Supernaturalville
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 13/03/09 06:52 AM · On: The Cost of Retribution

Thank you for bring this to life and it was a great plasure to have read a beautiful syphone to a greater scale of  life it self and even better than that of the Univers itself.

Author's Response: Really? You really liked it that well? Thank you. That means a lot.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 02:32 PM · On: The Cost of Retribution

Such a sad story, I'm at a loss for words.

I will admit I looked you up as a result of your win in the Ungen Awards. Congrats.



Author's Response:

You know what? I don't think my notifications are working, I don't remember getting this. I'm so sorry this is late.

First, thank you so much for the congrats, I was stunned to have won anything. It was a nice feeling.

And also, thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked this even if it was very sad. :)

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 20/09/08 07:58 AM · On: The Cost of Retribution

RATING:) PRICELESS TOTRILLIONS. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: mustang (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 03:44 AM · On: The Cost of Retribution

wow, that was extremely sad. I'm not sure how I feel, so I'll just say thanks for writing..lol..

Author's Response:

Aw, I'm sorry this made you sad. But, just think of it like this, it is supernatural, so perhaps Dean didn't stay dead ;)

Thank you for reviewing. :D

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 03:41 PM · On: The Cost of Retribution

Wonderful!  I can understand Sam not wanting to return to his 'normal' life.  He isn't the same person who dreamed those dreams.  His goals are different now.

Author's Response:

*waves* Hi there!!! Happy to see you liked it. This one doesn't get much action *lowers voice and whispers* I suspect its because its a death fic. ;)

So, I'm thrilled when someone is willing to give it a chance :D. Thank you so much for reading and leaving feedback--I very much appreciate it!

Reviewer: fantasycatcher (Signed) · Date: 30/09/07 09:02 AM · On: The Cost of Retribution

Wow, I was nearly there, I had control until I got to Deans letter.  It killed me, I was in tears, you did a great job. Now I'm going to go on a rampage looking for happy Dean endings. Lol

              *Schelz*



Author's Response:

Oh...I'm sorry...*hands a tissue*. Yeah, this started out with just the letter initially and then I filled in the rest around it.

Sorry it took me so long to get back to this...it's been a busy time at work and home, lol.

Thank you so much for taking a chance on this :)

  

Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 11:17 AM · On: The Cost of Retribution

Ohhhh! This is so sad! It's really beautiful though. At first, the part with Sammael confused me, but now I get it...Dean made a deal with Death? Anyway, it doesn't have to make too much sense, it's just a wonderful piece of writing that's really, really sad and pretty. I like how Sam and John are gonna go to the Grand Canyon. That's just plain fun! Yeah...this kinda made me cry, a bit. Dean's letter was amazing. Anyway, I could go on and on, but I'll stop there...amazing stuff...

Author's Response:

Oh, now this one, this one hasn't gotten much of a response despite the fact that I felt it was one of my better one-shots. But, a lot of death fics get shunned and maybe I'm biased. Glad you gave it shot and made sense out of it. :)

 

Reviewer: SeparateDear (Signed) · Date: 04/06/07 01:17 PM · On: The Cost of Retribution

I am completelly speachless... I don't know what to say except that I loved this one... And normally I don't even read death fics...

kika



Author's Response:

Well thanks!  I think it's a little easier to take knowing he's dead early in the game.  I enjoy getting reviews for this one because I'm kinda fond of it, but as you can imagine...it's not been reviewed much anywhere its been posted.

I'm glad you took a chance and read it!

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 10:51 PM · On: The Cost of Retribution

I don't usually read, anything which ends in either brother's death, but this was really nicely done - Thanks K



Author's Response:

I don't usually read death fics, either...which I guess makes it strange that I wrote one...but Tidia helped me a lot with this one and I think its one of my better fics.

Thank you so much for taking a chance on it.  I know how difficult it can be to read one of these and I appreciate the fact that you read it anyway!

Nicole 

Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 13/01/07 09:59 AM · On: The Cost of Retribution

I read this last night, and I was so sad afterward I left without commenting. I do love your writing. I will say that. Sad. So sad.

Author's Response:

Hi Caroline, sorry to be getting back to this so late, but you already know why! 

Thanks, I'm glad to have you reading my stuff because you always give my spirits such a boost when I'm feeling low, but I'm also glad to have you as friend, so thank you for that too! 

Loved the pics at MySpace btw!

Reviewer: gaelicspirit (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 06:46 PM · On: The Cost of Retribution

Okay, I love the way your write, but I almost couldn't make it through this. The thought of Dean gone... it just makes the world wrong. I will say I loved the letter he left Sam. And I admire you for taking this risk and pulling it off with heartbreaking realism. I won't read it again like I will your others because for the world to be right -- at least unless Kripke decides differently -- I need Dean to be alive. Alive and fighting evil with Sam. *sob*

 



Author's Response:

Aw, Amanda...you sound so sad...bless your heart and you read it anyway, despite knowing it was a death fic.  Thank you.  I understand and I knew when I wrote it that it wasn't the kind of thing to be read more than once. 

 Trust me, I don't plan on making it a habit of writing our hero into the grave (or funeral pyre).  After I first wrote it, I even backed off at first and put in a tag that turned it into one of Sam's dreams, but Tidia and I decided it worked out better  without the alternate ending.



Author's Response:

Crap, I didn't get to finish that.  Anyway, I'd be crushed and angry if he died in canon and stayed that way. 

 But thanks for the support anyway, I promise the next one will have a happy ending.

 

Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 10/01/07 05:44 PM · On: The Cost of Retribution

I think this is your best so far.  Much more showing than telling.  God, I sound like a broken record. I've just gotten so fed up with people telling me what I'm supposed to get out of a story instead of letting me figure it out.  LOL.

I hate that it's a death fic, though. I do think that the two of them together could have defeated the demon. 

I did like the insinuation that Dean is somehow worth more to this Sammael than the canon Demon.  It was funny to me when old Yellow Eyes said that Dean wasn't very important and neither was Sam. Haha, to have that thrown back in his face. Priceless. Although, I think the demon's real downfall will be the brother's together.  At least, in my pea brain, that's what does him in.

And what does Terry mean she won't read it.  She might as well kill him as much suffering as she inflicts on him. It'd be more merciful, methinks. And he'd prolly prefer to be dead than to have half the stuff inflicted on him as most of these writers put him through.

HT

Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 10/01/07 05:37 PM · On: The Cost of Retribution

You know I didn't read this and thanks for the warning. Just wanted to let you know I appreciated it!

Author's Response:

Lol, Terry, you're welcome - the whole time I was writing this I was thinking of you and how you wouldn't read it. 

See what I get for saying I wouldn't do it. 

 

You must login (register) to review.