Renee -- thanks so much for reading and taking time to review. :) I loved the image of Sam stepping behind Dean for protection. Partly because it would be instinctive as the little brother, but also because were he to do it, it would look so funny being a head taller than his protector. :) Hee. Thanks again and I'm so happy you enjoyed this story. :) Best, Gaelic
Reviewer: teneniel2 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 3
Numb hiney, dry eyes, headache......all the symptoms of a great story that wouldn't let me leave my seat until I was finished! Whew! Excellent from start to finish!
Author's Response: LOL! That made me laugh. :) I'm thrilled that this story captured you -- thanks so much for taking time to review and letting me know you enjoyed. Sorry about the numb hiney. Sorta. ;) Gaelic
Reviewer: teneniel2 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 2
OMG! This chapter was freakin' awesome! Talk about suspense and drama and angst! Wow! I want you to know I gauge the intensity of a story by how much of my thumbnail I've got left. Raising thumb up to eyes... Yep, it was great. Nothing left of the nail!
Author's Response: Poor nails!! But yay! That you liked it so much! There was a lot in this chapter -- it was one of my favorite parts to write. :) Thanks for reviewing! GS
Reviewer: teneniel2 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow!! What a totally creepy chapter! Almost raised the hairs on the back of my neck. BTW, I LOVE long chapters!
Author's Response: *grin* I'm glad you like long chapters because I seem to have a hard time writing anything else. This was actually my first zine story, and I had to break it up to post it here. I probably could have shortened the chapter, but... well, it worked for you, so that's what matters. :) Thanks for reading! Gaelic
Reviewer: ladyinwhite (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 3
I enjoyed reading this story. It was very interesting. I like to read storys about ghosts and haunted towns. How the boys defeated the ghost and saved the town, did a great job.
Author's Response: Hi Jennifer -- thanks so much for reading and taking a moment to review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Gaelic
Reviewer: downbythebay (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 3
Yay for the boys! In excellent form as always.
Author's Response: Hi! Who's in excellent form -- me or the boys? ;) Just kidding! The boys are ALWAYS in excellent form... *grin* Thanks so much for reading and letting me know. Love to hear from you. Gaelic
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Go Kelly, I knew I liked him, the big bear of a man...oooh. This has been a great ride, plenty of action, poor Dean in bits again...and I have to say it's rare for a scene to reduce me to a jibbering wreck but Sam placing his hand on Dean's heart to ward off the nightmare...beautiful, and reduced me to tears. The nightmare theme is a recurrent one for you and you write it so well. Altogether a beautiful well crafted story that I was sad to leave at the end of each chapter...and that has to mean something. ...and I haven't listened to 'Friends' in years, must rectify that immediately... Thanks for the great read...
Author's Response: AH, Friends is truly inspired. There are times when I pick apart lyrics to a Zeppelin tune and am transported. :) As for nightmare themes... they say to write what you know and nightmares and music are constants for many of us... I'm so pleased you liked Sam's method of calming Dean. I saw it really clear in my mind and am glad it worked for you. Thanks again for your wonderful feedback. You keep me wanting to tell more stories. Gaelic
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 01/01/08 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
For something that was written so long ago it's uncanny that you managed to reference so many future plots from the show... When Sillas uttered 'you'd trade anything to save him'...I had a shiver run up my spine. I think you must have been channelling someone when you wrote this. I loved John being a Hendrix fan, that fit's well with me and the 'high frequency' allowing spirit communication, again very believable. And great action scenes, as always I found myself reading faster and faster as the scene increased in pace... ..and the last few lines were heartbreaking. Another great chapter...roll on tomorrow for chapter 3 finale!
