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Reviewer: _Psych_ (Signed) · Date: 10/11/07 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 18

I liked it a lot. I hope there will be a story after this...there might be, i'm going to check now. But yeah, loved the story! Congrads!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 18

Oh, Sam saved Dean. I love it when the protected becomes the protector!
An amazing story! I'm hooked on your work. On to the next story...

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 17

YAY! Good conquers evil yet again!
This has been such an intruiguing and suspenseful story I almost hate for it to end. *sigh*

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 16

Oh no!!! Why can't they just stay in the house and be frightened 7 year olds?! I want to cover my eyes with my hands, but then I wouldn't be able to finish reading. It's like watching a movie when the heroine walks into the dark room and you know the monster is there.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 15

Very strong, powerful words---"if Dean were dead the world would know it." What a touching sentiment!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 14

Each of these kids take upon themselves such huge burdens. It just makes me angry at their fathers. But without foolish fathers there would be no story.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 13

I love it! So much action and still deep thoughts!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 12

I like the line about not needing to be quiet when your cover was blown. Smart thinking!
The thoughts Kerri has about John and her dad are so perceptive.
What a cunning spirit!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 11

I think these kids are braver than I would be. Excellent job capturing their fears and feelings!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 10

Oh no! I hate this! Well, actually I like this, but I hate it at the same time!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 9

I'm so tense! The suspense is killing me!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 8

Even more creepy! I love the suspense!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 7

The Harrison's house sounds wonderful! Is it based on a real house or one in your creative world?
How cute that Sam is trying to be like Dean when he comforts Ev.
I'm glad the kids are calling their dads. I was afraid Dean would get too caught up in trying to be perfect and make the mistake of dealing with all this himself.
Good cliff hanger!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 6

Sam didn't do what Ev's going to say he did? Hilarious! So was Dean's remark.
Ooooh, spooky!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 5

I never thought of The Pied Piper being scary before, but when you think about someone leading all the children from a town it really is! What a perfect story to hint about the Watcher. Very clever of you!
I totally love the description of Sam's s'more covered face, especially when you add bits of napkin to it!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 4

It was great to get a peek inside Sam's head! Well-done!
I love the mystery and drama you've begun this story with! It's good to see it continue throughout!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 3

I think I enjoy the chapters of explanation better than the chapters of action. You have such a gift for putting the right words together to capture my emotions! I especially like the phrase "children of tragedy." It describes them perfectly and explains their life in a soul-weary way.
Good balance between the responsibilities that weigh them down and their struggle to be kids. I like to see them intereact with one another as children do. The words they use when they argue and their mannerisms are clearly those of children, especially Sam's and Ev's. It enables us to see the contrast in Dean as he is and as he sees himself.
I love to see Dean through Kerri's eyes. She has such an acute perception of him. She's good for him!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 2

You've done an exquisite job explaining the conflicting emotions of Dean and Kerri! I don't think I've read a more stirring introspection of Dean's hopes and fears.
The watcher is an interesting character. You've set up the story perfectly! Can't wait to see how it unfolds!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/09/07 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love that you describe Dean's responsibility for Sam with a loving perspective---like it isn't a duty, but an act of enduring love.
"ya huh"---perfect kid line! The interaction between the four kids is so cute! It doesn't drive me crazy reading it like it does when my children act it out. I wonder why?
I like that you portray John in a sympathetic manner. He has regrets about the way he's raised his children, but has done his best and has made the choices he has for their survival and out of love.

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 08/05/07 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 18

Great ending. I've been looking forward to this story ever since reading 'Something Lost'. It's always nice to see John in a slightly better light than Dean's memories might paint him. Not that Dean is hard on John - I think Dean is hard on Dean - projecting disappointment where it doesn't exist. It's very sad that Dean felt he couldn't tell John 'cuz I think John would have been proud of him...

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 08/05/07 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 18

Nice finish, I really enjoy the Dean and Kerry series - Thanks for the read - K

Reviewer: Brittany (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 17

ok know that i know the kids are ok can you write another chapther or two that has the fathers coming back goes i would really like to know what there going to do

Author's Response: yes, the kids are ok, and there is just one chapter left to go. :)

Reviewer: lam (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 17

Totally cool! Love how you defeat the watcher - I'm glad to see the end of that bitch!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 03/05/07 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 17

I gotta say I love your take on a young Dean. Great story and I'm eagerly awaiting the rest. K

Reviewer: Brittany (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 16

you have to continue writing chapters for this one because i really want to know what's going to happen

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