Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
Soooo, I missed out big time on this AWESOME chapter, lucky for you, me and brutal go hand in hand and I'm loving the Dean torture!!! Don't tell Schelz and Merrie I said that though...its our little secret. Shhh DRU
Author's Response: Dru, Hunny. Look hate to tell ya this but I suspect both Merrie and Schelz (my Bebg) have twigged that you hover towards the 'pain is our friend' pursuasion! (Don't we all giggle giggle!) Don't be fooled by them Hun they come across as sweet and innocent but have you checked their eyes? Christo, christo! I on the other hand am a pussycat purrpurr growl! You're out of sink now as 5's up and I'm just writing 6 as we speak! Thanks for reviewing Hun. bev xx
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
Another fab chapter Aba;) love the relationship between the three brothers...and after what you sent me yesterday, you've got me lusting over Uri...(I know, I know. I'm a freak) Still hate Mickey. Aba you have to fight him and help our Dean out a bit...plzzz!!! I love how you use the demon to show us Dean's undiscovered power. Hopefully he will discover it in the coming chapters, I have in fact read this three times to try and get over the wait of chap6. Love ur Bebg.
Author's Response: Hey my Bebg. Thanks sweety. Hey BulletBabe's got of bit of a thing going on for Uri too! Lucky boy with all these hot hunter girls after him. Be gentle though the daemon hurt his leg pretty bad! More about Dean's uniqueness in coming chapters , and more Mikey! Hang in there bebg! love ya! Your Aba xxxx
Reviewer: bunnykins (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
Really enjoying the story. Latest chapter is great. It's an interesring story keep it coming. Many thanks.
Author's Response: Bunnykins thanks so much for your kind words much appreciated! Bev xx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
What a great chapter, I love the parallels you've drawn with the brotherly relationship - and I think I have a weird freaky crush on Uri...is that normal? And being tortured and thinking of a burger..thats just so Dean...great work Bev, you're awesome!
Author's Response: Lout. Lout - normal?!?! Not sure that computes?? But then Who wants normal when you can have gorgeous daemonic hunter babe! Funny thing Uri was a small character when I started but he's just blossomed and in my mind he's become a bit of a sleek arctic FOX of a guy! Freaky but cool - so get it on Hunny because he loves the ladies! And yeah, who else would be battered and bleeding and think Big Mac? Only our beautiful green eyed boy! Writing next chapter as we speak! Me awesome? Wow, Dean come here and stroke my inflamed ego this minute you here me!! Bev xx
Reviewer: ichigo kurosaki (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
wow it is really good stories man!! why didn't give this story to stasion where the series running? please make the next chapter quickly
Author's Response: Konichiwa Ren. Thats such a sweet thing to say! Can you tell Kripke for me? Heehee! More to come soon, stay with me! Bev xxx
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
Please forgive me, i was so excited reading this chapter i forgot to review. what a fabulous ending poor dean , you are wonderfully mean to him. Lorraine
Author's Response: lorraine.  Oh I enjoyed that so much!! Bev xx
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
Fabulous update Bev, so a dislocated shoulder, stabbed hand and a broken cheek the injuries are mounting up nicely, very realistic and not over the top. Well done. Lorraine
Author's Response: Lorraine. I know, I know! But I do so, so love Dean in pain! Pervert right? But hell a girls gotta have a hobby! Heehee! Bev xx
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
Bev, if Mikey can't play nice he has to give Dean baaack. You're a wicked evil woman hurting our boy so. Mikey better be thankful us hunter girls don't come after him. More please. Crystal
Author's Response: Crystal. Mea Culpa!  I know I'm bad but I thought as a compansation our team of hunter girls cound leap in the cars, go kick Mikeys sorry ass, and snatch the boys. Then we could take our time about kissing them better! I'll fight ya for Dean! Bev xxxxx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
Oh no! Jensen's face!! No no no no no.......watch out Mikey....you DO NOT mess with the face and not expect repercussions.....LOL I love the longer chapters.....i love long chapters.....*hint hint* I hope Raphe hurries up and tell Jo and Sam how to get Dean back....the torture might be too much for him.... Happy New Year!
