Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Just Another Crappy Day!
This chapter is good and Sam and Dean must have hated that job.
Author's Response: We've all held crappy jobs, Sharky ....but NONE as crappy as theirs!!
Glad the site doesn't have smellivision!!!
vanessa & jude
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 Aversion Therapy
Another great chapter ladies, love the part with the old ladies ogling Dean and Sam in their boxers. They have exquisite taste wouldn't you agree. Y'know if I didn't go to Lancaster, and palm dale, I would think biscuits and gravy together was nasty. In London biscuits is y'alls cookies. Poor Sam and that phobia of his, very funny how his pillow connected with Dean's smirk. Keep it coming ladies, loving it!!! Schelz
Author's Response: Exquisite taste indeed !!! Scones are your biscuits right, Schelz??Biscuits and Gravy are a staple food here!! More to come very soon, young lady....glad you are enjoying this...thanks for the high rating!!! :0) jude & vanessa
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 Aversion Therapy
Cookies all round. Thanks for the fun!
Author's Response: Even though we're trying to watch our figures we'll gladly take all the cookies you want to give!! If you're having as much fun reading it as we are writing it then we're more than satisfied. Vanessa & jude
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 3 Aversion Therapy
hi you two, have already told you both what i think of this chapter so hurry up and rite the next. Lorraine
Author's Response: We're working on it, Lorraine.....chapter 4 on deck this week...and 5 being written
thanks for sticking with us...just keep those pretty stars and cookies coming :0) jude & vanessa
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 3 Aversion Therapy
OK .... I'm still laughing at this story. Poor Sam, his clown phobia really puts him in a terrible position. Hey, who wouldn't want the chance to pinch Dean's bum..... the 2 old ladies had it right - that kind of eye candy would stop any female .............better stop that train of thought. You two are really AWESOME!!!!!! The idea of the Winchesters hip deep in waste...ugh..... yet, very , very, funny. I do think Dean will regret teasing Sammy about the clowns- i just have the feeling it will backfire on hum and Sam. Anyway, this is great - please update soon. EXCELLENT WORK!!!!! BRAVO
Author's Response: Poor Sam's clown phobia is NOT going to get any better in this story. He's in for a rough time of it in coming chapters.
Yes, the boys are eye candy for women of any age, aren't they? Such wonderful compliments to be tossed our way and lovely stars too?? thank you, thank you.... Vanessa & jude
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 13/12/07 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 3 Aversion Therapy
Ladies - you had me from the first line...just too funny... ...and what is it about Dean and dogs that just works sooo well?? More of Mildred and Dorothy please..they rock..and awww, poor Sam.. Keep it coming, I'm having a ball with this treat
Author's Response: Can you tell how much fun we're having writing this? Yeah, Dean and dog dynamic just adds something special to a story. Knowing how the poor boys deal with Missouri, figured Mildred & Dorothy would be a great addition...more to come... Thanks for our stars, Lou... Jude & Vanessa
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Just Another Crappy Day!
Okay, first of all guys: AWESOME STORY! I think I got chills and uncontrollable giggles all in one breath...whew... okay an' Jude...I didn't e-mail you for some reason but I LOVE YOU!!!!! THE DEAN KEYCHAIN IS AWWEEEESOOOMMMEEE!!!!!! I think I petted it for about five minutes before realizing that was reeaaally creepy... and I pinned Sam up on my wall... :D....so thank you. SOOO much! Hee hee....great job on the story, guys....
Author's Response: Can't ask for more than chills and uncontrollable giggles all in one breath. That's an ultimate compliment..... thanks for the lovely stars, shiny, soooo appreciated... :0) vanessa and jude
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 11/12/07 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Just Another Crappy Day!
Hehehhe....great chapter ladies!
Author's Response: For once, Laura, it is actually a compliment when we hear people describe this chapter as "crappy" .....lol Thanks for your continued encouraging support...:0) jude and vanessa
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up
This is really creepy and i like it, i love creepy stories. It's brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks, Sharky........ love doing creepy murders......... We're trying to make this one as creepy as possible and it's really good to hear that it's working. ... Jude and Vanessa
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Just Another Crappy Day!
Get in there girl! Pinching Dean's bum, loving it. lol This is hilarious, Sam and Dean upto their eyes in poop. And Paige's death, so got a visual of it, very descriptive. Great job ladies! Schelz
Author's Response: ooooooo, Stars, Schelz....very nice to see!! We just couldn't ask for a nicer review than that, Schelz. It's really good to hear that all the various parts of this chapter worked just as they were supposed to. Thank you so much!" :0) Vanessa & Jude
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Just Another Crappy Day!
Loving it. More please... ;) Merrie
Author's Response: We're very happy to hear that you're loving this joint effort. If you're enjoying reading it as much as we're enjoying writing it, we're excited. :0) V & J
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Just Another Crappy Day!
haha this is hysterical! I love the lady stroking Dean's bum! well wouldn't we all if we had the chance! And you made him blush about it - that's so sweet! And then you covered them in shit - poor boys! Can I go hose them down? Growl! Bird x
Author's Response: well, others may see him as a jaded ladies' man but we see the sweetheart beneath all that!! Who says Volunteerism is DEAD??" sure the boys will appreciate the offer ..we'll save you a place in line...right BEHIND us!!!! hahaha....Jude and Vanessa
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up
uggh! always thought clowns were freakily weird - now you've confirmed it for me. Loved the carnivorous Dean, that boy is such an animal! Heehee! Of for next chappy now Bird x
Author's Response: Yep, Birdie that comparison at the end of Ch 1 was just begging to be made...Jude is a t-rex too and loves bloody steak... After starting this story even cutesy clowns freak us out !!! :0) Vanessa & Jude
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Just Another Crappy Day!
