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Reviews For Frostbite
Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/10 11:56 AM · On: Back In Black

Now I don't know which chapter I enjoyed more? Certainly the second one didn't stand behind the first one. Loved how the demon snowman thought he was so smart, but the Winchesters still found him. And having Sam turn on him and getting stuck with his backside, that was too funny. I can just hear Dean teasing him on that for weeks on end. Loved the ending. Maybe you should give them a job in Florida that makes Sam wish for the snow again? No matter what, it was definitely awesome. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: vonnie836 (Signed) · Date: 16/12/10 11:37 AM · On: Cold As Ice

Loved the view of the demon snowman. Very chilling take on Frosty the children eating Snowman. And it also was a great hurt/comfort story. Really loved it. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: ArielMarie (Signed) · Date: 15/12/10 07:34 PM · On: Cold As Ice

I hate snowmen. I always have! great short story!!!

Reviewer: ArielMarie (Signed) · Date: 15/12/10 07:33 PM · On: Back In Black

to FUNNY!!! LOVE YA!!!

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 11:30 PM · On: Cold As Ice

This demon must've failed demon school to choose a snowman to possess! Good idea, however.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 11:29 PM · On: Back In Black

Just when I wondered how in hell Sam's large frame could possibly fit into the snowman...Good job with the funny ending.

Reviewer: Cuddles13 (Signed) · Date: 01/03/08 05:12 PM · On: Cold As Ice

This is really good. Sam was so close to death.

Author's Response:

Yeah, it was touch and go for a while, haha, but he had the perfect guys to take care of him.

Hope you enjoy the second chapter as well, and thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 10:46 AM · On: Back In Black

great story,really enjoyed it.very funny.little sam's so cute.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you did!  I'm glad the humor worked out, I had a blast writing it so it only works when the readers have a blast reading...well that sounded better in my head haha.

I agree, he was a cutie.  I may do more weechesters, can't get enough!  :)

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 10:46 AM · On: Back In Black

great story,really enjoyed it.very funny.little sam's so cute.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 08:35 AM · On: Back In Black

Hah, enjoyed it a lot. Great finish and well worth the wait! Thanks for the horror and the smile it put on my face...lol

Author's Response:

We are sick puppies when children getting sucked into snowmen makes us smile...but I was giggling as I wrote so I think we're all guilty!

I hadn't intended on expanding, but after I thought about it for a while I started wishing I had written it into a chapter story, so I thought why not...

Thanks for twice the loves!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/02/08 07:01 AM · On: Back In Black

I didn't think it was possible, but you topped the first chapter.  Hilarious!

Author's Response: Oh thank you!  Was my intention, and I'm glad it fell through.  Had a good time writing it, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!  :)

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 27/02/08 07:01 PM · On: Back In Black

This is fun!  Dean getting a good chuckle is always a good deal, even at Sam's expense - and they do say Frosty is magic - hehe - Angela

Author's Response:

I couldn't resist expanding.  And of course all 9ft of Sam had to be included.  Too bad I couldn't have added sound effects haha.

And of course Dean would be having the time of his life the second go around...I know I did.

Thanks for leaving me the review!

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 29/11/07 12:25 PM · On: Cold As Ice

hehehe, gotta love a killer snowman...

Author's Response:

I fell in love with the idea, and was glad it turned out.

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Birdy (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 06:00 AM · On: Cold As Ice

Demon possessed snowman - fabulous!  And little Sammy is always so cute.  Made me feel strangely Christmassy ...

Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Strangley Christmassy?  Haha I would have loved to have seen you during the anti-clause episode haha.  But that's good haha.

You know that boy had to be cute as a button.  Even poor Dean (Missouri was right he was a goofy lookin' kid) was cute in the pilot...

Thanks for reviewing!  Meant a lot!

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 28/11/07 05:55 AM · On: Cold As Ice

How clever was that! Written in first person from the baddies pov and then, at its demise, third person watching the Winchesters. Brilliant! *applause*

You captured the baddies evilness and deviousness by writing this way. It's eagerness to devour Sam before his rescue felt hurried and desperate. I loved the way you showed Dean's fear and hatred from Frosty's pov "...he stared at me with pure hatred even I couldn't pull off". Your description from the evil pov to reveal Dean's protectiveness "the taller one was catch off guard, tripping in his haste to catch the small bundle" was very effective, really caught my eye.

