Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 9 Redemption or Destruction?
BRAVO. Excelent chapter, loved to see Dean making the ultimate effort to save all of thembounding his heart to themand through all his virtues turning the ribbon on. Wait to help you with the nurse stuff.
Author's Response: Dean494. Hey thanks that's so nice of you to say that as it was a toughie to write. Dean has such a strong spirituality I think, hidden beneath a gorgeous badass exterior so I wanted to have him begin to understand that! And so pleased that you happy to come join the bandaging squad! Well gotta put him back together a bit now I think! last chapter soon! Bev xx
Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 9 Redemption or Destruction?
ooooh I'll help with the bandages! haha. very good, keep 'um coming! :)
Author's Response: Hey well with a penname like that I'd guess I could count you in Hunny! So long as you do them neat and tight though! Last chapter to come soon and I think you'll like it! Thanks for review love me a review! bev xx
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
That was excellent. I think you outdid yourself with that chapter. We had the angst, the snark, the story, Dean, Sam, Dean. Did I mention Dean? I can hardly wait. Hurry up and post your dear heart out!
Author's Response: Hey Hun Well thanks for that lovely review and glad it rang your bells. Just finishing chapter nine so will post it soon. And Dean? yup you mentioned him and boy is he worth mentioning! Beautiful huh? Bev xx
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 07/01/08 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
well you better post updates soon because i can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Hey Toots my you're forceful!! OK chapter nine nearly ready to roll!! Thanks for reviewing! Bev xx
Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
OUCH! GIRLFRIEND THIS CHAPTER IS ON FIRE AND DONT THINK IT CAN BE PUT OUT! I AGREE WITH EVERYONE, THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER YET. Oh by the way...I have a new e-mail address that you can reach me on now... justdru22@hotmail.com Cya evil queen! DRU
Author's Response: Dru. Ahhhhhhh! Bird luxuriates in the warm sweet afterglow of intense pleasure Hey hope chapter 9 doesn't dissappoint! Squeek! You are a top reviwer thanks Hun bev xx
Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 7 Angels and Daemons.
You sure know how to torture your readers dont you? They need to get to Dean or I'll have to kick Mickey's ass. Great chapter, never fail to please me! DRU
Author's Response: Dru Hunny Now come on admit it? A bit of torture is exquisite and I'm sure Mikey would adore it if you focussed your attentions to his ass! Doing Chapte 9 now and it's killing me! It's a beast but I'm hanging in there because you deserve the best! Stay with me Hun Love Bev x
Reviewer: alwaysateen (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
Finally Dean is free from his torturous captor! Ouf. I couldn't take anymore of this torture. I'm so happy the trio is reunited.
Author's Response: wow you read it all thank you! Ah! can't take anymore torture huh? Look it's only a teeysy bit more to come and it'd be a shame not to see it to the end now wouldn't it? Chapter 9 and prologue coming soon! Heheheheheheeh! Bev xx
Reviewer: alwaysateen (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Wow! What a great first chapter! I love it! I just found your story and I'm glad I did! Jo's touch in it is cool too. I like it that she's hunting with them and she's simply a friend.
Author's Response: Hey Hun, Thanks so much for your review and I'm glad you like it, I'm just approaching the end of it and I am quite pleased how it's gone so try some more! Jo, well I've always liked her so I thought I'd bring her in and see where it went! Hope to hear from you as to other chapters! Bev xx
Reviewer: angelica (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
stop it with these damn cliffhangers.omg you got me crying.ilove your story
Author's Response: Awh Sweetums, you have a good cry, here's a tissue for ya. Sorry 'bout the cliffhangers but it's kinda my style, I loves me a bit of tension - it's food for my tortured soul! Bit more to come yet too! Dry your eyes Hang in there - hum if it helps! Many thanks for reviewing - makes my day Bev xx
Reviewer: jeanne (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
Very intense! I'm with you. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Jeanne. Ah good I was hoping for tension, more of same still to come! Stay with me. Thanks V much for taking the time to review Bird x
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
 That chapter was the best yet!!! My heart is still pounding with this one. Good on Dean fighting Mickey for as long as his shattered body would allow. I can't wait for my Angels to take Mickey down!!! Poor Dean, I'm just glad they've finally got him back. He better be okay Aba or I won't be happy...now I know the freaky isn't going to give Dean up nice and easy like a good/bad little demon but as long as he gets a niiiice ass kicking somewhere in the next few chapters then I'll be happy! Fantastic stuff! You've had me hooked from the very first chapter and now have me under lock and key with this addition. Well done, you've got me desperate for more.
Bebg.
Author's Response: Hey My Bebg, Awh thank you so much,it was a hard chapter to write so I'm glad it's working for you. And too am I relieved that Sam and Jo have, at last, got to our broken and bloodied Dean! But you know Bebg? Mikey doesn't want to give up that beautiful green eyed boy and I'm worried he's gonna fight hard to keep him! So stay with me as it's not over til we have him safely tucked up! Your Aba xxxx
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
I am really happy for Sam has finally found Dean. Now the next step i guess should be that the Daemom is destroyed and sent back to hell, and not just that he should suffer in hell for what he has done to our poor Dean.....
Author's Response: Hey Hunny Thanks so much for reviewing I so appreciate it. Well yeah we need to address that daemon don't we and the Angels are on the case but ya know that Mikey is one bad guy and he so does not want to lose Dean so he's not gonna go down without a fight! More soon! bev xx
Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
Hi, yes I though the chapter worked well. I wish I could write but I can't. I do love reading these though. So thanks for posting and well done.
