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Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/08 01:24 PM · On: sins of the father

oooo I really lke the way you ened the story!!!! awesoeme job dave!! update soon please!!

Author's Response: this 1 is finished there will be another story though

Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 01/10/08 11:44 AM · On: sins of the father

It's quite hard to follow and you could do with some help in the formatting and vocab department. All in all, interesting ideas, just need to pull everything else up to the same standard.

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 08:49 AM · On: sins of the father

so, i read it. Because to give an advice you have to see first right, that's what you told me. And, i just feel like you owe me half an hour of my life back. I'm here to read about Supernatural, about Dean and Sam. You remember them, the heroes of this site? Oh and, another thing you should try to remember is ponctuation. Seriously guys, you might have ideas, and the love of writing, but find another site where to post, because here the subject of this site is in its name, SUPERNATURALVILLE. And please hire a couple good betas, and i said good, not another one of your teen friend.

Reviewer: fireceltiephoenix (Signed) · Date: 25/08/08 07:53 PM · On: sins of the father

What an interesting twist. I can't wait to see where you're going with this. Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 20/08/08 04:20 PM · On: sins of the father

I really like this story!! good job!!!
keep your writing going strong!!
update soon!!
( deserves more than a ten...)

Author's Response: thanks jess

Reviewer: dangermouse00 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 02:09 PM · On: The things we do for family

This is good! It's quite good how you've put the element of family into the show.

Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 01:50 PM · On: sins of the father

on the way

Reviewer: caty (Signed) · Date: 26/06/08 01:39 PM · On: sins of the father

wow can't wait for more

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/08 02:12 PM · On: The things we do for family

wowwww I really like this chapter it was soooooo good!!you are doing an amazing job
please please please please update soon so I can read more!!!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/08 02:37 PM · On: The things we do for family

plz keep on writing this story!! this chapter was amazing and YES!! it is worth continuing!!!
Jessica!!!!!!!

Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 08/05/08 02:46 PM · On: The things we do for family

I love this story!! awesome job!! update soon!!

Reviewer: bambers2 (Signed) · Date: 25/04/08 12:54 PM · On: The things we do for family

intersting start...so much stuff going on here, hard to know where to begin to comment. awww...Sam proposing to Kate on the dance floor was real sweet. and now Cassie is a full-fledged hunter as well... I see bad things in the future for the Winchesters...bambers;)

Author's Response: yeah I am thinking of bringing Dave and KAte's past into it as well

Reviewer: kwater (Signed) · Date: 24/04/08 03:21 PM · On: The things we do for family

I can really tell that you guys put a lot of thought and effort into this one, I thought it was funny the way both Dave and Sam were using the internet and ended up meeting. Thanks for the read - Kel

Author's Response: thanks kel glad u enjoyed it if you click on me the other 2 should show up

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