Great work on your portrayal of John - calm, crooning, in control and making instant decisions. I loved this "Raking a trembling hand through dishevelled hair" - the hunt taking its toll on a father rather than a hunter. Felt like a private moment...

Your scene of the brothers hundled close in bed, one snuggling, one protectively holding, was very cute. And John's relieved acceptance of Dean's "Can Sam start staying in the car?" - now there's a plan!!

Yeah, take that Frosty!!!



Author's Response:

Lmao Cookie I love your reviews!  You always put a huge smile on my face.

I was excited to write the demon in first POV.  I have a thing for fics that include a view of the Winchesters from an outsider's, just this time it is what an adversary would think.  May do more this way...

I love caring John.  He may not be viewed as a very good father, but he had to have had his moments.  Would love to have more flashbacks showing a better side to him, but this'll do for now lol.

I guess I'm a sucker for the boys as kids.  Its not right as adults that they be all lovey-dovey, but I figured Dean showed Sam a great amount of affection when they were younger.

I'm so glad you enjoyed, and thank you for leaving me a simply awesome review!!

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 05:47 PM · On: Cold As Ice

Take that Frosty!! love it , Kristen ....really enjoyed your version of Frosty the Snowman....   no one you would want inhabiting your front yard....

Hope all is well with you, young lady....Will you be home anytime soon???   :0)    jude



Author's Response:

Hi Jude!  Long time no see...

Thank you!  Haha I can't say enough how much I enjoyed writing this, so I'm glad you all got such enjoyment out of it.  As for a nasty snowman in my front yard...I could think of a few nasty little kids...

haha JK... o.O

Hope all is well with you!  As of right now, I am home, and hope to remain here for quite a while.  Home but busy!  So just now catching up.... :o

Thank you for the review and I'll see you around!

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 03:06 PM · On: Cold As Ice

It was good.



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 02:15 PM · On: Cold As Ice

Very amusing!  I'll look at snowmen differently from now on.  And Dean's parting words were priceless!

Author's Response:

Haha I know I'll think differently about the next cute little snowball I see...but I'm glad you also enjoyed Dean's line!  Haha Dean's humor can be a challenge at times but I think the guy is hilarious.

Glad you enjoyed and thank you for the review!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 09:22 AM · On: Cold As Ice

Great job, gotta love a killer snowman..lol.  Thanks for the read- K

Author's Response: Thanks K!  I loved the idea as well, and didn't have a hard time trying to decide how it killed.  So glad you enjoyed, thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Vanessa (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 06:35 AM · On: Cold As Ice

Oohh, creepy and awesome.  Very nice job!

Author's Response: Sweet!  I'm glad you enjoyed, it was a fun thing to write.  Thank you!

Reviewer: brownsuga (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 05:00 AM · On: Cold As Ice

Definately enjoyed this little tale, excellent read. Thank you:)

Suga



Author's Response: Definitely enjoyed writing it, so thank you for the review!  I'm glad I could share it haha.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 03:24 AM · On: Cold As Ice

Great imagination you've got there, I always love the interesting and unusual fics and this is both!

Fantastic work, if anyone compiles a 'great christmas chill' list - this needs to be added! - Thanks for the read!

 



Author's Response:

Well thank you!  I couldn't help myself, I often sit (during times of extreme boredom or lull) and think about what messed up creature I could play with next.  Keeps me sane haha.

So thanks for the review!  Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 01:34 AM · On: Cold As Ice

Kris - I loved this even more the second time through - and my favourite like is still "Take that, Frosty."

So glad you finally got home long enough to write - we've missed your awesome talent. Take care, hon.



Author's Response:

O...m...g...

November?  I am horrible at this replying stuff I guess haha.

Thank you so much Jules!  Glad you liked that line, you gotta figure little Dean was such a smart ass from the get-go. 

Awesome talent?  *blushes*  You kill me...

Love ya hun!
Kris

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