Author's Response: Hey Bunn-Kins Thanks you for taking the time to say that, it means a great deal to know people enjoy my stuff. And hey it took me ages to be brave enough to post and I still have huge angst about whether my scribbles are good enough , so why not try and write a little something as this is a wonderful supportive community of fellow SN enthusiasts to be involved with. Chapter 9 soon and hopefully a few tense moments still to come! Bev xx
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
Look at all those reviews Bev - told ya it was brill. :) I have loved every chapter so far and I keep thinking 'she can't possibly top this' but you proove me wrong every time. This chapter is the icing on the cake... I'm intregued to know how you plan on topping it in chapter 9 (and I know you will). Thanks for the read Merrie xxxx
Author's Response: Awh Merrie, that's so very kind of you, I'm humbled by your words, and delighted as you say by the reviews 'cause you know I just love reviews! Chapter 9 I hope has a twist or two still to deliver though, as Mikey is very attached to our beautiful broken boy and he is not ready to give up without a fight! Hang in there! Bev xxx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
Dean could feel hands touching him and though he knew intuitively that they were kinder than those of his most recent companion, they were awakening every one of the myriad and diverse agonies that were his reluctant guests currently and he wanted them to please stop! However, he could not seem to get his eyes to open to check who was feeling him up so painfully. He knew finding his voice was going to be a trial, so he settled for the most important word he could think of and started with that. ‘Sam?’ It was the merest hint of a whisper, but it stopped Sam in his tracks, halted the breath in his chest. ‘Dean!’ I think i like this part the best of all. Sam finally comes to the rescue!!!! Although i hope that Dean can be saved. By the extent of the injuries, it's one of the more serious he's ever had.... Onward to more writing please!!! :)
Author's Response: Muse. Thanks so much I so love a considered and detailed review. I like that bit a lot too. Dean has very few constants in his life to cling on to, but his love for Sam never wavers and I find that beautifully touching, hence if had only breath for one word I think it would be 'Sam' And yeah Dean is real poorly, and that Mikey so does not want to give up and lose him, but I'm gonna fight for him for ya! Next chapter soon and thanks so much for your ongoing reviewing it is much appreciated bev xx
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
Best chappy yet (and it's had some stiff competition, hun!) Lovin' your descriptions and the attention to detail when describing Dean's injuries - can't decide if it's genius or Munchausens by proxy ;) Can't wait for the angst-fest that will be chappy 9! Kirst xxx
Author's Response: Geekster. Phew - was a toughy as you know, but the special 'love' that only a lemur can afford carried me through. Oh and the name's France not Allitt so less of the MH by Proxy slurs - you and I both know it's just a rich and totally pervy imagination!) And yeah - (sweat, tremble!) let's try us some of that purdy angst!! Bev xx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
Fantastic chapter and beautifully written, told you there was nothing to worry about...lol I'm still completely wrapped up in this plot, and I'm so pleased they've found Dean, he's so broken awe...put him back together for me Bev, please !!!!
Author's Response: Bullet What can I say other than my 'Bullet fest' inspired me to aim for your high standards. And yeah I'm relieved we found our beautiful broken green eyed boy but ya know that Mikey so does not want to give him up and I'm having trouble restraining him!! Christo who knows what might occur! Bev xxxx
Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 04/01/08 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
I'm so glad they found Dean - now they need to get him to a hospital. Can't wait for the next chapter - gotta see what happens next.
Author's Response: Yeah me too Hun, poor boy's been through such a lot hasn't he! Funny thing though Mikey is really really reluctant to let him go, so who knows what might occur yet!! More soon promise! Thanks so much for taking the time to review, means a lot. Bird x
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
Bev, another great chapter. Finally the cavalry, now get that boy over here so we can get him fixed up. Crystal
Author's Response: Crystal. Aw thanks sweety! And yeah, course I'll bring him straight to yours for some much needed TLC, that is if that pesky Mikey hasn't got anything else in store for him????? See I can tease too!!! Heehee Bev xxx
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
OOOOh, I hope they can get the demon out of Michael and somehow put poor Dean back together. Love the old angel brothers!! great concept! I told a coworker (and SN fan) about how I was completely hooked on your story and the general premise. We both agreed.....you are so imaginative and creative to come up with a cool storyline like this!! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Hey Salty Wow thanks that's a real nice review, you are very kind and glad it's given you reason to talk SN with your colleague! I'm just now starting on chapter 9 to see if they can indeed save Michael and mend poor beautiful broken Dean! That Mikey though he so does not want to give either of them up! Bev xx
Reviewer: Rodymenia (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
I really am enjoying this story. I check it everyday. You did a good job with the characters. Roda
Author's Response: Roda. Hey thanks so much, check every day huh? Gosh I better get on and do ya some more then! Bird x
Reviewer: jp123 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
wow, amazing, loved it. poor Dean
Author's Response: Thanks JP123. Glad it's floating your boats and thanks for taking the time to say so. More soon! Bird x
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
It worked great. Michael almost finished the spell and the last paragraph describing Dean´s injuries was awesome. I love Dean´s defiance and strenght. I hope the angel´s can recover Michael. Please don´t take us in the dark too much......
Author's Response: Hey Hun. Oh good, and glad you enjoyed the description of Dean's poor beautiful broken body! I do love me a bit of damage and pain! His strength is awesome to me so I'm glad it shines through for you. So let me go see we have managed to knock the fight out of Mikey or might he have an ace up his sleeve yet? Thanks so much for reviewing. Means a lit. Bev xx
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
It works - sometimes chapters that are hard fought to write come out just fine!
Author's Response: Ah, sighs with relief as it was a bit of a toughy! Better write a bit more then! Bird x
Reviewer: jensenluva28 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
i loved it! hurry cant wait for the next chapter...:)
Author's Response: Hey thanks, love to know it's hitting the mark and yup next chappie soon!! Bird x
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