Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 10/04/08 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sounded very Winchester-like in father and son. Made me sad for Dean, so...good story.
Author's Response: Oops, missed this review. Sorry! Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 27/11/07 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
Fabulous, so spot in.... Just know this is how he would feel! Dix p.s. off to read more of your stuff x
Author's Response: Oops, I obviously missed this review. Sorry! Thanks anyway, and I hope you enjoyed my other stuff. :)
Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 25/11/07 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 1
"Dean wondered how long it would take before he stopped turning to the passenger seat with Sam frozen on his lips. Evidently longer than a week." how sad is that... nice oneshot, enjoyed it, thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really loved this. The Winchester no-nonsense so typical of Dean and John, yet the deep emotion which is nonetheless present. Your standout lines: "Old habits die hard...just like Winchesters" - damn straight!! "Dean wondered how long it would take before he stopped turning to the passenger seat with Sam frozen on his lips. Evidently longer than a week. - you started with how much Dean misses Sam. "but the rhythm is all wrong. It's faster, shallower and the illusion shatters" - and you ended with how much Dean misses Sam. A wonderful little fic that revealed that Dean is not just lonely, but lonely for Sam. Congrats, beautifully done, I had a lump in my throat for sure.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked this and thank you for pointing out the standout lines. It's so good to know which bits really work in a fic. :)
Reviewer: staffy08 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
Sorry no constructive criticism from me. I really liked it, emotional but not a chick flick. I could definatly see it happening.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was a great read. You've got some very descriptive and emotional lines here that really set the mood. ...turning to the passenger seat with Sam frozen on his lips...awesome line! ...old habits die hard, just like Winchesters...too right! This is a great little oneshot - very much enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. :)
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
*sniff*. That tore me up a little bit, especially this part: Dean wondered how long it would take before he stopped turning to the passenger seat with Sam frozen on his lips. Evidently longer than a week. Great work, thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you, *passes tissue* I'm glad you liked it. :)
Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great little story. Crystal
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
OH MY GAWD this is awesome!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great oneshot and spot on with how I see Dean and even John. Thanks for the read - K
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! :)
Reviewer: JennieC (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow! I really enjoyed this. I felt each emotion as you touched on it so subtly. I think you captured John perfectly, and I am still left feeling for Dean. I'm greatful that you internalized Dean's feelings while giving us a man in charge. Not too, over emotional as is the Winchester way, yet I still feel my heart's been tugged. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! You perfectly described what I wanted to do with this fic, show Dean's emotions and how much he's missing Sam without getting too chick flick. It was a challenge to resist that temptation!
Reviewer: lekelly (Signed) · Date: 24/11/07 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
Thought provoking short story, well done Lorraine
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it provoked your thoughts! :)
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