Author's Response: I chuckled to myself of a few lines in this -- as I told SJ below, I wrote it right after Croatoan, and based a lot of my references to the "deal" on how I reacted to what John had done to/for Dean. I also set it in Wyoming simply because I'd been there before... so when AHBL aired I blinked in surprise. My Dad used to listen to Jimi when he worked on cars. I could totally seeing John doing the same thing while he worked on his guns. I am glad you liked that touch. :) Gaelic
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 31/12/07 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
Got to say you set this at exactly the right time during the second season for me. The repair of the car and Dean going through the torment of adjusting to his dad's sacrifice is probably still one of my favourite periods of the show. And once again those small but oh so significant details are what makes this a step above the rest - how right that Sam wouldn't be able to even smell coffee without it reminding him of 'that' hospital scene. Every time I read something from you I find myself trying to analyse how you manage to include just enough detail to make the story compulsive but still leave space for the readers imagination. Still haven't figured out how you do it but although each chapter is quite long, there is nothing prosaic or redundant. One of my favourit lines...bringing death and peace...that's the Winchesters all over....its a very insightful line. I'm going to try to read chapter 2 tomorrow or the next day...looking forward to it already...and how did you know Hair of the dog was my ring tone?
Author's Response: Hey Louy -- so sorry it took me so long to reply to your lovely reviews! They each made my day when I got them -- it's funny how you always think you're going to have so much time around the holidays... *silly Gaelic* The beginning of Season 2 can still twist me up inside, even though I know (or maybe *because* I know) what happens... So, thank you for your comments on the setting of the story. When I read good writing, I love the little details that just set me in the moment, make me forget where I am for a short time. I try to emulate that with these stories, and I'm glad it works gor you. My Dad was a follower of westerns -- as was his father before him. The Winchester rifle was described that way (bringing death and peace) in a Zane Gray or Louis L'Amore book somewhere once and it stuck with me. So glad you liked this -- off to reply to the rest! Slainte, Gaelic
Reviewer: ladyinwhite (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good story so far I am liking what I'm reading. The story has the creepy Supernatural feel to it, and I'm interested in seeing what happens to the mysterious town, and to the boys. keep up the great writing!
Author's Response: Thank you -- I appreciate you stopping by. Hope you continue to enjoy the story. GS
Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 30/12/07 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
good job can;t wait for more stories.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting -- there is more to come! GS
Reviewer: deanilove (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 3
your story was so intense, so heartbreaking. I had tears in my eyes while reading it. you showed really good how much Dean suffers...thank you so much for sharing this story with us! it´s definitely one of my favorites!
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for this! I am flattered that it's one of your favorites. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it and that you found it heartbreaking. Even though that sounds rather cruel. Ha. :) I hope to see you again sometime! Best, Gaelic
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
“I’m sorry Dad’s gone…but I’m not sorry you’re here.” How is it that Sam always seems to be able to sum up what’s really important? What Dean needs to hear. I love that you write them this close. I’m glad that Dean finally opened up to Sam about the dreams, but the revelation about why Dean keeps saying ‘don’t!’ at the ends of his nightmares…heartbreaking. So poignant and true in more ways than one. John always held Dean’s destruction or survival…and there was always such a thin line… Wonderful play off of the initials of Silas and Jenny Wells. That was haunting as all get out…can’t imagine what that was like for Dean. I can’t remember if you wrote this before or after the finale, but holy crap, I don’t remember this many parallels screaming at me. Must have been before. Silas beating the crap out of Dean, his saying that Dean hadn’t made any deals, and Dean saying not yet…creepy… I love when you have Sam sit with Dean as he sleeps, the hand over the heart…*sigh* The ending was wonderful, you have them captured perfectly as brothers, and well, Staind *laugh* Since your stories that band is in the official “Sam” playlist on my computer. Wonderful work, Gaelic. As always, looking forward to your next pieces. Especially “In the Light” Merry Christmas! -SJ
