Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 16/08/10 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 11
I loved the ending. it was kinda bittersweet for me. I'm sorry Abby lost her fiance but if he couldn't accept that life changes people he didn't deserve her. I'm glad she got to see our boys for who they really were especially Dean. I was thinking, you know, just a thought ;) that if Abigail was to ever need Dean and Sam agin I'd be more than happy to read that story too (hint! lol!). Great story overall. So sorry and yet glad it is over.
Author's Response: It was a bittersweet ending for me too but necessary. Clearly she couldn't continue hunting with them or on her own and her finance jst wasn't getting it. I loved exploring Dean in this story since he's judged so superficially by so many people. You're not the first person to hint that they would like to see Abby back and I even went so far as to write the first chapter. It involved Dean's return from Hell but then I got Kripke'd and my premise of a hunt that involved a girl that could hear angels was taken over by Anna. I'm not writing fanfiction any longer but if the urge ever hits me to continue Abby's story, I'll be sure to post it here. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it. Kim
Reviewer: Star (Signed) · Date: 16/08/10 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 2
This story is very interesting! Lately I have been reading a lot of stories where Dean has been misunderstood and it's true because of his rough exterior few people get the real Dean until they get to know him. Abby's character is definitely great. Adding a scientist to SPN, who knew? And I loved the silent communication between Dean and Sam reminds me of the look when the saw the suicidal teddy bear. That was funny. Bring on the next chapter!
Author's Response: I love the silent communications. Its something I try to convey in my stories on occassion. When I wrote this it was all about showing who these guys were to outsiders but not necessarily someone who was having a horrible experience. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kim
Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 27/07/08 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 11
:( Sadness. But really fantastic story. I was wondering are you going to do a sequel?
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Don't know about a sequel. We'll see how next season goes. I'd like Abby to know that Dean's alive but I want to know where they are going to take the character. Once that plays out a bit I may think about it. Thanks for the reviews.
Reviewer: gypsywoman1 (Signed) · Date: 26/07/08 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
Holy Hell. Love this story so far. Great job. Tori =D
Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 11
oh my..I loved this story..The way you used Abby to describe the boys was awesome. I'm glad that I found it..thanks so much for writing..it was awesome..
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's so fun to get a review on something that I wrote a long time ago. I loved the outsider's point of view on this story. Abby was a fun character and wonderful to write. Thanks again for reading and for the review!
Reviewer: Diswildeyes (Signed) · Date: 04/05/08 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 11
I was wondering if they end this season and Dean ends up alive if you are going to add a chapter to let Abby know he is still alive?
Author's Response: I doubt I'll add a chapter. I might write another story though. Once you've seen the dark, I don't think it ever lets you go. Thanks for the question. Hopefully all ends well.
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 11
aww I love this story!
Author's Response: Very glad that you liked it. Thanks for reading and for the reviews.
Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 18/03/08 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 11
Excellent story, good action, so enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This is one of my favorite stories that I've written. I appreciate the review and you reading my story.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 11
How sad! But it's a perfect ending! She wasn't the same woman. She didn't fit into her old life or the life of a hunter. Poor Abigail! Fabulous!
Author's Response: I loved Abby. I thought she worked very well as a character and I'm glad that it worked out the way that it did. She made promises and learned things - she knew she was in way over her head. Thankyou so much for reading. I so appreciate all the reviews, great words, and acts of encouragement!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 10
Very revealing! I'm surprised Dean loosened up so much even drunk. But then I suspect you had him do it purposely, using his drunken state as a later excuse for being a girl.
Author's Response: It's funny how we have seen Sam drunk on the show twice and we see Dean drink very often but we've never seen Dean drunk. I wonder what we'd get? Yeah, it was an excuse for him to say the things he wanted to say. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 9
Ahhh, now we find out how the field trip ends. Very unexpected and explosive! Luuuuuv it!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you've enjoyed this story. Thanks so much for reading it and for leaving reviews.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 8
All the thoughts and feelings Abigail has are expressed so well! They're the same things I think I would feel if placed in that position. this chapter must have exhausted you. Incredible chapter!
