Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 11
Perfect ending.. In case I didn't mention this enough, this was a great read, you have every reason to be proud....Thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I am very proud of this story and you made me even more so. See you round the boards.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 10
Loved this chapter, the brother's sharing their stories and opening up was well written and done just right.. thanks for a great read, I'll be sad when this one's over - K
Author's Response: Thanks again. I really don't have the right words to express how grateful I've been for your reviews of this story. I'm so glad that you like it.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter, truly. Loved everything that was said and unsaid. - K
Author's Response: Thank you so much and I'm so glad that you are still reading. I appreciate your shout out that you gave to others also, it truly touched me and made me feel successful!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
wow now that was one hell of an exorcism! Past midnight here now so i won't go further for the moment, but had to finish this part tonight, great!
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it. I worked on it very hard. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
Cool....great detail on the excorcism
Author's Response: Thank you again. As I said that is a compliation of several 'actual' exorcisms that I read about. I guess that makes the details true - if you believe in that sort of thing. :)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 7
Very cool chapter, I loved the whole 'Marked' conversation. - Kel
Author's Response: Thanks. In looking into Exorcism it's one of the things talked about. Don't look at demons unless you want them looking at you. I wanted to look at more of a layman's view rather than a Hunter's view.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
wow, what an exciting chapter, kills me to not have the time to read the next one right now! But i'll be back very soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked. I hope you find the next chapter better than this one. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter! Easy hunt huh... And liked the discussion about Heaven and Hell. Can't wait to see what Bobby has for them...
Author's Response: Thanks again. I'm glad you're still reading.
Reviewer: Stock1210 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 11
Wonderful story. I await your next one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Reviewer: WynterSun (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 11
Poignant indeed. I am very impressed, most of the other stories I've read on here have been from Sam and Dean's point of view. Or a third person perspective. It was interesting (and well done) to read the story from another character's eyes. Someone who had no idea what that side of the world was really like. Thanks for the read!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It was what I was trying to accomplish. It feels great to now thatI managed to convey what I was trying to. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 11
I have been waiting so long for all the chapters before I read them, I cant bear leaving stories half way through as half the journey is building the experience. The premise of this story line intrigued me. I love that in your world D&S finally get to talk and you handled it so well, I only hope K has the same ideas. This was beautifully written, soft and insistent, strong and subtle and the characters were so real. So loved it, you are a complete star, off to see what else you have done.. Touched from Bucks, England Di x
Author's Response: I am so glad that you read my story and that I was able to get it out quickly for you. I only have one other story here but I have a few on ff.net. I'm still trying to decide which ones I'm going to bring over. Most seem out of date now. I have one that I'm working on right now that will be on here soon but I haven't finished writing it completely yet. Thanks for the compliments. I work very hard at making Sam and Dean as believable as possible. I don't know that we'll get the conversation that we want from the show but we can all dream. I lived in Middlesex, England for four years....miss it so much. I love reading stories from writers in Britain because I love the British slang that comes through - i actually start to hear the British accent in my head while I'm reading. Thanks again.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 6
Love the 'easy' hunt.. only the Winchesters would think that was an easy job. Also, enjoyed the heaven/hell debate nicely done.. Moving on I need to see what Bobby called about - K
Author's Response: Thanks, I wish they would continue to touch on that debate in the show. Of course if wishes were rainbows.....
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great just great, I really liked your descriptions of the boys on hunt and the discussion of the boys childhood - K
Author's Response: Thank you again. You've been too sweet and nice through this. I really appreciate you reading my story.
Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 5
im really enjoying this story. i haven't stumbled upon anything with a plot like this so its a refreshing change. not that i don't enjoy the usual ones. anyways, can't wait to read more :) oh and uhh, i can see chapters 6, 7 and 8 yet nothing is on it. just letting you know *nods*
Author's Response: I just looked at they were there so I don't know what the problem could be.....hmmm. Thanks for reading. I'm really glad that you are liking the story. It's nice to know that i've done something unique.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 5
okay, another great chappy! But no more yet :( but well, bedtime here anyway, looking forward for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. The other chapters are there now and the rest should be up soon. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 4
ow, how nice and sad was that, loved it! "I think that maybe Dean and Sam had altered my view of the world just a little bit." They did, didn't they...
