Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 16/08/08 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 4

I have just reread this story for the upteenth time and have to say its one of my favourites from the Brotherhood. I dontt quite know why I keep coming back to it but I do. 

I love the Brotherhood universe so much I wish there was a new story every week to read. I hope real life never stops you writing. 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 3

Amazing chapter!  I was riding a rollercoaster of emotion, anger, hope, worry, excitement.  I'm living it as you write it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh no!  Not Caleb!  He's the only real friend Dean has.  I'm eager to see how the small group of hunters deal with their grief.  And they didn't say Caleb was dead...just missing.  There's still hope.

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 4

Terrific story Ridley and probably one of the best 'gifts' I read this season.  Thanks so much and I look forward to your next one.

 

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 26/12/07 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 4

Loved this, really well written...

Thanks

Dix

 

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 25/12/07 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 4

Another Great Story! Thanks for the entertainment while being stuck in the airport. Can't wait for more stories. Hope you have a fun and safe holiday

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/07 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 4

This was awesome.

 Merry Christmas to you as well

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 2

oh man, heartbreaking story. Loved Sam's thoughts about "the mother in the house", loved the memories, and well, love Dean...

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 3

If I have thought it once I have thought it a thousand times..... a week is too LONG!!!!  Fantastic chapter. I like the way you throw in hints of Ian's involvement and plotting with Porter, maybe part of Porter's approval of Sam in the future? Joshua shows a more sensitive side, his growing admiration of the boys skills as hunters and his comment about Dean carrying on Caleb's memory - with his smart mouth!!!

The winding road to hope for Dean is really well plotted, and it is with a sense of desperation that Dean follows it. Sam's skills as a future scholar are displayed well here, even to the point of Dean hoping he could be a little less analytical.

 The way you reveal the other characters in the community - Esme and Mac, John and Bobby, is also interesting and provides depth. Mackland gaining a personal insight into the loss he has up to now, only witnessed in other parents during his professional dealings, was skillfully portrayed. The fact that he was so open with Esme, does make me smile faintly at the thought of Caleb and Josh dealing with the possible outcome?!!!

If I have ranted on like an obsessive fan, I am afraid that is what you and Tida have reduced me too, but boy am I enjoying the fall! Wonderful update in an inspired story!

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 3

Excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 2

The raw emotions of the characters is skillfully written - especially how you lay bear John's feelings for his protege. Dean bonding with Mac and their shared memories of Caleb... *got to find a HAPPY PLACE!!!!! ;-} * I have been indulging in your Brotherhood AU and owe you a truck load of reviews!!! This story - though hard on the tear ducts is equally easy on the imagination, you paint your pictures vividly and draw out the pain so well!

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 2

I was so excited to see another Brotherhood story. I have read them all so far and I hope you keep more coming. I love reading the Brotherhood stories as much as I love watching the show.

The first two chapters of this story were amazing! I know Caleb not dead but you still had me close to tears. Oh, and Harland (what a cold hearted dick) John or Esme should have taken him out with a punch or a slap.

Can't wait for the next chapter. The 15th can't come soon enough!

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 2

oh, i can't wait for the rest of the story.  You had me in tears with Dean's pain. 

Crystal