Reviews For John Winchester's boys
Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 1
Liked this insight of John in his father role, it kind of gets overshadowed by his role as a hunter. Especially liked the image Ellen remembers on the night Sam left for college.
Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like your twisted mind was thinking....It's a sweet thought to imagine John bragging about his boys.....Nice to know someone sees John the way I do....
Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very nicely done
Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
I have wondered likewise staffy, really like your take on it.
Reviewer: Seriously Sam (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like the little one-shot drabble you have going on here. My advice, with a piece like this, don't write in second person. You're giving Ellen's thoughts, so you should have written in first person. If you don't like first person (I know I don't) then third person limited would have been better. Anyways, I liked it. Good job.
Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice look into what might have been passing through Ellen's minds as she realized who the boys were!
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