Author's Response: Hey Muse. Glad the longer chapter worked for you, (see I listened!) being off work is a help! Jensen's Face!! OMG! What is that evil Mikey thinking! How could anyone damage that beautiful, beautiful face? Oh but then remember Dean with that scar on his forehead in IMTOD? Hot!!!! And those PJ's and bare feet!!!! Ummmmmmm!! Happy New Year to you too Hun, next (long!) chapter soon Bev xx
Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
Good work Birdie. It all makes sense. Their unique bond is what makes them strong. I think the deamon is in trouble and a little angry, his plan may not work. Nice way to show the boys interaction through Uri and Raphe, and how Sam finds the resemblance with his brother relation. Next chapter please, ....
Author's Response: Dear Dean494. Hey thanks very much for that very thoughtful review. I'm relieved to know it hangs together logically as that's real important to me. I'm enjoying the relationship between Raguel, Raphe and Uri, it's more detailed than I first anticipated but they kinda demand it! And Yup, Mikey's getting a bit pissed as it's not totally going his way. God knows what that means for the boys! Next chapter on the way. Thanks Hun Bev xx
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 5. The Power of One
I'm reviewing, I'm reviewing, please don't tell Mikey to be bad. ;) Oh you do like torturing that boy... Another great chapter Bev, keep em coming-pleeease. Merrie xxx
Author's Response: Merrie. Thanks for reviewing Hunny What can I say! Pain is Dean's best friend! Bev xx
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 27/12/07 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 3 Michael
First draft was great, this one's even better, you obviously relish a challenge. Keep up the good work mate...this is fantastic stuff, loving every minute of it!
Author's Response: Lout, That is such a fab thing to say you wonderful hunter babe you! you've made my day! Am off work this week so chapter 5 is nearly finished and chapter 6 is underway! I'm having a great time but Mikey is running out of control! i might need some help to subdue him! You up for it?? Thanks Hun! Bev xxxx
Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
Wow.....nice story.....waiting to hear more from it...What will happen to Dean, will Sam and Jo make it at the right time......Wow u really know how to create suspense.....i seriously loved it!!! And Wish you a MERRY CHRISTMAS ...
Author's Response: Well thank you so much for such a nice review. I do like to tease so cliff-hangers really appeal to me. I like that nervy feeling that draws one into the story. Poor Dean, no eggnog and Christmas Cheer for him this year! Have a great one yourself and stick with me more to come soon bev xxxx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
Aaaargh!!! i'm having an imaginary pain on my own hand.....*rubs it fervently* For the record, reading either Sam or Dean (esp Dean) in pain kinda makes me cringe and flinch, but let me just state that it's kinda morbidly compelling.....so spare no horror and bring it on, i say!!! *evil laughter* Sorry, think my drink is spiked. I have one request though; can you make the next chapter longer?? :) Merry Xmas and Happy New Year!
Author's Response: Awh, you want I should send one of the boys to kiss it better? And yeah watch out for those Purple Nirples they'll knock you on your ass Dude! Longer Chappies Huh?? OK I'll ask Mikey and see what he says! Have a stonking Chrissy hun! Bev xxx
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
that was brutal!
Author's Response: Sorry Hunny the daemon is a bit of a bad guy! Trying to get him under control! Bird x
Reviewer: tvbatina (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
That ending was so brutal but I'm loving this story. Can't wait for more. Poor Dean!
Author's Response: Sorry Hunny! Mikey's a very bad boy  I struggle to control him! Merry Christmas! Bird x
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
Wow--well, how's that for a lovely Christmas present. Yikes! Poor, poor Dean. OUCH--to say the least. Nice update.
