Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 21/01/07 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
Dude- that was just wrong! Give us all the warm fuzzy of Sam and Dean meeting and getting updated with each others lives- then the evil cliffie- so not right - but awful entertaining!
Author's Response: I honestly was going to spare the cliffie - thought of a hundred different ways of ending this chapter but, what can I say? Just trying to make up for what they did to my sister Meg... (Heh, no my eyes are actually Yellow...!)
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 21/01/07 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 2
Ah well that is just evil. make me cry my eyes out over Dean's f'ed up life, and then more with the burning, crispy critters. I did find it odd though, that after Dean and Sam had already pretty much had the discussion about their parents being dead and all that Dean stumbled over the whole 'Marilyn lived into her fifties which is longer than....' sentence. I mean, they were pretty much talking about death the whole time they were sitting there, so why did he trip over that line? He ain't keeping no secrets is he? Are you, iris dear? HT
Author's Response: Ooh, I think you might of found a secret I'd not actually written in there! No, as far as my noodled head can work out, Dean was still talking about Mommy and Daddy there...
Reviewer: kittsbud (Signed) · Date: 21/01/07 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow, I come back and there's more... I love how you've got Dean in this. Even though he's no spook hunter, he's still our Dean. Question is, is he gonna play fireman again soon...heheh. Great work again, iris!
Author's Response: Next chapter, I promise you get to see Dean's axe.
Reviewer: kittsbud (Signed) · Date: 21/01/07 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 1
Man, that was good. So sorry it's taken this long to get to it, but site duty and all... I can't wait to see what you have in store for us! And fireman Dean? God, I wish, girlie....
Author's Response: It'd be worth setting your house on fire for, wouldn't it?
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 20/01/07 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 1
Just giving me the visual of Dean as a firefighter makes me want to hug you.
Author's Response: Aw, virtual hug right back at ya! I've got to admit to going a bit wobbly just seeing him dressed that way in Devil's Trap... I still think he'd look good as a cop too, though!
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 19/01/07 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is great. Love where it's at. Can't wait to see where it's going. And my boy, still with the wisecracks. Gotta love him!
Author's Response: I toyed with the idea of Darkside!Dean, but to be honest he's so much more fun the way he is...!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 19/01/07 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh Iris- Dean a firefighter- girl you made my day!
Author's Response: I'm just imagining the Lawrence Fire Department Fireman's Calendar...
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 19/01/07 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow!That was a riveting and poignant chapter. I absolutely love this story, so captivating. Very moving moment when Sam recognized in the firefighter who saved his life, his lost brother Dean. Dean, a firefighter, great idea you got here irismay. Brilliant work so far, now I'm hooked and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Really glad you're enjoying it! I always figured if he hadn't been a hunter, Dean would have been a cop or a fireman, and then there was that line in Devil's Trap, so I knew I had to write him as a firefighter some day!
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 19/01/07 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 1
You're a card. That end note was soo not necessary. You dork. And fireman!Dean. Guh! HT
Author's Response: You know, if ever you needed rescuing from a fire, Dean would be the one you'd want to do it... Oh god, can you imagine the fireman's calendar........
Reviewer: madds (Signed) · Date: 19/01/07 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
it keeps on getting more and more interesting
Author's Response: Thanks for that! Glad I'm not boring you!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 18/01/07 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
I want more!! Please hurry!
Author's Response: Heh heh... I'd like to pretend I'm slow at updating on purpose to keep you all in suspense... But I'm just slow at updating. I'll get the next chapter up - erm - when I've decided what it's going to be...!
Reviewer: madds (Signed) · Date: 15/01/07 10:17 PM · On: Prologue
majour confusion!! but good. very interesting want to read more
Author's Response: I'd quite like to write more, but it's that pesky Real Life thing keeps getting in the way! Hoping to (finally!) get chapter 1 up on Thursday or Friday. It's been written for ages, I've just not had time to type it up!! Thanks for reading! And I think it's only the Prologue that's confusing...!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/07 09:49 PM · On: Prologue
I already reviewed this over on the AU board at SN.tv, but we both know that the sound of a pin drop over there is deafening. I loved the style and flow of this, and I am anxious like your other reviewers to see the poor boy on the lawn make an appearance. (And yes...your theory on the goat sacrifice on the AU board...I'm curious if perhaps the planets must also be aligned in a reverse orbit as well).
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing over here too!! Very very much appreciated! I'll try and get the next chapter up in the next couple of days - hadn't anticipated leaving the prologue hanging all by itself so long!
Reviewer: tigriswolf (Signed) · Date: 12/01/07 09:07 AM · On: Prologue
Oh, wow. Well done. so far.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Thanksso much for reading!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/07 01:33 AM · On: Prologue
Oh wow! Iris! Hope the plot bunny keeps showin up for carrots and you update this one pretty soon! I'm intrigued!
Author's Response: I hope it does too... Hoping to get another chapter up soon!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 11/01/07 09:37 PM · On: Prologue
Wow!What a start Irismay, so intriguing and captivating. I'm already hooked. Can't wait to know what'll happen next.
Author's Response: Really glad you're enjoying it! Hopefully it'll all make a bit more sense when I finally get chapter 1 up!!
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 11/01/07 01:24 PM · On: Prologue
Ha! Found it on here too! Still like it. Post already.
Author's Response: Had to do a major re-write on Chapter 1 (never a good sign), computer's gone mad (again) and won't let me watch Hunted so all in all the next post might take a while...! Thanks for reading though!!!
Reviewer: kittsbud (Signed) · Date: 11/01/07 01:17 PM · On: Prologue
Ohh...you knew I'd like this when you told us all about it. I can't wait to read more when "the little boy on the lawn" appears... Wonderful writing as always. *bows*
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it... I was getting a lukewarm - nay tepid - nay freezing response over on ffnet so was a bit worried it was utter rubbish rather than a bit rubbish...
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 10/01/07 04:54 PM · On: Prologue
Dude, you posted! Woohoo! Okay, so I think I get that the boy on the lawn is Dean. Sniff. I hate when they ain't together. And you got Jess in here. Is she gonna stick around for a bit or bite it in the first chapter? PS, love your disclaimer! HT
Author's Response: Still trying to decide whether to off Jess in some suitably grotesque manner... Nah, I think we'll keep her around a bit longer. Sam seems to like her after all...
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