You girls are having way too much fun with this story! And it shows---marvelous job! A really fun read!
Author's Response: so glad you're liking it, Shannon.... we are as interested in seeing where this leads as you guys are.. Have to admit it's as much fun to write as it is for you to read...thank you for the read & review... :0) vanessa & jude
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Just Another Crappy Day!
Hi ness, fancy you doing your laundry when sam and dean walk in. Don't blame you for pinching his bum. Nasty death scene, and digging through shit was well written. Lorraine
Author's Response: lorraine...you know stars are great motivators... Vanessa volunteered to do a cameo as an extra...got paid peanuts but said the fringe benefits were awesome something about it was great pay in the 'end' or did she say 'butt' ?? who knew gruesome deaths could be soooo much fun?? Jude & Vanessa
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/12/07 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Just Another Crappy Day!
Yikes...knew this would get messy. The 'shitty job' line had me lol, and go with the gore. Knew this would be great as soon as I saw both your names up together...awesome, roll on next update!
Author's Response: oooooooo, Lou ...more pretty stars..... Yes, ma'am, more gore is on the menu and of course a bit more humor as well....... and a LOT more Dean and Sam.... Been great for the two of us to team up and explore our 'darker' sides... :0) vanessa & jude
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up
I'm never taking my children to a carnival again! Spooky! I had to turn on the light to finish reading! You girls rock the house!
Author's Response: And to think that Ringling Bros. and Barnum & Bailey promote this kind of terror ! Thanks, Shannon....so glad you liked it ... :0) jude and Vanessa
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up
Well, that was um....gross. But very, very good. You have me hooked. Please update this fast!
Author's Response: we agree....the ear was gross, but the steak was very, very good......... So glad you enjoyed it and kindly took the time to review....... :0) Jude and Vanessa
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up
Wow - I love my gore as much as Pooka Bunnie loves her turkey, so keep it coming ladies - this is a work of art! Loving it!!
Author's Response: 5 STARS, Lou !!! Thank you so very much....thanks for the ART comment... We will balance the GORE with some humor as usual....so hopefully that will be okay.... :0) Vanessa & Jude
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 02/12/07 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up
Wow! Now that is what I call torture ladies, poor teddy really didn't have a good day either. The title of the chapter makes me wonder, is this Button's doing?...that sounds funny, 'buttons' Dont mind me, I am just babbling on like I do. Lol I am readying myself for more squeamish chapters. Can't wait! Having fun ladies??? Schelz
Author's Response: Schelz, Thank you sooo much for reading, reviewing and rating!!! Well, sweetie, ready yourself for some humor as well....remember which crazy ladies you're dealing with here.... And, yes, we're are loving it!!! V & J
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up
This is very well written - and as an unexpected bonus you're making my decision not to be naughty and have a steak for dinner easier to live with... the grilled salmon I actually had is looking up!
Author's Response: Thank you, DR, for the great compliment....So you think we could sell this as some type of aversion therapy program..."Cut the Cholesterol and Calories with Clownie!" Can just see those infomercials now... heheheh Glad the salmon was equally palatable ..... :0) ness & jude
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up
Great start...I can't wait to read more. Laura
Author's Response: Laura, so glad you're enjoying the beginning of our ride.... hope you will like the places we go and the things we do....... thank you also for our lovely rating....very kind... Jude & Ness
Reviewer: heather03nmg (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up
Loved it. Just the right amount of gore and plenty of suspense and mystery to keep me wanting more (hee that totally rhymed and I didn't mean it to) Awesome job!
Author's Response: Wow....no one ever wrote us a poem before.....That was sooo cute!! happy to know there's just the right amount of gore along with the suspense and mystery to keep everything edge-of-your-seat-interesting .....hope you will continue to enjoy this Thank you Heather for our lovely stars as well....
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up
WELL MY FRIENDS THIS IS SO VERY GOOD . HORROR AT ITS BEST.GREAT ARGUEMENT BETWEEN TED AND BUTTONS. HAMSTRINGING REALLY NASTY WHOS NASTY IDEA WAS THAT? AND THE WHOLE CHEWING ON THE EAR AND SCENE SHIFT TO STEAK HOUSE MASTERFUL! I WILL NEVER LOOK AT A RARE STEAK THE SAME WAY AGAIN! WELL DONE NESS AND JUDE LOVE IT. BY THE WAY BANNER NOT BAD EITHER LORRAINE
Author's Response: Lorraine, Thank you, thank you, thank you......especially for our lovely twinkling stars!! How kind of you to enjoy ted's little ear-chewing.....Vanessa is trying to tame me but not sure it will work this early in our game.....the hamstringing was a mutual agreement i think... I agree VANESSA'S banner ROCKS !!!!!
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