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Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/09 08:38 PM · On: Shadows

aw im sorry you lost all your chapters:( i was struggling to read this, NOT because it was boring....cause it's not, its because im so tired haha, but I didnt stop reading it because I like this story:)
another 10 stars for you!

Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm glad you like it. The only good thing about loosing the chapters is that i can change the plot a bit now. I'm working on ch 5 now. :)

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/09 08:31 PM · On: Shadows

Aw loved it again! good job!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 23/09/09 08:30 PM · On: Shadows

Loved it! nice banner by the way:)

Author's Response: thank you i made it

Reviewer: Sugar Fairy Dust (Signed) · Date: 18/08/09 10:51 PM · On: Shadows

I love this series! Update soon!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 07:46 PM · On: Wayward Son

Wow! Think they should bind little Jacob's powers so he never has the chance to become the antichrist? Good story! You made Sam a mean enough scumbag that I wasn't sorry he was killed. cool that he was killed by Jacob.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 07:30 PM · On: Wayward Son

You've picked out a lot of details from the canon episodes. Dean stealing Sam's date in WIAWSNB. Fantastic! I liked the trip down memory lane.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 07:03 PM · On: Wayward Son

That was a shocking bit of news that Lexi held Dean's contract. Excellent!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 06:46 PM · On: Wayward Son

Wow! What a bastard Sam's turning out to be! I wan to kill him myself.
And great twist recreating the pilot episode for Dean's worst day ever. That was the worst day in his young life, now to have it repeated would be gut-wrenching.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 06:37 PM · On: Wayward Son

Very interesting perspective! no one else has written a story where Sam isn't really 100 percent Sam. This is a first! I can't wait!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 23/06/09 06:23 PM · On: Wayward Son

You described Dean's feelings as a new father so well! And Sam just needs to get over himself. Dean only has five months to be with his family and Sam's trying to pull him away.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 04:16 PM · On: Shadows

Hmmmm...very interesting start. So, it's Sam that comes back. Wondering where you are taking this story. Is this a sequel from an other story? Your other characters seem well established.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Actually it's the third installment of a series. The first story in the installment is Under Your Skin and the sequel to that is Wayward Son.

Reviewer: Winchester07 (Signed) · Date: 20/01/09 12:55 PM · On: Shadows

Very nice

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 24/09/08 05:16 PM · On: Wayward Son

Very intense chapter! Lexi is flippin' crazy!!

Author's Response: Thank you. Haha yeah she is. I based her off my sister who we all thought was demonic when she was pregnant with my neice.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 07:45 AM · On: Wayward Son

Good to have the background about Dean and Lexi's break up.

Author's Response:
They have a whole back story that I have worked out. I'm going to go more into it in the next installement.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/07/08 10:36 PM · On: Wayward Son

A lot happening in this chapter! And Dean says the L word for the first time.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 18/07/08 10:07 PM · On: Wayward Son

Wow! Dean gave Lexi his mom's wedding ring?! Too cool!

Reviewer: SupernaturalKat (Signed) · Date: 10/07/08 02:45 PM · On: Wayward Son

freaking awesome

Reviewer: Sugar Fairy Dust (Signed) · Date: 09/07/08 07:23 PM · On: Wayward Son

I loved Dean's nervousness and how he didn't really ask her to marry him. Very Dean like just to put the ring on the table and not say anything. Can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 07/07/08 05:22 PM · On: Wayward Son

A strange twist that Sam always wanted normal but learned to embrace the hunting life and Dean never believed he could have a normal life but is now getting it. Now the fur will fly!

Author's Response: Haha yes it will.

Reviewer: Sugar Fairy Dust (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 02:26 PM · On: Wayward Son

WOW! I'm hooked. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!

Reviewer: Sugar Fairy Dust (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 12:08 PM · On: Under Your Skin

Wow awesome blending of the original episodes. I'm moving on to the sequel now.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 08:35 AM · On: Wayward Son

Wow! Very well written Dawn! Everything is perfect---Dean's thoughts, his empathy for his father, the flashback, his guilt, his search. I'm just bowled over!

Author's Response: Thank you SO much! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 09:18 AM · On: Wayward Son

Funny line---"Winchesters don't make girls"! That was hilarious!
Geez, Sam can be a real ass when he's drunk! Good thing he doesn't get drunk very often.

Author's Response: I like drunk Sammy though! LOL. I was thinking of him in Playthings and I just had to add in him being drunk. I like that line a lot too. I think it's a very Dean thing to say, sorta along the lines of him telling Sam he's always right because he's the oldest. I should have ch 2 up shortly.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 08:57 AM · On: Under Your Skin

Wow! Quite a shocking revelation! Now Dean has only one year to live and will barely be able to meet his child before he had to go.

Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews. Ya the crypt scene was a little disturbing and I blame it all on me listening to closer by nine inch nails when i wrote.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 08:49 AM · On: Under Your Skin

You blended Lexi into this scene very well.

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