Author's Response: Yeah, I wrote this way before the finale. It was printed in May, and the due date was December... something, I can't remember now, but I started it during that LOOOONG break between Croatoan and Hunted. I love what you said about the thin line between destruction or survival that John was for Dean. God, that's just... perfectly put. Thanks so much for your insight, your words, your time, your reviews. I am honored to have someone of your caliber call my work "wonderful." Oh, yeah, and Staind... haha. I love those guys. :) GS
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
“I don’t know, Sam. He—he triggered me. Something about the way he…watched us. I wanted him to know who we were.” Loved that. So Dean Winchester. That was a very cute moment between Sam and Dean over the CPR. Could hear that one in my mind. Oh and have I told you lately what great taste in music you have *laugh* All Along the Watchtower…And how it made Dean think about his father…*Sigh* Love Dean quoting Tombstone. The scene with Silas and Dean talking about ‘deals’ is so…weird… in the light of what Dean did long after Crossroads. ‘A deal is a deal’ holds so much more weight now…and all those comments about Dean knowing that demons collect… “You know the price…” “I don’t give a sh--” “You will.” Again…Dean had no idea… Then the staircase, Sam hanging from Dean’s arm, ripping it from its socket, literally pulling Dean apart…Sam doesn’t realize the twisted other side and veracity to his own words: “Dean, I’m pulling you apart.” More than Sam will ever know… That scene with them at the end, Dean not letting Sam help him, Sam cradling him. Lump. Throat. Again, not sure you were going for this much foreshadowing, but Dean thanking Sam for not letting go, Sam saying he wouldn’t…now that the roles are reversed…Dean’s deal, Sam trying to save him…I can see the dialogue will still be the same…
Author's Response: I honestly had no idea how much foreshadowing there would be in this story. That sounded funny, but I think you know what I mean. Even the line in this section about there being a lot of demons in Wyoming had me laughing as I re-read because who knew that's where the Hell Gate would be... With the situations now reversed, guh. I have to kinda rub my heart on that one. All I know is, I hope Dean doesn't let go. And I actually fell in love with Dave's version of "Watchtower" first, THEN Jimi's, but you can never go wrong with a classic. :) I love that we click so well when it comes to music. GS
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
The line about Dean imagining that the shower washed away his scars…loved that the first time I read that, because I knew someone who said that to me once. Resonated in my memories, and it was a beautiful thought. It was also amazing to me how you put together a story between the lines of Crossroads and Croatoan. Dean heading ‘west’ being the prelude to his ‘Let’s go to Grand Canyon” Beer-on-fence conversation was very well received in my mind. “Rebuilding this car helped put Dean back together.” So very true. The whole town was creepy. And I know this woman has been freakin’ typecast, but Helena Bonham Carter, is Maxine in my mind. Silas is…well, he induces some strong dislike. Loved the fight scene, but you know me. *laugh* Dean’s dreams about the past, all of that culminating with the knowledge that his father burns for him, slamming into these painful and gut-wrenching nightmares. Poor guy. And after the fight…he can deny physical pain longer than the pain within it seems. Sometimes I wonder if he purposely fights as hard as he does to ignore those internal wounds. *laugh* Oh and nice place to break this story into the first part! Lucky for me I was able to keep reading when you showed this to me a while back. Poor boys…
Author's Response: Ooo -- HBC is perfect for Maxine! She wasn't who I pictured when I originally wrote this, but she totally fits. I actually had a real person in my mind -- large woman who was scary in size but gentle in nature. I love how easily you get subtleties. I wrote this last December -- soon after Croatoan aired, but before we knew what The Secret was. Final edits came to me after Hunted, so I was able to weave some of that knowledge into it, but I didn't change much. I'm so pleased that you're reading this again and leavin reviews. Your comments seriously light me up. :) GS
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 3
