Reviewer: freyja529 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/07 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
Missouri!! Loving the Lawrence references as I live there:) And did I mention before how incredibly yummy FiremanDean is? I thought the Q & A between the brothers was perfect. On to read more!
Author's Response: Ooh, I always worry when I use a real place that I'll mess it up some how - if any of it is even remotely realistic you can thank Google Maps and the Lawrence Fire Dept website!! And yeah. Fireman!Dean. Seriously. I think he should get his own AU show!
Reviewer: freyja529 (Signed) · Date: 20/02/07 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
Not normally an AU fan and not normally one who waits to review until the third chapter, but YOU SUCKED ME IN!! I just had to force myself to stop reading long enough to leave a review...now I'm off to read more!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you're enjoying it! I don't read AU that often either... I just seem to keep writing it!!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 19/02/07 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 5
Aarghh...irismay, the way you ended the chapter, it's worst than an evil cliffy. I feel so sad for Dean, he didn't have a great childhood, no family, he just find his brother and now Sam sounds angry at Dean, doesn't want to talk or want to see him again . And when Sam talked about his family and Jess excluding Dean, that was heartwrenching. About John, what he was thinking when he did that deal with the demon, so shocking. That was a great and so emotional chapter. Captivating story so far, I'm so looking forward for more.
Author's Response: I apologise for the Dean-bashing going on in this chapter! Poor boy! Don't worry, I won't emtionally scar him any more than he already is...! Glad you're still enjoying!
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 18/02/07 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 5
Well that was a mean way to end it. Now I'm all sad. Can't wait for the next part!
Author's Response: And here I was thinking I'd been nice enough not to end on a cliffie for a change!!
Reviewer: Nilah (Signed) · Date: 14/02/07 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 4
You are a very wicked woman. Has anybody ever told you that? I hope the next chapter comes up soon.
Author's Response: Yep, that's me with the Yellow Eyes... I hope the next chapter's up soon too... Apologies for the wicked case of writers block...
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 11/02/07 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 4
Oh, yes - I agree - ridiculously evil cliffie - but hell's bells, so well written! Hope you don't leave us hanging quite so long without another update! Like the idea of the real world trying to re-assert itself - wonder if the boys will retain some memory of their wrong life?
Author's Response: You know, I wish I had months and months and months to write this thing as I'd love to include all the ideas you guys are suggesting! Alas, 'tis not to be... But stick around, hopefully the next update won't take quite as long! *crosses fingers*
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 10/02/07 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 4
Captivating chapter about alternate universe and what a cliffhanger, must be one of Sam's dream. Terrific story so far irismay, I so can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Glad I've not bored you to death yet... I think that time might be near...!
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 10/02/07 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 4
Haha, just hadda hit you over here now that I'm a little more awake. Though, how anyone can be awake at five a.m. is beyond my comprehension. Stupid J-o-b. Still love this story. Pretty broken toys, those boys. 
Author's Response: I think whatever universe they're in, they're always gonna be broken... Just the way we like them!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 09/02/07 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 4
Evil cliffie indeed! Must have more now! *sigh* Then again...I am not one to talk about keeping people waiting. *hides* Great work!
Author's Response: Yeah, that was kind of an unnecessarily cruel and evil cliffie even for me!
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 09/02/07 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
prints this story out, throws on top of Gaelics and proceeds to roll on this one too.
Author's Response: There's far too much rolling going on here... The only time I want to see rolling is if Dean's involved. Or Evil!Sam. Who I find strangely - uh - cough. Does that make me a bad person?
Reviewer: deans_secret_admirer (Signed) · Date: 08/02/07 04:50 AM · On: Prologue
its really awesome. Fireman Dean rox!! cant wait for more
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!! I really have nearly finished the next chapter....
Reviewer: Tidia (Signed) · Date: 06/02/07 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 3
Hey!! Missouri! Okay, I really am liking this story..Mrs Nixon though really cant say anything right Tidia
Author's Response: Hah hah haaah - Evil Granny even more evil than the YED methinks!! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: lilballerette10 (Signed) · Date: 06/02/07 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 3
LOVEE THIS STORYY....this chapter was so cute when Dean and Sammy were in their own world when Dean was talkin about their family...i almost wish his adopted family would just disappear and leave those 2 alone:$ hahahha i get the impression that Sam's dad isn't too fond of Dean...he better not do anything to try and rip Dean out of Sam's life:@...and that last comment by Dean "he's not your real brother" ahhahaa i was silently cheering Dean on:$....plzzz post soonn...this story is wickedd
Author's Response: I'm really glad you're enjoying, and believe it or not, I do actually hope to have a chapter up soon!!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/07 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
*big grin* I loved their exchange in this chapter. *laugh* I can see Sam as a Matthews fan and Dean with Star Wars made me chuckle. Awesome work.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my choice of music and movies! I always find Sam's tastes harder to gauge than Dean's!!
