Reviewer: rbliss1969 (Signed) · Date: 29/02/08 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 12
excellent only disappointment was that i figured out who Melina was before chapter 3. I love the sarcasm between the 2 just like in the show. evil little girl; man what a B*#@&. I loved the comment "why am i always the one being thrown out the windows" something Dean would diffidently say to Sam. hope to read other stories by you soon.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
Megan. Good interesting first story, liked the twist and changes with the ghosts and the time zone changes added a nice angle. Sweet poor old Dean getting bashed by a girl!! Gonna write any more? bev xx
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 12
Loved the story. The ghost story was cleverly written with an unexpected twist. Great job writing the boys. Especially loved the Dean whumpage. Hope to read more from you soon!
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 12
I certainly enjoyed it, this was a great story Megan. I have a story similar when it comes to illusions, haven't posted it yet. But I hope when I do, you'll have a read. Very good way to end, I don't think Sam and Dean will be stopping off at a strange house ever again. Even if they need shelter from a hurricane. lol Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 11
Poor Dean, thatdemon is so spiteful, grrr! Yes! Thanks Sam, you saved the day;) Good chapter hun. Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 10
Nooo, if Catherine gets out she hurt Sam...or will she??? Is Melina tricking Sam into releasing the demon? Short chap, still enjoying playing detective though. lol Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 9
Good chappy, really good. Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 8
Oooh, I love this, I can't believe Melina has been trapped in the house for so long. Clever story, great update;) Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 7
Shawn, what a silly man, he's paying for his calling now. Melina...Melissa? Is Melina Shawns' wife? Maybe that gunshot to the back wasn't enough to kill her but she don't remember...never mind me, just playing with it. Hopefully Dean's plan will work. Good chap Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 6
Sooo creepy, I'm loving it, seems like the family keep replaying the events...can they somehow change the past Bronco??? Good chapter hun;) Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 5
Good chap, the part where Dean was about to get out of the bath and realized he was naked was funny;) Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 4
OMG! Poor Dean in the snow frezing to death. I'm so glad he stayed awake long enough to make noise for Sam to rescue him from the harsh weather. Good chap hun;) Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 3
They're in friggin' mansion, I really like this story;) Dean only eating one pancake, something is definitely wrong;( You really know how to leave us wanting, I can't believe that little brat pushed Dean out of the window. Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
When doing the dialogue hun, put a space between them so we know who's talking. This story is very good so far, creepy...I don't trust Melina a the moment, maybe she'll change my mind later. Good chap hun:) Fantasy
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
A little bit hard to read at the start but all in all this story is very interesting:) I can't believe he shot is wife, was he trying to get the girl?? I am excited to see what happens next. Fantasy!
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