Author's Response: Ness. What every Winchester loving girl hopes for at Christmas - their favorite boy in pain!!!! Have a wonderful Christmas! Bev xx
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
Bev, O my you are so evil, teasing us so. I do agree with Raguel bourbon works pretty good for those times. Dean could use some about now. I recognize a few names, huh!!! Can't wait for more, please. Crystal
Author's Response: I do sorta like to tease Crystal - it's fun! Maybe I'm posessed? Christo! Nah seems fine! Thought you might know some of these guys - hey no evil without good I reackon! Just started next chapter! Have a wonderful Christmas with your beloved family Crsytal. Bev xxxx
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
You are without a doubt the master at torturing Dean....I'll let you know when I've decided whether or not that's a good thing... ;) Another great chapter Bev, thanks for the read. Merrie xxx
Author's Response: Merrie Sweety. It's not me  It's the daemon, Silly! Have a great Christmas Hunny love to Lara to and don't eat too much cheese!  Bev xx
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
Presents all around then. Poor Dean, thiugh, no eggnog for the boys. More soon? Hope so.
Author's Response: HeeHee No don't think daemons do eggnog, maybe purple nirples though!! Writing next chapter as we speak! Happy Christmas Hunny, have a great one! Bev x
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 23/12/07 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives
My Dear Aba! You are extremly evil!!! I can't believe you and Mickey did that to Dean, my poor baby. So Raguels brothers are on board now, hopefully they'll go put an end to the man I now hate going by the name of Mickey...grrr! You have a knack for detail and thats one of the reasons I love your stories sooo much:) I'm in the living room and my siblings are blasting the music to deafening levels "All I want for Christmas is you." [repeated over and over} I heard the song start but by the time I'd finished reading this, the song was finished and another was playing. I hadn't even noticed because I was so caught up in this...Well done Aba! I am officially obsessed with 'The Fallen.' Happy now? You torturer!!! Love you really:) Bebg.
Author's Response: Hey Bebg. It's not me, your timid and shy Aba who does these things it's the daemon , you gotta know that sweetums! Mikey's a bad boy! Any way at least I saved you from an eternity of Maria Carey !! It's a happy obsession though isn't it! Love you too Bebg! Happy Christmas Aba xxxxx
Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 3 Michael
Oh boy, I'm loving this story, poor gorgeous, sexy, mouth watering Dean. Birdie you killing me with this cliff hanger "let me give you a taster." Whats wrong with you women? Don't you know I need more. lol Oh hun, I got ur email, hard to respond, my dads being stingy with the computer, hardly get to come on. Tells me I have to get my own, greedy so and so. Keep ur fingers crossed that he buys me one. DRU ROCK ON!!!!
Author's Response: Dru sweety! Heehee, he is the most lovely gorgeous eye candy isn't he? Even when a bit bashed about! OK so I'm sensing you're happy if I carry on so better finish chapter four! Dad! Buy the grily a laptop!!!!! Bev xxxxx
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/07 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 3 Michael
Bev, as you know I really enjoyed the first version of this chapter, but this one is just as good. And what a cliffhanger ending.... you evil person. ;) Can't wait for chapter 4.... Merrie xxx
Author's Response: Merrie. Cool! Well that's the Titanic turned, Iceberg avoided, now just gotta steer her home! Mikey's getting so aggresive though that I may need help to overcome him! heehee Bev xx
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 Michael
New version and it still rocks! Micheal scares me *trembles* He's too calm and cold.. Poor Dean, I just know he'll hold out as long as he can to protect Sam...but Sam might just hand himself over to protect Dean...dilemna? Are you gna give me a hint. You tease!!! Lemme guess...the demon made you do it;) You're torturing me, d'you now that? Your cliff hangers are killing me. Loved it!!! Bebg.
Author's Response:  come here my beautiful little Bebg and I'll whisper in your pretty little ear what the ending will be, but first you'll have to do something for me and that is..............bwehahahahahhaa! Boy, oh boy do I love to tease and torture! Got my name for me yet? Bev xx
Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 3 Michael
Oh man....you are intent on torturing Dean to the fullest don't you????? You just know where to stop so that you'll whet our appetite for more... :)
Author's Response: Hey Sweets. It's not me! Honest! it's the daemon!! He's just plain bad! Bev x
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