Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 02/03/08 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 12

Well done, another emotional chapter. Poor Dean, he can never get a break, can he? But that's what we love :) Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 11

this was beautiful and tragic al at the same time.

I cried for Bobby- he would have been a good father-yet, to see how happy Dean was with John and Mary-additional pain dumped on a good man.

your writing is so vivid and the "pictures" only too real .

this makes the health problems  of Dean's a serious blow to the older hunter.

excelent verbage and timing-you are an excellent storyteller.

OUTSTANDING work!!!!!!

Reviewer: Soennelchen (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 11

Wonderful chapter! Loved the Winchester family in the diner. And you made one just want to reach out to give Bobby a hug and comfort him. Looking forward to more!


Author's Response: Thanks.  Glad you liked the scene in the diner.  It went through about 3 rewrites.  I'm hard at work on the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 24/02/08 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 11

good job

Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: Mokibobolink (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 10

Awesome story! I have to tell you that I honestly never thought I'd like a story that didn't feature hunting but you do a great job with these characters. I still see the same Sam, Dean, John and Bobby but put into a completely new situation.

I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 10

Gotta keep the muse happy - can't let it join mine on strike because I'm having too much fun reading this for it too stop.  Enjoyed the update, I can just see John and Bobby going at it!  - Angela

Reviewer: gater91 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/08 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 10

great job! i loved it! update soon!

 

Reviewer: red11 (Signed) · Date: 20/01/08 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 9

Ahhh, how cute and sweet John conversation to Dean. You wrote that well! It made me smile and brought tears to my eyes. Loved it! Thanks for a great chapter and I can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 9

Yeah, the book fit's Dean to a T, but I was so looking for the Bobby chapter where all is explained...

Have to eagerly await the next chapter now with bated breath...but this was a great chapter by the way!

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 19/01/08 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 9

Is it possible your name is actually Sam? Cuz I seriously think you are psychic - I was just thinking about this story yesterday and the horrible cliff hanger you left us with.... and yeah - still hanging on that cliff! Is Bobby Dean's Dad???? This chapter was totally sweet, however. And I have been enjoying Westcott in the mean time too.....

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 8

ooohhh will try to patiently wait for a update. good job!

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 8

WOW........

Ok , talk about a major twist!!!!!!

OUTSTANDING work!!!!!!

You have totally nailed the Winchester way- the love comes thru loud and clear. Sam is at his best in this story-anything for Dean.

John is a surprise- he gets on my nerves the way he avoids the boys sometimes.

Can't wait for the update!!!!!

BRAVO!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 8

Jeez, Judy I can't believe that reveal at the end of this chapter...amazing.

I don't want to say too much cos I don't want to ruin the surprise if anyone looks at the review but OMG...and I love the idea.

What a can of worms you've just opened, can't wait to be a fly on the wall during the conversation that's about to happen.

Roll on next update...