Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 09:39 PM · On: Into the Storm....
Oh please please please let there be more PLEAS!!!!!! I do think the characters of SAM & Concha would work together. I simply loved the whole story and I do thank you for letting in on the true action of the demon to sam. Very Interesting. TERRIFIYING THOUGH. I don't like you for that part. I forgive you for that I do like the established charecteristics of the eblems that sam made. There is also that position of Bobby placeing the boys with other hunter soething that they don't do by rule. Dante seemed to be very conpetative with DEAN BOY and i like that. Thanks can't wait to read all your's. I reall do like you. No . . . you num nut the way you fidgit and work with the story very challenging and that is terifficly good. My rating is simple and if you don't like it tuff cookies. No let me know 'cause you are now part of the golden power of story tellers that I like and a devoted to keep reading and ake copies so when I have children . . . hopefully two twin boys or simply boys I could read them to them theyed probably like that and open their minds to maybe a carrier in writing or imagening themselves doing something they like to do and never be taken away from it EVER!!! The imagination that one can place and keep track of is very sincery, and not only you've shown it; but many of you have. Keep doing the best you can . . . and take care of yourself along with the pestering family and friends. You are NOW an ANGELIC writer and have your own personl GOLDEN FILE of work that is awaiting for me to read. Tank you and bless the work and once again family and friends. lamix1mana@yahoo.com RATING:) from the bottom to all eternity of the HEART . . . 400 ++++ or EMACULIT. The only reason I place it that way . . . was the plain determination of message that you had protrayed in regards to the details that Concha found the detail between SAM AND DEMON and another was that the lie that BOBBY bestowed on the BOYS WINCHESTER. Knowing fully well that he could've told them in privet terms and how their parents knew about it and never told them. Thats cruelty. Let me know what you think of the rating.
Author's Response: I'm very happy with any rating I get. I never pictured Sam and Concha, she never is a romantic interest in the series. I'm glad you like her though, and I'm very glad you likded the story. I thought Dean and Dante were fun together. Thanks so much for reading and for your wonderful and thoughtful comments.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 08:40 PM · On: A Hunting We Will Go!
This is to exsisive force of writing and that is terific, but that is scaring the most eternal of me and my body is shivering. A very powerful writer you are along with the images you've placed in this story.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 07:39 AM · On: One Brother, Safe and Whole.
Thank you . . . thank you. I a begining to trully hate the way you compose this story has realy scared the shit out of e. I do enjoy the tabue you've placed between SAM and the beauty CONCHA. I do think that they do make a good thing. I bet DANTE and DEAN would deffenetly agree to that.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and for your comments.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 07:09 AM · On: Crystals and Car Trunks
I do hope that my SAMMY is still alive, for their spared lives if only Uncle Papa BOBBY was around then that would be a different story no I think he'd call on a couple of bad ass demon dogs.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 06:26 AM · On: The Elements
This is getting way tgo serious and I don't like the thought that SAM maybe the one accedently calling the damned thing.
Author's Response: I'm sure Sam doesn't like that idea either. Thanks.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 02/07/09 05:48 AM · On: Sibling Glue
No, aha aha . . . don't you be pulling that crap; on him or the WINCHESTERS. They lost their parents for GOD sake. DEAN killed that evil son of a bitch. SAM is petrified of that bastered, but he is willing to kill it from deoing it to anyone else.
Author's Response: Thanks for your great comments.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 02:29 AM · On: I Hate Demons and Beer!
I do like the character of Concha, but I do think she brought the damn thing in . . . somehow. The movement of how you are leading the story is a bit confusing, but I am seeing where it will be turn. so, I do like it and also enjoy it.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 06:31 AM · On: Oh Yeah, and Tartums Can Fly!
I wonder what Dean would think in haveing a skilled hunter as her on the team of theres or any? I think they would make a good couple, but then I could be wrong.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. There's no romance between them, just friends.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/06/09 02:21 AM · On: Journey Begins
First i'd like to thank you that you brought the sort of clever gentelmen that will probably fall off with a mile radius of the horse. Cause obeviosuly he can't ride like Sam.
Author's Response: LOL....thanks for reading!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 29/06/09 04:16 AM · On: Blood Horse
What a great synopsis on the Bonanza show . . . a good one at that to . . . damn you DEAN. Now I'm sounding like u. u bone head. I do like the start of can't wait for the conclusion.
Author's Response: Thanks, Bonanza was one of my favorites.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 08:53 AM · On: Into the Storm....
Cool story. So glad that Sam and Dean have two more people they can trust and even more glad that you did decide to continue this series. But I warn you, 3 stories to date won't keep me satisfied for long.
Author's Response: Hhahahaa...so duely noted! Thanks for reading and commenting. I think a fourth might squeek out this year too. Laura
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 09/01/09 02:36 PM · On: Sibling Glue
I'm speechless almost breathless. Awesome chapter. Must make time to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 08/01/09 03:28 PM · On: Journey Begins
I think Dean may have met his perfect match, and Sam's comment about Diana is just plain funny. Great start, but I think Bobby is going to have his hands full.
Author's Response: Hehehee...yes he is...thanks for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/08 11:08 PM · On: Into the Storm....
Oh my gosh! I LOVE this story sooooooo much! I really really love the ending, and I really love your imagination...I have so much love for you right now! Okay, that's weird..:D..Anyways, very nice job, and oh hell yeah! Absolutely should make a series from this! Go series, go series *chants and does a dance* :P :P :P
Author's Response: Heshhee...wow thanks! What a nice thing to wake up to this morning. This has become a series, Gale Warnings and Storm Surge are next in line. Thanks for reading and commenting, and I'm so glad you loved it. Laura
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/11/08 07:15 PM · On: Orion, The Hunter
Okay, Dean don't think with the bottom brain . . . this character that you've presented is very strange yet courtious. Good enough to be tricky as DEAN and for Sam I am not sure right know, but I feel something well happen. You have seriously done great. I like this story.
