:: Supernaturalville

Reviewer: garvaldmains (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

lovely!
DIx

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: Cookie6 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 1

Love it! John as a proud dad under all that hunter gruff. Where do those who doubt think his mega protective!john vengeance comes from?? Loved the idea of him bragging about his sons and Ellen recalling John's emotions and memories as she meets his boys.
I have the warm, fuzzies now...

Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it and I am happy to have given you "the warm, fuzzies". Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 21/11/07 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Liked this insight of John in his father role, it kind of gets overshadowed by his role as a hunter. Especially liked the image Ellen remembers on the night Sam left for college.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and I know what you mean it always seems he's a hunter first and then a father.

Reviewer: supernaturaljunkiejude (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like your twisted mind was thinking....It's a sweet thought to imagine John bragging about his boys.....Nice to know someone sees John the way I do....

Author's Response: Thanks for taking time to review and I'm glad someone likes my twisted mind. ;)

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very nicely done

Author's Response: Oh stop your making be blush...;) No, seriously, thank you very much for reviewing and I am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: ciel4 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have wondered likewise staffy, really like your take on it.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reviewing. Allthough I am slightly worried for you if your thoughts go in the same direction as mine.... ;)

Reviewer: Seriously Sam (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like the little one-shot drabble you have going on here. My advice, with a piece like this, don't write in second person. You're giving Ellen's thoughts, so you should have written in first person. If you don't like first person (I know I don't) then third person limited would have been better. Anyways, I liked it. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the advice, I'm glad you liked it despite it's shortcomings. ;)

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/11/07 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice look into what might have been passing through Ellen's minds as she realized who the boys were!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.

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