Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy!
i am still crying! that was excellent. Eric Kripke needs to use some of the stories on this site; especially yours.
Author's Response: Awh Hunny here's a tissue for those tears! Thank you for your very kind words and I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. And yeah I agree there are so many fantastic stories on the site that I struggle to read them all. Re: Kripke - Wow if only huh! Hey if ya see him mention me I wouldn't mind!!! hahahahhahah! Bev xx
Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy!
I MEAN COME ON. DOES IT GET ANY BETTER THAN THIS? FANTASTIQUE!!! ANGELS ROCKED MY HEAVEN THAT'S FOR SURE. ALL YOUR STORY WAS MISSING WAS ME BEV. HEHEHEHE SERIOUSLY, THIS STORY WAS GREAT FROM THE START. THE END WAS MAGICAL WITH SAM AND DEAN MOMENT. YOU ROCK!!!!!!!! DRY- BABY
Author's Response: Dru-Baby! Heehee, not a total pile of poo then! Gotta love those angels huh? So you wanna be in next one huh? And Cody-Lyn too? Now would you be the black leather clad vampire hunter chick with her fearless attack dog companion? or the sweet innocent chicky and her puppy who needs saving from the nasty monsters?? Better let me know don't wanna write ya wrong! Thanks Hun, loved you reviews Bev xxx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy!
A sequel? Hell yeah! Does that tell you I loved it?! I'll bet if Uri lived today he'd ride a Harley! ;-) Dean, Sam and Jo make a great team. I'm glad Dean finally admitted that he's attracted to Jo. They have an unusual relationship---sometimes they're like a big brother and a pesky little sister and other times there's that spark and you know the chemistry is there. I look forward to book 2!
Author's Response: Oh thanks sweety I'm so glad it worked for ya and I think the angels will come back 'cause I love 'em and I wanna explore Dean's 'power' some more. Hey Uri on a Harley! Can I use that? That is a sweet picture! And you are so right about Dean and Jo it's a hot smouldering/I hate ya sort of a thing! Maybe more on that too? Thnks again for reviewing like you have you're tops! bev x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 9 Redemption or Destruction?
What an amazing chapter! I could picture it so perfectly in my head. It needs to be made into a movie----that's it! The first Supernatural movie! If the Simpsons can have one, why can't the Winchesters?
Author's Response: oow! I'd queue in the rain to see that - and bring the popcorn! Hope you have the stamina for last chappie, Hunny. Bring you nurses uniform and you can help bandage if you like! bev x
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
It works for me! Loved it! I especialy liked that the angels' light repelled the daemon. Ohhh so good!
Author's Response: Oh good that was a 'daemon' of a chapter to write! Thanks really so much for revieing like you have it's so sweet of you! bev xxxx 
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 7 Angels and Daemons.
Yay! To the rescue! I'm so glad Dean's torture is nearing an end. It's making me weary just imagining all the pain and discomfort. Now we'll see some daemon ass-kicking!
Author's Response: Umm! Well ya know Shannondoah, Mikey's not gonna give up our beautiful green eyed boy without a fight!!! Hang in there kid Dean needs you to get him out by reading to the end! bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 "My Tartarus"
I love that Dean remains defiant! Thatta boy! Also very much enjoy the clues left behind by Mikey. Uri, Raguel and Raphe are a wonderful trio. I'm looking forward to more of them!
Author's Response: Isn't he a pistol!! So full of fire even when he's hurting real bad! Mikey - full of himself isn't he, cheeky boy! And yeah! Go Angels!! Rah rah! Bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
Archangels who take the Lord's name in vain?! Pretty funny! The comaraderie between the three men is very touching, so much like Sam, Dean and Jo. I'm loving this story!
Author's Response: Yup, Uri's a bit of a rebel likes to see how much he can get away with, and loves to annoy Raguel!! But he's a good guy really - well an 'angel' in truth! Haha! I'm pleased you like the relationship between them I wanted it to be apparent that even though they are divine beings they have feelings too. Thanks for reviewing as you read that's such a cool thing to do! Bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
Ughhh! I feel the pain. That shoulder...ooohhhh! *shakes head to clear it* Okay...so...two more archangels arrive. Just a few more and the party will be complete. Unless...Michael took friends when he fell.
Author's Response: Shannondoah So glad you're hanging in there even with the pain from that shoulder!! And yeah, angels and daemons playing not so nicely together! Bev xx
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 3 Michael
Mikey---very clever! He seems as interesting as Raguel. I think your story is one I won't be able to quit until the end (and even then I'll want more!).
