Supernaturalville
Reviewer: meh (Signed) · Date: 01/12/07 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

The essence of Dean - his grief "No one can feel this much all at once, it’s not possible, and it’s all agony" and his love "Is it really so wrong to love someone so much that nothing else matters, not even yourself?" - so well perceived. I look forward to reading more of your work.



Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 30/11/07 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic. Loved the musical theme underlying your idea...it's very appropriate, since music is so much a part of Dean Winchester. A really insightful piece of work, many thanks!


Author's Response:

I'd imagine it would feel like that for many people in similar situations (it does for me): a sort of thrumming in your head that you just can't get rid of, no matter how you try. Glad you liked Dean's version!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

well-done...Caught Dean very well and quite intensely in this

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so, thanks!

Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Dean to a T, well done.  And liked the ending, 'he's a smart kid.  He'll figure it out.  You did.'  Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: No, no, thank you for reviewing ;) Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 1

Fantastic. Grief to guilt to determination to love. I heard the bass and melody change.



Author's Response: Glad you did! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 1

WoW There is just so much - packed into a tight space here but very beautifully done.

Do like your style!!



Author's Response:

Thats what Dean is to me: a mess of emotion thats all squeezed into a small box in his own head were he can control it - for the most part. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 1

wonderful story.  so much packed into such a short read.  Crystal



Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

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