First off, I love the quote by clara. I come from a large family and I really connected with that, I may send that round to them all today with my christmas greeting. But so, onto the story. The tables turn and it's Sam protecting Dean, fabulous. And thank god for Kelly or I dread to think what would have happened, both down to the bare threads. Another jaw dropping, wincing moment for me as his shoulder was popped back in. I have this icky thing about joints and kneecaps so that was tummy wrenching to read. Beautifully written I was so there feeling Dean's pain and wiping away the trickling sweat. Poor boy!' Dean, ack don't you just want to smack him sometimes. So set in his determination to protect Sammy and leaving himself more vulnerable than ever, but it's also the trait I so love about him; devotion and utterly selfless. Thank god Sam came to the rescue and then there was the lovely tear jeking moment when Kelly saw his mum again and all forgiven. But my fav was back at the garage, closure and like you said it doesn't normally happen so that was rather cute and sweet and I think the boys both needed and deserved a 'kodak moment.' I really did enjoy this story, it held me in its grip from begining to end, but you know I always hate it when it ends, so roll on the next story! Jane :)
Author's Response: Did you end up sending out the quote? I am the oldest of 5 -- raised two of my sibs -- and I found that quote to be particularly true. :) I love Sam the most when he's on fire for his brother. When he's fighting for him, protecting him, fighting because of him -- I think that's why Season 3 Sam has actually appealed to me for the first time. Dean does so much, puts himself through so much, that when he's down, that's when Sam really shines. I'm glad you liked the bon voyage. I wanted someone to say "thanks" to them... even if they don't always know what to do with it. Next story is a-rollin'. I took some time off for the holidays, but am planning on starting chapter 1 of In the Light next week, while SJ and I also wrap up Bloody Sunday. Thanks so much for reading, Jane! You always bring a smile to my face. Gaelic
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 2
::takes a breath:: gosh that was relentless, my poor finger nails are pretty much gone. Fast paced, scary as hell, it had it all. Icky arm popping, yuk I could hear the pop. And there was I feeling sorry (yet enjoying, I know, bad me) Dean being blow up, then ya goes and really does the boy in. This was a very traumatic chapter, both physically and mentally for Dean. And poor Sam desperately wanting to be there for his bro, when he pulls him into his lap, I just wanted to cry. And it just got better, with Dean's inner torments filtering to the surface and you really have just drawn him to the very edge, the cracks are spreading out and he's gonna break. The demon wants Sam, so Dean wants out. No saving the town, in this one Sam comes first. A very exciting chapter, glad I waited for some peace and quiet to read it. Onwards to the next chappie, but a cuppa tea first, keep me from nibbling my nails Jane :)
Author's Response: Hi!! Okay, most sincere apologies for taking so long to reply to your lovely reviews. The holidays kept me away from my computer... but I'm here now and return bearing thanks for reading and taking time to review! I had a great time writing this story -- despite the trauma I put the boys through. It was the first I'd written for publication in a zine and I had no idea how to shorten a story or what to expect as a result. I'm SO pleased you enjoyed the events of this chapter. I tried to break it up so that something "significant" happened in each installment... this being the one (in my mind) with the greatest physical pain. Sorry about the nails... Gaelic
Reviewer: Arafel979 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow. Wonderful imagery in this story. I was so afraid Sam was going to let go and so relieved when he didn't, and in my mind's eye, I could literally see the big man carrying Dean's broken body out of the house. And the nightmare-Wow. Just wow. This was a great read.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for this!! I love that you commented on Kelly carrying Dean out of the house. Something about that image kinda pulled at my heart -- and I'm glad it resonated with you. Thanks so much for reading and taking time to comment. Best, GS
Reviewer: star76 (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hey Gaelic
I so meant to review this a chapter at a time as it was posted, but life kind of got in the way!! But, I loved it! When have I ever not loved something you've written?! So, here are a few brief points that I really liked.
The opening nightmare scene was so vividly real, I was definitely in the room with Sam and Dean watching it unfold.
Silas - That man is totally creepy.
"Just walk man. I'll keep you in a straight line". I don't know why I loved that phrase, but I do. I can truely picture Sam saying that to Dean at some point.
The automatic writing thing - even more creepy than Silas!!
Ouch, the staircase scene where Dean is holding onto Sam with his dislocated arm. I was cringing as I read that whole thing. Ouch again!
Aaaww, Sammy fixes the nightmare and is there holding onto Deans heart.