Author's Response: Hey Shannondoah. Heehee yeah Mikey's quite a boy isn't he, stick with him he gets more interesting as the story progresses! Would love to know how you like the rest and thanks for reviewing. Bev x
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy!
I kinda fall in love with the angels too!!! Especially Raphe...i know Uri sounds cool, and actually all the angels sound cool, but Raphe is cooler to me than the rest... I'm also wondering about Dean, so actually a sequel is good....maybe you can explain more about Dean and Sam and maybe they have more powers than anyone else give them credit for.... I thought for a second that you would end the story with Sam falling asleep with his hand on Dean's own....but you dodn't say it exactly, but then i'm sure all of us can fill in the blanks can't we... LOL I'm not sure about Jo.....i don't bear her any grievance, although i do think that she looks a bit too young for Dean, but it's so easy to forget that Dean is not exactly old himself...it's just the weight on his shoulders....and i like her feisty spirit....so i'm holding judgement for her being good for Dean, BUT i still love this story!!! Can't wait for the sequel that you are planning...... :)
Author's Response: Hey Muse! That's so nice to hear that you liked Raphael, he is a really cool angel, the healer who helps us get in touch with our shadow side and brings us back to the light. Helped Noah build the Ark too so he's no slouch! I think there will be more to follow regarding the Angels and Dean's powers but not straight away as I want to try a few other ideas out first. Thanks Muse for your ongoing reviews they have been great. Bev xx
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy!
awww and my journey has come to an end. Well I must say that was a helluva story you wrote there miss. Truly amazing, awe inspiring really. The tiny sentiments at the end were very touching, and I loved the banter between them even when Dean was so badly injured. The confession that he liked Jo was also very nice, and I like Jo even more then I did before. A wonderful read Bev! -Bex
Author's Response: Heehee, so glad you liked it Bex. It was my first long story and so I am very protective of it! Glad you liked Jo, I think she's a great girl. And pleased that the humour and affection the boys have for each other came out through all the pain! (I am a bit brutal once I get up a head of steam but I always kiss 'em better!) Thanks for you time and thoughts and kind words! You can have Dean for an extra night next week as thank you , or would you prefer Sammy?? bev xxxx
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 9 Redemption or Destruction?
Ok I'd like to play nurse haha. Woah this could be dubbed only as an extremely EPIC chapter. I loved the parallel (sp?) storyline of the angels trying to save their own brother as well as Dean, and then it all coming together so that saving one would ultimately save the other. Very well done, I might add. splendid as usual! -Bex
Author's Response: Now Hun do you have your own suturing kit or do you want to use Sammy's?? And feel free to wear your Nurses outfit if you like (NO-I think the less saucy one is more appropriate! After all he's sore and hurting!) Glad you got the parallels, wanted to use them to bond the Angels to Sam and Dean. It's so cool that you've reviwed the whole thing, thanks so much Hun!  Bev xx
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!
Oh thank god (mind the pun) he's saved. You had me worried there Bev. I can't tell you how much I'm enjoying this story, it is perfectly written and every character (except Mikey) is likeable and well written (although Mikey is fabulously written). You're doing a super duper job! -Bex
Author's Response: Saved Huh?? now that might be predictable mightn't it? Mikey's still got a bit of fight left in him! Hang in there Hunny you're doing a fab job of reviewing and I'm loving it! Bev xx
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 7 Angels and Daemons.