Author's Response: Actually, I didn't have a chapter exhaust me until 'To The Rescue'. This all came together for me very easily - research does that for me. I read alot about exorcisms and it really made this chapter flow easily. Thanks!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 7
How totally eerie! Even though I knew the demon would recognize the Winchesters, when Dean said ti called him by name it sent shivers up my spine! Excellent job!!
Author's Response: I really wanted that exorcism to be just a bit more than what we get in the show. "In reality" exorcisms are very horrific events that people usually don't survive. If they're real or not is not the issue the issue is what happens to these people during these events. Thanks!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 6
Abby's really getting into the heads of both brothers. It's so cool to see how truly opposite they are. Religion is a personal, controversial subject for people who believe. Throwing Dean into the mix adds a little spice. Love the ending! The next chapter has got to be a doozy!
Author's Response: She understood them very well even if she didn't understand what they did. Dean always adds a little spice, doesn't he? Thanks!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wow! Even though you wrote this last year, it fits perfectly with Dean's proccupation with becoming a demon himself. Amazing! You and Kripke sharing notes?
Author's Response: I wish, then maybe I'd have an idea how Dean is going to be saved. What would I give to be privy to the ideas in that man's head and to be able to argue about the one's I don't care for. Thanks!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 4
You've captured Dean's usual smart-ass wisecracks wonderfully! I like how our paradigm keeps shifting as you show things from different points of view. We get a glimpse of the Winchesters through Abigail's eyes and of her through their eyes as their opinions alter.
Author's Response: This was a definate excersize in telling a story from an outsiders view. I also chose for her to be into psychology for a reason since I love the idea of either one of those two being psychoanalyzed - can you imagine the damage they could do to a phsychologist? Thanks again for reading. Coming back to this story even if only in memory is fabulous for me.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 3
This just keeps getting better-sharing a bed with Dean Winchester! Clever comment from him about Sam not knowing how to handle the shock of her reaching into his pocket!
Author's Response: Wouldn't we all love to share a bed with Dean Winchester although I'd rather he was in a bit better shape at the time. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great technique changing from the third person POV to first person! I love the silent conversation between Dean and Sam! I could picture the raise of eyebrows, shrugs and lip quirks.
Author's Response: I liked that bit myself too. Very proud of this damn little story....I don't brag often but this one...yeah, I'll behave. And the silent converstaion worked for you. Most people didn't even mention it and I loved it. Thanks for stroking my ego just a bit. Thank You!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
I can understand Richard being upset about his fiance calling another man for comfort in the middle of the night. Ouch! On the other hand, I'd call Dean for comfort anytime if I had his number. Great beginning! The mystery and teasing you use have drawn me in again!
Author's Response: Poorly kept secret - this is my favorite of all the stories I've written! So, to know you're reading makes me VERY, VERY happy! This beginning chapter didn't seem to work for a lot of people but I wanted to introduce Abby and the premise of the story before I brought the guys into it. Worked for me and since it's mine I guess that's what matters. Thanks for reading and for the review of course!
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 11
This was a lovely story. You have a beautiful style of writing. It flowed so smoothly. There were so many nice touches, the songs and how the lyrics dovetailed so nicely with Dean and Sam's situations, the psycho-analysis and how Dean and Sam finally got to clear some feelings up. I really enjoyed reading this; it was like finding a nugget while panning for gold. -- c
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am flattered by your comments on my writing style. This is secretly (or not so much) my favorite story although it's gotten very little attention. I'm so glad that you liked it.
Reviewer: CricketBee (Signed) · Date: 19/02/08 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh wow, you found the perfect song for Dean. sniff, sniff. i gotta go get a box of kleenex before in continue reading this ... --c
Author's Response: Thank you, I thought it was perfect myself. Thanks for reading and the review.
Reviewer: minifish (Signed) · Date: 12/01/08 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
Excellent story, thank you!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 11
perfect ending! love this story from cover to cover, thanks for the awesome read...
Author's Response: Thank you for all the wonderful reviews. It was great to know someone out there was reading it.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 10
another great and long one. Love the whole part where they share teir memories, and drink, and laugh, it's so good to hear them laugh...
Author's Response: I agree I wish they laughed more on the show.
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 9
great chapter, love your Dean. Loved everything btw, lots things said, and some unsaid too.. Next one!
Author's Response: Gotta say that I'm particularly proud of my Dean also. I love him snarky but not an ass. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
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