Author's Response: Hehehehe...thanks!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/11/08 06:44 AM · On: Journey Begins
This is a hillerious bargin to have Dean ridding a horse. Something very unusal feels like this is going to be one of the most intreesting stories. Good luck.
Author's Response: Hehehee...boys on horses, what's not to like about that?
Thanks for your comments, I so very much appreciate them.
Laura
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 19/11/08 02:15 AM · On: Blood Horse
This is going to be ONE YEPPY KEY YEAHE! GITTY-UP PARTNERS! Funny.
Author's Response: Thanks, hope you enjoy the story.
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 06:54 AM · On: Oh Yeah, and Tartums Can Fly!
Holy moly, a ton of action which had me on the edge of my seat!! What a critter! And it flies?!? The hunt scene with Concha reflecting and hesitating in her fear, before stepping up was spectacular. She is one savvy chick! The action with the horses (how cool is Orion!!) was fabulous - that twenty foot reining slide and Orion "exploding up the trail" was freaking awesome, not to mention that leap into the air to give Concha momentum to sabre that sucker! Your description was exact at putting us right in the thick of the action. Great job! LOVED Dean taking charge (what's not to love) and Sam's "Welcome to my world" was just the best. You showcased the brother's connection brilliantly with these lines "The tone of Dean’s voice... was the deep, guttural tone Dean reserved for use only on possessed beings, intruders, evil in general" and "Sam didn’t question his brother for an instant, dropping flat to the ground." Yep, the boys got a system all right!! Great chapter...and the real hunt hasn't even started yet has it??
Author's Response: Tartums are a critter I totally invented, and lots of people commented on them...which thrills me to no end. The little buggers will be back, no fear. Thanks again for such wonderful comments. Laura
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/08 02:08 AM · On: Orion, The Hunter
What an awesome chapter, Laura, you are well and truly in your groove. You wove the subtle way our boys think and work together so naturally into this story, their connection shone through easily but without feeling overdone and I loved it. The way you wrote the boys responding to the nuances of the other was so true to their characters and personalities *applause* Your reveal was kickass. Way to go - creative and packed a punch that set up a 'cannot be disputed' understanding forged in truth and shared experience. Like Dean I was floored by your “Guardian, protector, hunter…the chaser away of all things evil”, it was perfect. Sam sitting up and taking notice and Dean appreciating the impact on Sam was amazing and I was rivetted. This line was stunning "The gesture got him exactly what he knew it would, Sam’s trusted silence" because the scene was stunning. You write of the bond between these brothers with a precision that makes my catch my breath. (I'm still not over that flashlight...) Again it's the nuances in your work which sit along side your exciting story plots which hold us spellbound. And I have to comment on this - "...and yes, they did sometimes see ghosts and play inappropriately with chain saws" - that was ironicly funny and I stifled a giggle! Dean left speechless is gold, loved Concha a bit smug. So the bond is developing, I think Bobby's 10% odds are in his favour... I'm so glad I tripped back for this fic, it's a corker!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Petra! I'm so glad you're enjoying this, it's still one of my favorites. No giggle stifling! Let them out girl...lol Thank you again for your kind comments. Laura
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 01:19 AM · On: Journey Begins
So Bobby has a serious plan. And among all the conniving he needs 10% surprise factor? My curiosity is killing me!! I love your Concha, and the boys reaction to her is a gem. Your description of her getting locked and loaded is spectacular, what a woman!! Sam sure seems to appreciate her... Absolutely loved this line "And along the way if they happened upon a small country in the midst of hostile take over, between what was in Dean’s bag and stowed on Concha’s horse, they could ward off the invasion." Great stuff! Wow to her horse, he is awesome. You have me in the palm of your hand about the part these beautiful animals play in Sam's vision. Dean has his car, I think Concha has her horse... And I have a feeling I'm gunna love your Dante... Brilliant chapter, exciting and well written. I really have things to do however that next button is calling my name. Screaming it actually...
Author's Response: Thanks again Petra! Concha's horse is based on one I had, not his color, but his personality. Laura
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 09/05/08 08:46 PM · On: Blood Horse
I've come back here cos I want to read 'Storm Surge' and "Gale Warning' led me here. Best to start at the beginning, huh!? Love this intro - an intriguing mystery and bro-bond beautifully written (loved Dean naming the phases of Sam's visions!) I'm in! And now, Dean knowing his horses?!?! Can this man get any more perfect? This is gunna be one awesome ride! "Elements" here I come!
Author's Response: Hey! Glad you liked the opening. The whole thing has sort of gotten out of hand with now three stories, but eh...I love 'em! Thanks so much Petra! I appreciate you reading and commenting. Laura
Reviewer: Mickie28 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/08 12:25 AM · On: Into the Storm....
Very well done
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 18/12/07 07:04 PM · On: Into the Storm....
Sweet Momma this was good.
Author's Response: Well thanks!
Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 04:04 PM · On: Into the Storm....
Amazing.More chapters soon please, and yes you should make this a series.
Author's Response: Thanks! Gale Warnings is the next in the series. Glad you liked.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 05:58 PM · On: Into the Storm....
I loved this story! I'm so glad there's a sequel! I'm even more grateful that it's already complete before I begin reading it! Hee! Patience is not MY virtue!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm so happy you liked this. Hope you enjoy the next one too. Laura
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