Reviewer: saltnburnem (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
loved it!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot hun, glad you loved it, means a lot. Schelz | |
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
Nice Job Schelz! Happy to see that you posted it! And everyone loves it too! Very original idea and I was happy to help...anytime honey! Great Job and keep it up! Gengen
Author's Response: Hey hun Thanks for reviewing, I know, I am so happy to get all these great reviews. You all rock!!! Thanks for the stars gen, thanks for helping me with this story. Lovin the stars. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
I really loved this! It was very well written...wow. My heart was crying right along with Sam! Nice job! ~kayla
Author's Response: Hey Kayla Glad you loved this and found it to be well written. I was blubbering while writing it so I'm glad it did the same for you. Schelz | |
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
so glad you ending it with sam waking up...I was going to be depressed otherwise:)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing hun, very appreciated. Tell me about it, the boys have enough tragedy, I could never do it to them for real. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
Well, you made me cry. As I always do when I read about the culmination of Dean's deal. What a story!
Author's Response: Ahh, sorry and glad at the same time that this made you cry. Glad you liked this, thanks for reviewing hun. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
ok, just let me catch my breath...I soo thought that was it! As you dragged that day out (creative idea, intense, but creative!) my heart beat faster as I laughed and cried(literally *more tissues*) with the boys. What an emotional rollercoaster you had us ride! That scene where they cried together, Sam curled against his brother on the floor...OMG!! My heart melted! Beautifully written. And then you you trumped yourself with that 'suicide' scene!! The emotion was so intense it leapt out the page and the lump in my throat threatened to strangle me. Dean putting together the album was pure Dean, the family he has always craved to have whole, the family of the future he wished for Sammy. Amazing, you had me all the way! And then, the twist. Thank Goodness. Dean feeling Sam's heart rocketing as he held him, no words between them needed. But when you did wrap words around this awesome scene, they were perfect "I'm glad you're here with me, wouldn't dream of anyone else in your place. Ever" Dean mightn't do the chick flick thing often, but when he does he shoots straight from the heart. The song you chose is perfect, for this fic and for the boys. Your first oneshot - you nailed it!!
Author's Response: Wow! Petra, tears formed in my eyes as I read this. I am sooo ecstatic to have this chunky review from you, thrilled that you felt the emotion was intense. I'm tryna find another way to word it but there'z nothing to explain the feeling overwhelming me. Glad I had you the whole way through, so happy that you agree with my song choice. Means a whole lot that you think I nailed this. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Impala (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
Holy Winchester...man I am so speechless after reading this Schelz so completely original and very sad. The dialogue between brothers was at times very funny and then very heartfelt and emotional..which made this story all the more special! I loved the twist at the end! :) -Bex
Author's Response: Bex, you're a sweet heart, you know that right? I am so thrilled you think this story is special and glad you liked the twist. Love the stars Schelz | |
Reviewer: hgarf (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
That was fab and I had to reach for the tissues about halfway through. An emotional rollercoaster in just one chapter. Brilliant!!!
Author's Response: Hey hgarf Glad to have found a new reader, thanks for the awesome review and stars hun. I am so happy you liked it. Schelz | |
Reviewer: Silvertayl (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
Great story,I enjoyed reading so much, liked the end, the boys are off to Vegas at last. Good work. Silvertayl
Author's Response: Thanks for dropping by Elaine, really glad you liked it. Yep, they're off to vegas, maybe I should do a one-shot of them in vegas, what do you think? Lol, just kidding. Schelz | |
Reviewer: JMDoody (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
You made me cry which I hate to do. Well done!! I've said it before and I'll say it again. You nail emotion!
Author's Response: Ahh, Jenn thanks for the stars, I downloaded keane with or without, I listened to it while reading this. You were right, not a good combo, I cried too. I am thrilled you think I nailed the emotion. Schelz | |
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
Beautiful, this is so original! I went through laughing and crying, all the way through to the end where I was just sooo relieved! Great work Schelz, you're awesome!
Author's Response: Lou, you know ur reviews are from heaven to me, I'm truly glad this story was able to make you laugh as well as cry. Thanks alot for the stars, you're a diamond girl! Schelz | |
Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
Brilliant writing. When Sam was pulling the trigger my heart broke completely... I think there're still some pieces on the floor. I loved your ending, it makes me feel hopeful. Though I loved this whole thing. Top job Schelz! :)
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks alot Scan, glad you liked the way it was written and liked the ending. I couldn't bring myself to make it real. Schelz | |
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
Ahh Schelz, I laughed, I cried, I loved it. Crystal
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks Crys:) I'm glad I was able to make you laugh as well as cry. Schelz | |
Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you
So nice to see a fresh fic from you, and a one-shot at that. This was just breath taking, and so emotional. You have a knack for emotion, I believed it. I like how this is more or less from Sam's perspective, I don't think Sam could live w/o Dean. Very well written. Suga
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read my very first one-shot. Glad you liked this, I agree, I don't think Sam could live w/o Dean. Schelz | |
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