Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 2. Raguel
ohh no you didn't you bastard don't stop there please I need to now why it wants Dean so update soon pleaseee!
Author's Response: Now Hunny! How could it be sweet and delicious torture if it were all over in a flash! Pleasure (purrs softly!) is enhanced by anticipation! Shall I continue? Bev xxxxxxx
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 2. Raguel
Bloody glass in bloody wounds- gotta love it!!!! Nice job Birdie!
Author's Response: Too many years in healthcare has given me a, some would say, overzealous interest in injury and pain! More to come I'm afraid - poor lovely Dean! Bev xxx
Reviewer: X5 494 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
omg!!!! need to more!!!!! wat does the demon do with dean? do sam and jo get him back? wat happens next???
Author's Response: OK, now take deep breaths, try humming some metallica! Feel calmer? Good! Heehee! In answer to your questions 1/the daemon does mean and cruel things to Dean, 2/ you'll have to wait and see! and 3/ that would be telling!! Ooowh! I so love to torment, so I'll be posting again soon! Thanks for reviewing, I loooove reviews! Bird x PS: Dark Angel fan by any chance?
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
WOAH..this is so interesting. I loved the moment betweem Jo and Dean, when she was inspecting his wound, very touching.AND..the fact that Sam was drunk through out this whole chapter was pretty darn funny! All around a very good chapter. Well done :) -Bex
Author's Response: Thanks you, thank you! I always thought Dean and Jo could have a real interesting relationship - volatile and feisty you know! And I thought the notion of Sam drunk was just so sweet - how do you deal with that great tall thing when it can't even stand!! More to come soon. Bev xxx PS: Impala = cool penname!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Want more? Hell yeah! this is great! I love the interaction of the Winchesters and Jo. You're expression of their thoughts and feelings is superb!
Author's Response: OOOOOO! Ta, I'm flattered, I like Jo and think she's interesting with Dean (but then anything remotely to do with Dean interests me!)! Ok, I'd better get on with it then! Bird x
Reviewer: supernaturalpass (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Very interesting, can't wait to read more on this! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. It's my first multi chapter offering so reviews are most welcome. Chapter two coming soon! Bird x
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Very nice start Birdie and of course- gotta love broken Dean and instantly sobering Sam.
Author's Response: Tree, Wow thanks, you've made my day! May have to damage him a bit more though before I've done! Heehee! Bev xx
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Wow! Helluva first chapter Bev, how does it feel? I love the title 'The Fallen.' Really liking it so far and I'm very desperate to know what's gonna happen. I have a feeling where Dean's concerned, it's just the start of his torture. As if what just happened wasn't enough. lol Well done babe! 10/10 Schelz
Author's Response: Schelz. How does it feel? It feels Like this!!      Hopefully the title will become more meaningful as you read on and yes, I'm really sorry but I feel compelled to hurt beautiful, lovely, gorgeous Dean a bit more! Wow 10/10 i'm gonna puke with pleasure!! Bev xxxx
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
A grind Dean to dust kinda girl? Well then, woman, you are a girl after my own heart!! He DOES do pain very well. Again, it was a lovely chapter. I loved all the gasping and sweating and swearing and hurting. ***Hugs***
Author's Response: heehee we're twisted and sick puppies  and I'm afraid it only gets worse for our poor beautiful, firm, strong, bronzed, gorgeous boy!! Bev xxxx
Reviewer: darkangel (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Can't wait to se what happends next you got me hooked
Author's Response: Haha - managed to reel you in eh! That's great! hang in there more to come! Bird x
Reviewer: brookiwinchester (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
i luvs it
Author's Response: Hey thanks so much, it's my first multi chapter so that means a lot. More to come soon! Bird X
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Okay, I'll forego my dislike of Jo (sorry) and simply say I really enjoyed this first chapter. This story sounds like it's going to be quite the pain-filled adventure. Can't wait for more. :-)
Author's Response: Ness. Thanks Hun. I'm afraid I am a bit of a grind Dean into the dust sort of a girl! Well we can't all be poets and he does do pain so well! Bev xx
Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Hey Bev, well you know I love it hon. A 9ft (drunken) baby Sasquatch and a bruised and bloodied Dean .. every girls Xmas wish come true! The pressure's on to keep going now - Dean shirtless and in need of suturing, please! Kirsty Bird x
Author's Response: Geekster!  Would never have got there without my GeekGirl Kirsty-Bird shotgun! Ok,Ok I'm working on getting his clothes off - (well his shoes to start with haha pervert!) Oh and if I were you I'd stock up on catgut and needles! Thanks Hunny, love ya! Bev xxx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
First ever chapter of first ever story...how great are you feeling right now? And it's a great start to a great story...I actually liked Jo in this, and all the attention to detalil gives it lots of realism. Got a feeling that imagination of yours is gonna get Dean in a bit of trouble...? lol Awesome work Bev - get that next chapter coming...
Author's Response: Lout!  This is me - soooo happy! And to you, for my banner  Thanks HunterBabe! And yeah! our lovely boy is gonna get the **** kicked outta him - aah lovely! Bev xxxxxx
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Wow Bev what a wonderful start to your story.Love me some hurt Dean. I am really pleased that you have taken the time to explain the injuries and make them realistic, lets face it broken bones hurt like hell no matter who you are. Well done Lorraine
Author's Response: Lorraine. Owh I just love me the grating of bone on bone! Smashed my own wrist into 7 pieces not long back so you could say I did first hand research! More to come - as hurt Dean is just so good to write! Thanks for your kind words. Bev xx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Wow, the first chapter and you already have Sam drunk and Dean hurt! After such an exciting start, i hope that somewhere along the lines of your story, will you at least make them shirtless as well?? LOL I can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry it up. :)
Author's Response: So let me be clear here? Clothes off = good? OK Hun I'll see what I can do!! Will have to research a bit though..........Sam, Dean can you just come here for a moment, I need help with Chapter 2!! Haha! Bird x
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Bev, As you already know I love it. I think you have written the boys perfectly, must be all that time you spend with them... ;) Merrie
Author's Response: Merrie. God I'm a review slut! I soooo love all this stroking and petting!!  Heehee! And yes all that personal time with gorgeous Sam & Dean really helps but I only do it for the integrity of my writing you understand!!! (purr, purr, growl growl! Haha I am so full of ****!! Bev xxx
Reviewer: star76 (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Hey Birdie,
Great start, I love it!! Volunteers to take care of injured Dean!! You had me totally engrossed. Looking forward to the next instalment.
Hey, I used to be a physio in Teesside, but grew up in York before moving over here to Canada. Say "hello" to Yorkshire for me, I miss it.
Author's Response: Hey Star! Thanks for your kind words and Yorkshire says Hi it misses you too! And once I've finished with him poor Dean's gonna need lots of Physio so I'll drop you an e-mail!  Bev xx
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Bev, what an awesome start to your story. I can't wait for your next chapter. Your banner rocks. Crystal
Author's Response: Thanks Crystal, banner makes it look tops doesn't it - thanks Lout !  More to come soon. Bev xxxx
Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries
Poor Dean!!! Already hurt....then a demon! I must know what happens! Keep up the good work.[Btw we call them parking lots! LOL :)]
Author's Response: Hey cool penname! Thanks for your kind words, more to come soon and the daemon is getting even more funky! Bird x
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