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Reviewer: zerosbabe (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 10:27 PM · On: Guardian at Twilight

your poetry is never boring you capture such great images in so few words. Beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you, Danielle. I'm so appreciate your kind words about my efforts, particularly the poetry.

Reviewer: Noelani618 (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 05:13 PM · On: Guardian at Twilight

Nicely done. Fits Dean perfectly. Kudos!

Author's Response: Thank you, Noelani618. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 08:25 AM · On: Guardian at Twilight

It's not boring. It's beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it and left me a review.

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 06:43 AM · On: Guardian at Twilight

TOLD YA!! Perfect Ness! The banner situates us exactly in the right frame of mind for this poem.
Dean the brother - fidgety, restless, playful, on the go. animated passions.
Dean the hunter - silent, still, all senses on high alert missing nothing, stealth, barely breathing.
...and here is that hunter in your brilliant poem. Your contrast between the skittish leaves and the motionless man IS the many facets of Dean, IS the brother and the hunter, dramatic in opposition.
"night tripped clumsily over twilight and fell hard, landing with a thud" and "thought-locked limbs" - you are the queen of painting pictures with words. Your talent is awe inspiring. Don't ever stop.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Petra. As always, your review leaves me speechless. I'm humbled by your kind words about my work.
I must admit that I reused that "night tripping over twilight" line from the last chappy of "Scratch". It's a line that has just been stuck in my head and I used it in "Scratch" but yet was still drawn to it for use in a poem.
I so appreciate your encouragement to post this and am grateful for your lovely review.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 04:06 AM · On: Guardian at Twilight

The more I read this, the more I can see him standing, watching, poised for action!
You paint a beautiful picture Ness!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Lou. Your kind words mean a lot to me.

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 01:28 AM · On: Guardian at Twilight

Beautiful Ness, so glad you decided to post

Author's Response: Thank you, Lorraine. I'm glad you enjoyed this little piece.

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 12:54 AM · On: Guardian at Twilight

Beautiful like autumn, Dean and your poetry! This's a perfect description about Dean on guard during a hunt... When I think you couldn't be any better than you already are, you go and write something amazing. I guess it's called sheer talent... How does it feel to be so talented? Because I can only imagine, lol.
Are you planning on publishing something in the future? More poetry?

Author's Response:
Ahhh, Scanilla, how kind of you to say such nice things. You've set me to blushing. Thank you for your review.
At some point, yes, I probably will publish another book of poetry. Who knows--maybe I'll even do that novel I keep thinking about.

Reviewer: Dean494 (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 08:22 PM · On: Guardian at Twilight

Thanks Vanessa, it's not boring. Is refreshing to read a poem that in few words describes Dean. Poetry is difficult. Keep going.

Author's Response: Thank you, Dean494. I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed this poem and didn't find it boring. I appreciate you taking the time to review and let me know. :-)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 07:40 PM · On: Guardian at Twilight

Good job Nessa! A very apt description of Dean's protective hunter side.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Shannon. I really appreciate your kind words about this poem. :-) I'd hate to think I was boring everyone with them.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 06:40 PM · On: Guardian at Twilight

And you just want to be standing right there beside him..... Very lonely ....chilling in a nice way...knowing he's on guard against something....our hunter, our Dean...

Author's Response:
Thank you, Jude. Yeah, it's one of those times when you just want to walk up next to him and wrap your arms around him. Ease his burden a bit.

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