Reviewer: soncnica (Signed) · Date: 18/07/09 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

"I love it when you call me Sammy." damn right he does....you know..in Bloodlust I just love that He's the only one who gets to call me that.....:))

Dean stood up and hugged Sam "It's gonna be just fine, you hear me?" Dean fought his tears as he felt Sam's nod against his shoulder. It was like Sam was a kid again, scared of the dark and in desperate need of protecting by his big brother. awwwwwwwwwww

This was a sad and a fun story to read! the whole: he ain't heavy, he's my brother thing....gosh....

there are so many things I loved in this little fic that I don't know where to start, so I'll just say I loved it all! 

S.

 

Author's Response:

omg this is one of my oldest stories, I'm really glad you stopped by to remind me of it.

Thank you so much for mentioning the parts you liked, I know, I tend to write sad stories a lot and I don't actually know why. lol

I love that only Dean gets to call Sam Sammy too, it's another way of displaying their affection for each other. Sam would never allow anyone else to call him that because nicknames develop out of feelings. It can signify love, friendship, a bond that no one from the outside can understand.

I'm over the moon that you loved it all, thanks a lot for reviewing hun.

<3

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

That scared the hell out of me, but was well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much Sam, the stars and your kind words humble me ;)

Reviewer: Andromeda171 (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

I can't hate you Schelir, you're my best friend, but Im gonna hate you for making me cry! For making me love this beautiful short epic of sadness. Oh Dean!

You gripped the moment very smartly & skillfully & put me in the mood, I was left eyes puffy & nose runny after I finished reading it three times. They can't do that to Dean, they can't send him to hell not after what he's done for his family, they can't do this to us; poor viewers & you can't do this to me, pretty lady! Promise me something wild & funny in the near future

A+ story, you're improving day by day, lovie, keep writing

Loveeeeeeee

Author's Response:

Aww hun that's good to know;) you're defo one of my best friends!!! Sorry I made you cry, kinda...thanks for calling this a beautiful short epic of sadness;)

Niiice, gripped you and put you in the mood, only to leave you all puffy eyed and runny nosed ;) I shouldn't be happy you cried, just proud such a personal favorite could pull such emotions from you!

I hope they don't do that to Dean, I'm pretty sure they won't...

I have something already ...it's pretty funny and very wild (Whatever yo do. Don't flush!) I warn you, actually you already know how weird and freaky I am!

Thanks for the grade and stars! and for noticing inprovement in my work;)

Schelir x x

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

This story made me cry badly. It's heart breaking, but I'm sure it'll never happen.

Author's Response:

Aww sharx, sorry I made you cry! *grins* It is very heart breaking and I hope it never happens..

 

Schelz x x x

Reviewer: Dewyeyed (Signed) · Date: 17/01/08 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

WOW!!! How do you do it? So much emotion, believable emotion.

I'm so mad that I didn't read this earlier, I swear all your stories are going in my favorites.

 Seriously please do a story with me. *pleads* the stuff you come out with is just amazing and breath taking.

And what I was trying to avoid throughout reviewing was admitting that this made me cry like a baby!!!

 The words burnt right through me --- when Dean said the reason why he never cried is because he was scared that once he started he would NEVER stop! AMAZING....

Thanks so much for sharing such great stories about our boys;)

DRU-BABY

Author's Response:

I'm an emotional creature I guess, glad you found the emotion believeable that means a lot.  Wow! All my stories? You've got me blushing Dru;) Sorry I made you cry like a baby, I feel proud that my story was able to burn through you. Thanks for reading my stories and thinking they're great;) On the story front, thanks for finding my work amazing and breath taking. Are you serious?? You really want to do a story with me?? I'm not that good hun!!! Schelz

Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 07/12/07 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

OMG... this was just AMAZING!!!!

I just cried with all the pain Sammy was in- Dean's acting as always ... the big brother.

This was OUTSTANDING writing- your words were so powerful and vivid. The emotional level totally over the top. AWESOME!!!!

You brought your readers up and down the emotional scale... and then, bang-it's a dream.TOO COOL!!!!!!

Encellent in every way!!!

Thanks for sharing this .

Bravo!!!!

 

Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you for this lovely review, I am thrilled you found it so powerful, and so happy you went through the emotions as they did. Thanks again, hun:) Schelz

Reviewer: Daydreamer (Signed) · Date: 03/12/07 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

Phew!! I thought that was real. Thank God it was only a dream. And i love your use of poetry. It places emphasis on sam's feelings towards his brother. Love it. Keep it up.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the  reading and reviewing hun, the poetry is actually a song from the hollies. I have my mummy to thank for that, for knowing and listening to songs such as this one. I am glad you felt it showed Sam's feelings.  Schelz

Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

Thank God it was all just a dream!  Really good, but very sad.  Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:

Ahh, thanks for reading hun, I called this 'If I Lost You' coz I just couldn't bare to make it real, love the boys way too much!!! Glad you liked it, love sharing:) Schelz

Reviewer: Rae666 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

I don't want Dean to die... I'm filling up after reading your story. It's not fair! Great work and I'm really glad you didn't actually kill him.. yet.

Author's Response:

Hey Rae. Thanks for the review hun, I am thrilled that you thought this was great work. Sad and happy at the same time that this story had you filling up, I couldn't kill Dean. Love him too much!!! Schelz

Reviewer: Agoldenrose (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

OMG you really had me. im telling you wen i first startin reading it i could feel the tears i had to go and read it by myself, as soon i did the tears rolled down like a river.

you are brilliant wen it comes to emotion. like i always say you hit there characters on the head.

what really had me crying like a baby was the way dean has to make a joke out of everythin but really it hurts sam even more. sam dont want dean to be mr strong he want'shim to show how he really feels. OMG sam's suicide almost killed me, i was so glad wen he woke up.

and then you really out done yourself wen they broke down together and dean is telling sam his gonna find a girl and have kids, but all sam is thinkin he cant have kids and they never got to meet their wisec raking uncle dean.

schelz  i think that the story was beautiful i dont know what else to say im speechless. really keep it up.  im welling up as i write this.

p.s im glad that you did it from sam's point of view. coz rite now everyone is focusin on how dean would do anything for sam, but if i lost you shows what sam would do for dean. wickid.

lots of love golden XxXx

top ratetins.spectacular

Author's Response:

You amaze me with your reviews golden, cheers for this chunky review. So pleased you think you think I write good emotion. Aww, you had to go read this by yourself so you could cry. Ahh bless! I titled this 'If I lost you.' just to show how it could be, but won't be, not in my fics anyway. lol Thanks again. Schelz

Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

Great work Schelz made me laugh and made me cry. well done

LORRAINE

Author's Response:

Hi Hun So glad I could make you laugh and cry, my job here is done. Thanks for reviewing always makes me smile. Schelz

Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

awwww omgg that was so heartbreaking...i noe it was just a dream but :( great one shot!

Author's Response:

Hey Lil'B Thanks for taking the time to read and review, glad you liked it. Schelz

Reviewer: catsalot (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 1- If I lost you

I couldn't stop the tears from rolling down my cheeks. 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing hun, glad I was able to get the emotion across. Schelz