Author's Response: For us all.....
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
okay, i'm officially hooked! Nice to see brothers through someone elses eyes. I'm so gonna blame Kwater, and You, when hubby's gonna start complaining because i'm glued to the computer...
Author's Response: So sorry. I hope you have no marital woes because of me. i'm really happy that you like the story. There's a couple more chapter's that have been posted but not approved. Oh the woes with being a new writer on the site. Hope I get the umbilicle cord cut soon.
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 4
Aw.... god how many ways can you kill someone.. Sam just trying to help Dean fufill his last wish.. And the singing.. *snif* If I didn't mention it yet, I'm loving this story.. thanks for the terrific read - K
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are liking it. I'm glad the singing works in the story.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 5
I found the concept that Dean doesn't understand failure interesting, considering his 'deal' situation! Do you plan to explore that more? I thought the discussion Abbi and Dean had on their own was well written, I could read the subtle change in Deans character when he didn't need to keep his 'game face' on. And I loved the line 'Watching the brothers work was almost erotic' Well of course it was! Really nice stuff, can we have more please? Bird x
Author's Response: Considering everything is from Abbey's point of view probably won't be explored because it's not something I think Dean would every discuss it. My favorite scenes in the shows are when the guys are doing a B&E - is that wrong? Talk 'bout erotic. I'll get more out as soon as possible.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
I love it when Dean sings, it's like giving him the gift of a moments peace in his violent and troubled world. You described the tension re 'the CRD deal' really well and Sam's sadness was haunting. Well done. Bird x
Author's Response: Thank you. I wish they'd let Jensen sing in the show, he has a beautiful voice. That's why I like to write him singing into stories. I wrote this long before season 3 started so I was guessing on how the guys were going to respond to the deal. I appreciate you saying that I did well. I wouldn't have made Dean quite as extreme as they made him at the beginning of season 3 but it makes perfect sense that he'd try to have as much fun as possible. Thank you again.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
OK, she's got a bit of Moxie about her which she's gonna need-I like her. And Dean's such a gentleman, he moved over to give Abbi room on the bed even tho he's all torn up! Liking it! Bird x
Author's Response: As you can probably tell, I'm a Dean girl. I love the character and I love writing him. Such a depth of material to draw from. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 2
great chapter, i'm now so curious to find out how they went from this first rough meeting to a friendship. Loved the non-talked dialogue.
Author's Response: YEA! Finally someone says something about the no-talked dialogue. I was so proud of that but no one seemed to notice. Thank you for the stroke to my ego....all grins now. Thanks for the reviews, I'm having a good day because of it.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
okay, here i am, sent by Kwater who said i should like this story. And as she knows me so well, she was right! Interesting introduction to the story, looks like it's gonna be an original POV of the boys in action...
Author's Response: I am grateful to Kwater. She's mentioned this story to others. I am so glad that you like it and I hope you continue to enjoy it. I really enjoyed writing it.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hehee Sam can manipulate Dean so easily can't he? Just has to flash his big puppy eyes! Reading on! Bird x
Author's Response: I love they way they both play each other but Sam does seem to have mastered that ability. Great brother dynamics....did Kripke know what he was doing or did he get lucky?
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is intriguing! It surprises me that Dean allowed Abbi to hunt with them so I'm keen to know what tipped the balance in her favour. I like the suggested frisson between them - or did I just imagine/invent that? I liked your description of Dean's voice - soft and melodic. yeah isn't it!! Gonna read more now. Bird x
Author's Response: I figure what tipped the balance in her favor, for me, was the fact that Dean is on his final year and doesn't want to waste precious time dealing with the police. So, he conceded rather than fight it out. I think there would be frisson between him and any woman within a 10 mile radius but I could be biased. Gads, I love that man's voice....but, we'll leave that alone.
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