Holy moses! talk about a deadline. And also a turn for the worst..Dean really does have the worst luck in the world. I love this story Bev, it is so original and has such amazing twists and turns. Although I am finding Mikey's obsessions with Dean kinda creepy haha :) -Bex
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it Bex, and yeah Dean's not having the easiest or best visit with Mikey is he?? I kinda like NOT being predictable hence the changes in direction! And Mikey! Well hell Hunny he just fancies the pants of Dean! Bit like the rest of us do!! Heehee he's a BAD boy! Bev xx
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 6 "My Tartarus"
Oh woah what a revelation, Angels..woah you've really pulled out the cavalry for Dean, I must say :) Another amazing chapter m'dear. I find myself simply enjoying each line written..and the relationship between Sam and Jo is very touching! -Bex
Author's Response: Haha! you've found out!! Yeah Angels!! Nothing but the best devine beings for my beautiful boy!! Bev xx
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
I'm intrigued by these new comers, and also strangely relieved somehow, as if I know there's gunna be reinforcements to save Dean! You're story is truly amazing Bev, and the little note of Dean thinking about a burger...hilarious! -Bex
Author's Response: Bex - you are so cool for reviewing each chapter as you go! It's a lovely thing to do! Ah the new guys!! Yup they are intriguing aren't they read on and I'll tell ya who they are! And yeah even when he's been brutalised his stomach calls to him!! He's so sweet! Bev xx
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
Bev, excuse me for saying but Mikey is a nasty piece of work! Although he is amazingly written, which of course is due to your talents. I'm morbidly fascinated with how dark this story is going, its fantastic lol. If it were a novel I'd call it a definate page turner! -Bex
Author's Response: Awh Bex that's so kind of ya to say that! And yeah Mikey's a bad bad boy, but he does have a certain style dont'ya think!! Stick with him there's more to come yet! bev xxx
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 3 Michael
Woah, Bev. Poor Dean you're really gunna make him sing for his supper, so to speak lol. This is a very good (well good for my sake, maybe not for Dean's) story line you've embarked on m'dear. How far is Dean going to suffer in order to save Sammy?! Wonderous! 10/10! -Bex
Author's Response: Bex! Well hun I've just posted the last chapter (10) so you've got a ways to go yet and all I'll say is there's a lot worse to come! Poor Dean is really gonna scream before you get to the end, but none of it is my fault! It's the daemon - he's bad! Heehee, Bev x
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
That was great. Would love to see the return of the angels. I don't too fancy the Jo / Dean pairing, but it wasn't too bad. The angst and hurt were great though.Looking forward to your next foray.There were some spelling and grammar errors which you could possibly pay more attention to, but it did not detract from my enjoyment of the story.
Author's Response: Well thanks, sorry you didn't like Dean and Jo but the angels may well be back some time soon. Bev
Reviewer: angelica (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy!
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i cant wait for more.Please put Dean and Jo together in your next story.You had a couple of grammer problems but other than that it was a well writin story
Author's Response: Angelica. Thanks very much, glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of trouble posting last night, sites struggling with a daemon or two at the moment and my line spacings kept getting mussed up so apologies! Hope it didn't detract too much! Bev xx
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy!
Well you know how much I loved it, even with my stiff upper lip and avoidance of chick-flick (ha!) Still say the Angels were selfish b'stards for not giving them a cosmic lift back, though. 'Specially that Uriel - what a git! Ahh, just joshing ya, hun. Fab, all the way through. A well thought out plot, beautifully executed. Now, how many different ways can we describe Dean's (admittedly wonderful) eyes?? Well done - you and th'whippet should treat yourselves to a new flat cap each to celebrate. Love ya! Geeky xxx
Author's Response: Geekster!!! Elvis sends his best doggie regards to you, tribe and Eric (fancy calling a bunny Eric! Southerners!) and he looks real fine in his new checked flattie! Says he'll be sure and hump your leg next time you're in the neighborhood! And I still say you can't call divine beings 'Gits' 'cause they'll smash ya one with their gret big wings!! OK,OK, so if I cool it re: jade, green loviliness can I mention his feet more?? Haha, wonder how many words there are for toes?? Ooow reasearch here I come! Love ya Geek!! Bev xxxxxx
Reviewer: Anybody out there (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy!
The end...? There's gonna be a sequel right? Tell me you're gonna give us more? Sorry don't mean to be ungrateful, just sad it had to end. This story had it all: Angels (angels are so cool!!). Hurt Dean, what can I say, he's like a puppy it's to funny to play with (well you did all the playing, I was just lucky to come along for the ride:). And Jo, when she first appeared in the show, I had my doubts about her, but I've found out she's cool. And I loved her in your story. And what a heartbreaking ending, you trying to kill us? The little brotherly neediness was great, without being to zappy (that is a word right?)! Well Bev, I'm looking forward to read more from you:)
Author's Response: AnyBod!! Heehee, wanting more huh? Well I think they may well come back, not right away, need to have a play with a few other ideas first, but probably soon, Glad you liked the angels, they were cool and funky huh! And No sweety wasn't trying to kill you! me a torturer but not really a killer! Glad the hugs stuff wasn't too zappy!! Thanks for lovely review means a lot Bev xx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy!
Great, awesome and fantastic...Loved this when you sent it to me and love it even more now...and I wasn't joking when I said I want an..'I love Uri' T-shirt. Great job Bev, looking forward to your next project!!!!!
Author's Response: Bullet!! Hey think we might do a good trade in 'I love Uri!' T's! Think how good Dean would look in the extra tight version! And me too looking forward to next project!! Bev xx
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy!
I have just got one word to say for this Storu - "AWESOME". I am happy to read that Dean is finally saved. Great work Sam and Jo. And you too bev!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey hunny. Wow thanks I'm stoked at your review! And yeah, I'm not a killer, batterer yes but killer - no! Bev xx
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