:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: Ilex (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

This story really worked for me! I love how it went from Dean's POV being very stream-of-conscious to Sam's being a little more contemplative and finally to Bobby's more objective POV. Well done!

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 08/01/08 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey! I found you! :) Maybe I'm a bit of a hunter after all...
I liked this a lot. You had my heart breaking for Dean and his own self-depreciating thoughts of messing up once more, Sam's thoughts about reading Dean if you paid attention to his eyes (love those eyes) and Bobby... gah, Bobby's got me the hardest.
The way he was amazed at how much you could throw at Dean and he'd just keep going -- so true. And that little boy voice -- I heard that! I heard the scared hope in those words, too.
Nicely done -- I look forward to the other fics you'll post in 2008. :)
Gaelic

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great story! I love that it's told not only through Sam and Dean, but Bobby as well. It presents a much more comprehensive picture of the brothers.

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 26/11/07 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Loved the three POV's, Dean managing to find something to feel guilty about. Sam still on a mission to save Dean and Bobby trying to keep it all together. I loved this episode and really enjoyed your take on their feelings. J

Author's Response: Thanks so very much for taking the time to let me know what worked for you. It is giving me the courage to possibly post a longer tale.

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 26/11/07 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Great add on, love how you used all three views. Crystal

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and for taking the time to review. Hopefully I will be posting more in the future.

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