Wow, you have given us so much to look forward to - a new fic with Abe (I really enjoyed the brotherly dynamic you wrote in Ramble On), so can't wait for that to begin. And of course, there is still the epilogue to Sunday Bloody Sunday, what else could a girl ask for at Christmas??!!
Author's Response: STELLA! I am so sorry that it's taken me so long to reply to your lovely review. I hear you on the life getting in the way bit. I am so flattered that you liked this -- that you like my stories in general. Thanks for calling out the points that you enjoyed -- you know I love to see that. :) It validates the effort that's put into creating the story. So thank you thank you thank you! Work and other stuff has been on me lately (wrote three zine submission in a short amount of time and it kinda tapped me), so I'm going to take a wee break over Christmas, and then will jump into "In the Light" -- I truly hope you enjoy that. I'm going to let SJ drive the timing on the SBS epilogue. :) Thank you for taking time to read and leave comments. They truly are gold to me. Gaelic
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 3
What a gripping end to an amazing story. Thet got rid of Silas, freeing the town and his people. I loved Kelly and Maxine, there're wonderful characters. Dean opened up a little to Sam and one of the most poignant moment it's when Sam said to Dean: I can't take the weight from you but maybe I can help you carry it. I enjoyed this story start to end, Gaelicspirit you did an excellent work with this one.
Author's Response: Oceane -- thank you so much for reading! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. I had the stairway scene and the moment Sam saved Dean from his nightmare in my head from the time I started the story and found myself writing faster to get to those moments. :) Thank you for your lovely comments and I dearly hope I get to see you again. Slainte, Gaelic
Reviewer: britany k (Signed) · Date: 14/12/07 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 3
Gaelic, Very well done! I'm so glad that Kelly stepped up to the plate. I think he needed to, not only to help Sam and Dean but to save himself as well. I always felt that John ripped out part of Dean's heart with that deal and those wispered words. I know he did it to save him, that he did it out of love but it took Dean a long time to realize that for himself. John knew that Sam needed Dean, that in eachother they would find salvation. Once again you brought tears to my eyes when Sam covered Dean's heart with his hand. I love hows Sam's touch, presence or voice seem to ground Dean. Can't wait to read In the Light. I loved Ramble On and thought Abe was a great character. Until then. Have a great Holiday!
Author's Response: Brit -- thanks so much for your reviews! I'm with you, John knew that Sam needed Dean, but I still hurt for Dean through so much of Season 2. Not like it's stopped in Season 3, though! Ha! Thanks for your comments, and though it sounds evil, I'm glad I made you teary. Means I did my job. :) Merry Christmas! Gaelic
Reviewer: jane (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm like a fish around you, I just can't resist the hook! And this is a big one, has me good and proper, lots of intrigue to make me want to read even faster and get to the next chappie. But good things should be savoured so my own brakes are on. I have to say that I'm loving the banter in the hotel and the car with the boys, the Britney reference heehe. I was immediately transported to the Time Warpe Dance in the Rocky Horror Show when they walked into the hotel, you've got plenty of odd balls there to cover it well! And i really loved the descriptions of staff and decore. These townsfolk are certainly petrified by Wells and appear to have no will of their own, though from a personal viewpoint I'd like to say that I think 1962 is a jolly good vintage year and lots of nice people were born then ;) That aside, with the dreams and the ghost writing I'd rather like our boys to pack and head out of town as its not looking good and from lying on his back, which I imagine is where I will find Dean in chapter two, I'd say that they are definitely in a disadvataged position here. I'm worried!! And it's you, so I know that I should be very worried for our boys. *g Jane :)
Author's Response: Hey, what can I say... I love reeling you in. ;) I'm so glad you're enjoying this! I hope you have fun with the other two chapters as well. And yup, you're pretty spot on where you'll be finding Dean next chappie... but fear not. I love these boys too much to damage them TOO severely... As my hero, Dean must always be able to walk away... eventually. Now, I'm off to buy some soccer (er-football) jersey's for a certain someone's Christmas present... good thing he doesn't read these... Gaelic
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