Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 14/03/08 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 7 Bozo and Hot Barbie Bikes
Ha! The image of the clown-demon on a pink Barbie bike...lol...Just GREAT! Wonderful chapter ladies! Laura
Author's Response: First of all, Laura, we'd like to say THANK YOU...THANK YOU....THANK YOU... for the delicious stars!!! We loved that image as well, bit demented ...but then so are we!!! So glad you're enjoying our little tale..... Jude and Vanessa
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/03/08 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 6 Entrance of the Gladiators
Knife wielding clown jack-in-the-boxes? Damn! I want one for my baby! (Yeah, if his name was Damien!) You girls must laugh the whole time you're writing! I know I laugh the whole time I'm reading! You have the brothers down perfectly!
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 5 Not a Laughing Matter
Excellent! You girls never cease to make me laugh! And just when the Winchesters thought their luck had changed, it comes back to bite them in the butt! Now if you were the type of ladies who downloaded music unlawfully (which I'm sure you're not) you wouldn't be too happy to be Lars Ulrich.
Reviewer: Kumaproogey (Signed) · Date: 20/02/08 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 5 Not a Laughing Matter
Absolutely incredible beginning – so vivid & vicious! Loved it – grabbed me & refused to let me go – I was hooked. The writing is phenomenal. The humor, behavior and conversations are so realistic and true to the characters, the rapport you write between the two is spot on. Good break up between Sam & Dean & the other storyline, it flowed really well. Mildred & Dorothy were hilarious – had me grinning from ear to ear.
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 30/01/08 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 6 Entrance of the Gladiators
OK.... this has been some ride. Clownie McCreepy- i just burst out laughing. making Sammy go thru a Clown exhibit is just plain cruel!!!!Love it. This story has been top notch right from the beginning-AWESOME job!!!!! Clowns-you either love them or hate them......poor Sam. Excellent story-more please. BRAVO!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow--ReccaF--thank you so much. You pay us such a lovely compliment saying this story is top notch. Glad to hear you liked, and laughed out loud at, 'Clownie MCreepy". Yes, poor Sammy, we're having fun putting him through the wringer in this story. Though he'll get his revenge . . . eventually.....we'll make sure of it!!!! More to come soon we promise! And thank you for all the lovely stars." Jude and Vanessa
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 6 Entrance of the Gladiators
Fabulous update ladies. As always your descriptions are wonderful. Happy day? so who's the avid watcher, Jude or Ness? Thanks for the Great update Lorraine
Author's Response: Jude defers to Ness on this one Lorraine..... It's Vanessa who is the TV junkie of this duo. Which helps Dean out exceptionally well. hehe....... Thank you for your perfect rating, Lorraine Vanessa & Jude
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 6 Entrance of the Gladiators
Bartolo is an ass! Great chapter ladies. I am very much enjoying this story. Laura
Author's Response: Laura, you have us seeing stars..... Now that is one good way to describe ol' Bartolo. So happy that you're enjoying this story. Our hope is to entertain...... :0) Jude and Vanessa
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 6 Entrance of the Gladiators
ahahahha loving this story, can't wait for the next chapt! poor sammy and his fear for clowns...they really are super creepy! I have a bad feeling that Sammy's gonna be traumatized after this hunt
Author's Response: Thanks for our stars.... Yeah, this hunt definitely isn't going to do anything toward curing his phobia that's for sure. Vanessa & Jude
Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 6 Entrance of the Gladiators
I'm with Sam on this one - macaroni salad doesn't count! The clown museum, though, didn't have to be Sam to be creeped out by those dolls - ugh! Enjoyed it, Angela
Author's Response: It's just sooo Dean to try to convince Sam it counts because there's 'salad' in the name. hehe And it sure wasn't only Sam who was creeped out by those dolls. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Vanessa & Jude
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 6 Entrance of the Gladiators
Well, Buttons is still one freaky dude...the 'jack in a box' is still the thing of my nightmares - a knife of a spring, go figure - and the banter is still second to none. But yeah I love the add-ons...Poor Sam, yet more unwanted attention...and the Happy Days reference? Awesome, I can just see those two sitting and watching re-runs of hat show...all those cars and leather, Dean would be in heaven... And to finish..Dean's idea of what constitutes a 'healthy' diet is just priceless...awesome ladies!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, Buttons is a few clowns short of a circus. Figures he thinks his weird toys are perfectly normal. Dean seems to know a good bit about all things TV, definitely can picture him and Sammy watching Happy Days. And, yeah, his idea of "healthy" is sure far different from Sam's. But was a good trick to get Sammy to order something hearty--if not healthy. Oh, louy, compliments and pretty stars to boot.... :0) Vanessa & Jude
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 Entrance of the Gladiators
fantastic update,more please.
Author's Response: It's so good to hear you're enjoying this story so much. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. More to come soon, we promise. Vanessa & Jude
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 5 Not a Laughing Matter
great story,enjoying this,creepy and funny.
Author's Response: So glad to hear you're enjoying this story. We're trying to keep it a good balance between the two.... Jude and Vanessa
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/01/08 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 4 Anatomy Lessons
Hey gals, which of you is Mildred and which is Dorothy? :) Love the story, especially the way the clown tortures Frank before he kills him. Hmmm...what would a therapist say about your Lorena Bobbit tendencies?