Reviewer: sojourner84 (Signed) · Date: 01/02/07 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
You had me laughing and in tears during this one! Yes, evil cliffie, but I see one more chapter after this.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you didn't have to wait too long for a cliffie resolution! I had people baying for my blood for that one!!
Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 31/01/07 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 3
oh Iris- Dare I guess who is standing at the door? I am sooo loving this story- tell your boss to give you some more time off so you can write more!
Author's Response: Yeah I need to be extra nice to her to she'll swallow the whole 'sorry I can't come to work - I have a VS episode to plan' excuse!!
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 31/01/07 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 3
I'm so loving this story. Poor Dean under the scrutiny of Sam's family. I so enjoy Dean's wit, he's so funny. Great idea to have Jess around. Missouri!!!What a twist. I so can't wait for more. Brilliant work so far Irismay.
Author's Response: Aw thank you, glad you're enjoying! I made a terrible pun yesterday to someone commenting on Jess in this story of how I think she and Dean would have 'got on like a house on fire'. Yeah, unfortunate choice of words I know, but I do think they would have!!
Reviewer: kittsbud (Signed) · Date: 31/01/07 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 3
And we're left waiting again, you evil Brit you. I guess I'll excuse you, also being a Brit hahahaha. Jess setting fire to the curtains? I didn't see that coming. So, I assume that's Missouri in the doorstep? Now what has she got to tell them...
Author's Response: Hmmm... What has Missouri got to tell the boys? Well, let me know when you do and then I'll write it down...
Reviewer: thedarkness (Signed) · Date: 30/01/07 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 3
Ooooh this is getting interesting! I gotta say I'm just as annoyed with Sam's "family" as Dean is.......I hope I'm supposed to be......
Author's Response: I'd kind of intended Grandma to be 'endearingly annoying'... Not really decided about the rest of them yet!
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 30/01/07 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh, YES!!! Missouri to the rescue! I love this fic! And I don't blame Dean one bit for that remark about Danny not being Sam's brother. I love how they are still linked even though they have been estranged most of their lives. I do hope you update this soon - I'll keep a very close eye out for it. I can't wait to see how you put this all together.
Author's Response: Yeah, I can't wait to see how I put it together too... *scratches head and wanders off to get the vodka* Glad you liked the Danny part - I wasn't sure whether to go down that route, and seeing as I might have to make this story a little bit shorter than originally anticipated, I'm not sure I'll get to explore it. But hey-ho!
Reviewer: Thru Terrys Eyes (Signed) · Date: 30/01/07 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter. Worth the wait. Love your Dean in this, and Sam, just awkward enough. I know i reviewed on ffnet but liked it so much had to review twice,
Author's Response: Gawd bless ya my love! If a story's worth reviewing, it's worth reviewing twice I say! (Heh!) And to be honest, what's not to love about Dean? *sigh*
Reviewer: (Anonymous) · Date: 30/01/07 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oh God, Missouri...is it wrong that I can't stand that woman but yet I'm glad she's just shown up? Great job, this was perfectly done, methinks. HT
Author's Response: I always say, you can't have a SN fic, even an AU one, set in Lawrence that doesn't features Missouri...
Reviewer: Oceane (Signed) · Date: 22/01/07 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
That was a poignant chapter. Loved the conversation between the brothers. Poor Dean, his life hasn't been very great, he was fourth when the tragedy occurred, he remembered everything, it's terrible for a child of this age, that was so sad. Marilyn saved him literally. It's not fair, they just find each other and now there're a fire and we don't know if Jess is ok or not. Arrghh!!! evil cliffhanger. Amazing and so captivating story so far irismay. I'm looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Yeah, I really should apologise for the meanness of that cliffie... Glad you enjoyed the rest of it!!
Reviewer: Ace33 (Signed) · Date: 22/01/07 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
I want more!!!! You are too evil to leave me hanging like that!
Author's Response: I'm so sorry... And also working for the next seven days straight... So it might be a bit of a wait...
Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 21/01/07 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
What a cliffie and a half! This is just a wonderful story - so heartbreaking in places, to think of the boys growing up apart, a part of each longing to find the other. Thank you for sharing this. I can't wait for more postings. Will time reverse, and right the wrong?
Author's Response: Hah hah - the crux of the story! Glad someone's paying attention! Much as I'd like to bring in Dr Who in his TARDIS, I think I may have to find a none-time travel related solution...!
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