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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/06/09 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 21

Oooohh!  That was the perfect ending to burn Katie.  Especially since she thinks she's unforgettable.  I'm glad you wiped her out of Sam's exixtence.

Reviewer: ashon13 (Signed) · Date: 24/11/08 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 5

I just gotta say here *squeeeeee!* Awwww, Sammy's such an adorable little dork. ;P

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 21

this story is awesome keep up the awesome work!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sensue (Signed) · Date: 17/02/08 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 21

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Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 31/01/08 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 21

OUTSTANDING job- this was a GREAT story!!!!!!!!!

Sam and all his frustrated attempts to fit in -his puppy love-Dean's desire to protect his baby brother from the pain of rejection-Ole Bo-John's usual bad temper and lack of understanding- Bobby being there to support the Winchesters-you got it all.

this was a very visual story-awesone verbage and tempo!!!!

as always, you give your readers a total package of excitement, action, angst, and the Wincherter boys at their best!!

I totally enjoyed this story!!!

EXCELLENT job!!

BRAVO!!!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 20

Cool ending!  I like that Dean uses John's own words against him.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 19

Ole Bo doesn't stand a chance!  Get 'im Dean!  (It's so much fun to root for the good guys!)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 18

I'm glad everyone else sees how concerned Sam's family is about him, how mucht hey care for him.  If they only knew the extent to which his family goes to protect him.

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 21

Loved the snub, "Missed me?Who...Who are you?"  I know Sam couldn't really remember but she so deserved that one!!  I liked the way her eyes, squinting up in anger at Dean, made Sam doubt her prettiness as well.  All in all, a very satisfactory conclusion, thanks for the epilogue.  Jane

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 21

i've really enjoyed reading this story,glad the love thing got sorted.great ending.

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 21

What a ride!

Many thanks, so glad i stuck with this and read it as you posted!!!  Write more stories soon!!

Please!

Diane x 

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 21

Yeah, that was a sweet ending to the whole young love thing...I've really enjoyed this one supernaturaldh, so glad I found time to check it out even though I came to it kind of late. I'll look forward to what you come up with next...

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 20

Although I loved this ending, just noticed there was an epilogue so heading to that ...

Reviewer: Enth (Signed) · Date: 28/01/08 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

Thanks for the epilogue, was nice to know how Katie felt about Sam even though she didn't get the same response to her feelings from him.

Liked Katie as a character and Dean's worry for his kid brother. Now I don't have to picture different sorts of solutions for the ending, and hope you keep up the good work.

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 21

I read the other "end" earlier and thoroughly enjoyed it, loved John getting his own words flung back at him and accepting it with humor, but I did wonder what became of Katie.  Glad you added this, and I like the idea of Sam not remembering her - goodness knows we all get enough of those heart wrenching first crushes to be more than willing to let some of that go - besides, serves her right - lol! - Angela

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 20

I've thoroughly enjoyed the whole story and this last episode was no exception.  Good to see the job done at last and ending in laughter rather than Sam getting a roasting from his dad.  Hopefully the memory loss means Sam wont remember his lost love and her awful comments about him.

A lovely story, thank you.  Jane



Author's Response: Had to add an Epilogue, could not stand the young love thing still hanging out there.  Let me know your thoughts after you read it.  Thanks for reviewing it.  dh

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 19

So Ole Bo is putting up a fight, right to the end.  Hopefully the four of them should be enough to put him down for good this time!!

I love sleepy, forgetful Sam trying to act like a stroppy teen but not quite managing it. 

Love the story. Jane

Reviewer: Enth (Signed) · Date: 27/01/08 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed reading this and it's sort of sad that it's over. Dean and Sam's brotherly relationship is always interesting to read but I was hoping for some conclusion for Sam and Katie Hacker issue, I'm not really sure how that turned out.

But you're a good writer, yes.



Author's Response: Hope you find the epilogue.  I could not stand leaving the young love thing just hanging there at the end.  Read and let me know if it seems more wrapped up. dh

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 19

great chapter,nice to have lots of john and bobby.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 26/01/08 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 19

OH YEAH! Great chapter, and It's great to see so much Bobby in there even if he is being thrown around a little...lol

And the last line from Dean...that always sends shivers up my spine!

Loved it...keep it coming...

Reviewer: Janger (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 18

What a lovely chapter, so nice to see the boys still able to take comfort from each other - even if they do have to pretend to be unconscious.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 18

what a lovely chapter,awww.

Reviewer: bulletbabe (Signed) · Date: 24/01/08 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 18

I loved this chapter. The whole thing with Dean being overprotective brother an having to squirm out and replace himself with a pillow, and then the tugging on the hair and humming Metallica...awe.

Allof it's just beautiful...looking out for the next update...



Author's Response:

Thanks bulletbabe.  I am such a Limp Sam, Big Brother Dean Freak.  I love writing and reading this stuff.  I appreciate the review. 

Reviewer: danrac1066 (Signed) · Date: 23/01/08 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 18

A nice chapter, sweet interaction between Sam and Dean

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 21/01/08 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 17

awww hurt sam protective dean,great fic.

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