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it so far, Shannon.......We try to avoid shrinks...they may think there is really something behind all the blood and gore....maybe it's our alter egos ....Mildred and Dot......'cuz we know we're just sweet things at heart...
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 5 Not a Laughing Matter
And yet again you've put a smile on my face...Dean is trully terrified of those ladies, and quite right too... ...and poor Sam. Keep it coming ladies - this story rocks...
Author's Response: Dean and his ladies...Sam and his clowns...! TERROR is alive and well in the lives of the Winchester boys... So glad we made you smile, Lou... because your kind reviews and ratings certainly put smiles on our faces.... :0) Vanessa & Jude
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 5 Not a Laughing Matter
Fabulous update ladies, poor sammy you are determined to torture him. Good lots more please LORRAINE
Author's Response: stars, stars, stars....how sweet of you, lorraine !!! Yeah, poor Sam. He doesn't even know what he's in for yet. .......so stay tuned...... Vanessa and Jude :0)
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 06/01/08 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 5 Not a Laughing Matter
Aawwww.....poor Sam. Great and wonderful chapter ladies! Laura
Author's Response: We're very happy to know liking the story, Laura. Thank you so much for your support and encouragement.
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 05/01/08 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 4 Anatomy Lessons
ohhhh Dean in a black T shirt...hmmmmm, and those ladies and their need to fondle his bicep - just too funny for words...keep the updates coming ladies, you're having fun here...I can tell..lol
Author's Response: Aren't Dorothy & Mildred just a delight? Never stood a chance of resisting Dean and those luscious muscles, nicely shown off by that black t-shirt. Thank you, Lou, for your enthusiasm, encouragement, and support.... and all those lovely stars!!! Jude & Vanessa
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 4 Anatomy Lessons
Poor Dean, molested by two geriatric woman...hehehe...lucky women. Great chapter. Laura
Author's Response: We can all dream though, can't we, Laura ?
Reviewer: bayre (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 3 Aversion Therapy
Awwww....poor Sam. Good chaper! Laura
Author's Response: Thanks, laura.....it's nice to see you sticking with us through this one .....soon we won't be the only ones after Sam
Reviewer: danny (Signed) · Date: 21/12/07 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 4 Anatomy Lessons
Yes i love the story so far can't wait for the nxt chapter
Author's Response: Danny, It warms our hearts to know that you're liking the story so far and are looking forward to more. thank you for your high rating .... working on chapter 5 today... Jude and Vanessa
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 20/12/07 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 4 Anatomy Lessons
This is really good, the person responsible for the murders is gory.
Author's Response: Well, yeah, gory--but gory in a good way, we hope. Sorry if it upset you, Sharky, it wasn't our intention, usually our readers are much older. :0) vanessa & jude
Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 20/12/07 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 4 Anatomy Lessons
Okay, so in no particular order ladies;) One word for frank...OUCH!!! How did I know you guys were gna do that to the poor mans pride and joy? When Molly found out about the affair, (not the first) I thought of what most women think of (I shoulda cut it off. Lol) As soon as Franks pants were torn from his body I knew you ladies were gna go there. Visuals again, didn't exactly need it for Franks death but got it anyway, so thanks for that. Then...Fragile Flossie??? Loved it "You make me sound like a cow or something." Hilarious!!! Mildred and Dorothy, anatomy lessons indeed!!! Well done to the biddies, they did what some younger women wouldn't dare to. (molest Dean) with his permission off course. Whole part was hilarious... How's that for a Christmas cookie? Keep it coming ladies, loving it!!! Schelz
Author's Response: A MOST delicious cookie indeed, Schelz .....and all those lovely stars to light our way to the next chapter... Fragile Flossie.... It just sounded like something darling Dean would come up with. Yep, Mildred & Dorothy are two brave souls. Maybe advanced age makes you not as fearful....You can always blame stuff on senility...heheh It's really good to hear that you found this chapter hilarious, as parts of it were definitely meant to be. Vanessa & Jude
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 20/12/07 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 3 Aversion Therapy
This is a riot! So many funny things! I laughed out loud when I read the Clown Will Eat Me pin. My daughter is about ready to have me committed.
Author's Response: If you only knew how often Vanessa and I have fits of giggles while we're writing these chapters! It's good to know our senses of humor translate well into what we're writing. .....thanks for reading Shannon.....If you let us know where 'they' send you we'll try to forward 'hard copies' to your ward for you.... Jude & Vanessa
Reviewer: supernaturaldh (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 3 Aversion Therapy
Excellent story. Poor Sam. Dean making fun of him in a brotherly way was just too cute. Love it. supernaturaldh
Author's Response: Well, what's a good Winchester story without a bit (okay, a LOT) of brotherly teasing. Dean just gets in a groove and can't stop himself. Maybe one of these days, Sam will actually get him back.
We've decided to see if some aversion therapy will help or hinder Sam's cure....so stay tuned....Thanks for the nice rating, DH......... Jude & Vanessa
Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 3 Aversion Therapy
This chapter is really good, Dean is so cruel messing with Sam and his phobia.
Author's Response: Not cruel really, just enjoys using his position as big brother to be a pain in the butt to Sam. You know how great it is to share with siblings ...the good and the bad.....and the teasing :0) Vanessa and jude
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