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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/06/10 06:10 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart Is

Geez! Incredible! I'm still amazed at how well you do these episode title drabbles. I think drabbles would be hard enough without incorporating the titles.

Author's Response: Thanks! I too thought them impossible, coming in right at 100 words, but once I started it got a whole lot easier. I do think it is addictive though. LOL Later, B.J.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 08/06/10 05:33 PM · On: A Child's Prayer

Wow! Great job! Sometimes when people write the title drabbles they don't make sense or flow well. This piece was an example of how it's don.

Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate it. I'm still getting the hang of these drabbles, but I am enjoying the process. Take care, B.J.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 07/06/10 10:27 AM · On: Destiny Claims a Brother

It does fit both brothers so well, I pictured both in my head. Great one shot.

Author's Response: Thanks, I guess it just goes to show how much they have always sacrificed for the greater good. And how unusual is it that not only did they both come back from the dead, but they both also went to eternal damnation but only because of their heroic nature? I think they deserve some peace in this life. Take care, B.J.

Reviewer: moira4eku (Signed) · Date: 07/06/10 10:26 AM · On: A Child's Prayer

I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! These drabbles sure can be addictive, but challenging. Later, B.J.

Reviewer: supernatfem76 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/10 05:57 AM · On: A Child's Prayer

Brilliant use of episode titles from all of the seasons.

Author's Response:
Thanks! I'd actually written this early in S5 and rewrote it to include more from that season. The devil was in the details. LOL
Later, B.J.

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 04/06/10 06:27 AM · On: Destiny Claims a Brother

clever...fiendisly clever!
bev xx

Author's Response:
Thanks, Bev, appreciate it!
B.J.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/06/10 07:34 PM · On: Destiny Claims a Brother

Oooh! It does fit both Winchesters. cool!

Author's Response:
Yeah, I thought so too. I was so glad I didn't lose my stories when my computer crapped out. It took awhile to get it back up and running and when I checked on my stories, I thought the same thing.
At the time I wrote it, it was definitely about Dean, but Sammy.... Man, these Winchesters kill me!
Thanks for reading and the review, B.J.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 01:15 PM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

I like how you broke up crossroad blues. Clever! A very hopeful piece of work.

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 06:02 AM · On: Collision Course

You managed to use On The Head Of A Pin! Excellent job. I loved every word.

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 03:49 PM · On: As the World Burns Down, A New Regime Awaits Its Turn

Whoa. Creative thinking! This is a creepy little thing.

Reviewer: Scanilla (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 03:46 PM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

Oh, impressive and eloquent. I love the solemnly somber tone of this. Fantastic job!

Reviewer: bhoney (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 12:52 PM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

Holy cow, you fit a LOT of titles in there! That's really impressive. Nice job.

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 09:00 AM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

I counted again, found them ALL!! LOL
Jacq

Reviewer: Pandora Jazz (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 02:36 AM · On: Collision Course

B.J.
Love the last line of this one.
'...tragedy averted as Dean refuses to slay the monster at the end of this book.'
Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing.
Lori

Reviewer: Pandora Jazz (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 02:31 AM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

B.J.
Never thought one could construct a prayer out of episode titles.
Cas must of helped.
Good job!
Take care,
Lori

Reviewer: Pandora Jazz (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 02:28 AM · On: As the World Burns Down, A New Regime Awaits Its Turn

B.J.
OK, way to creepy or is it crawly?
Bugs...well at least you didn't just say spiders or something. That would have really gotten to me.
I think I like the other one better, but you still did a great job with working in the episode titles.
Thanks.
Lori

Reviewer: Pandora Jazz (Signed) · Date: 04/09/09 02:22 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart Is

B.J.
I came over to visit and found this wonderful bit that you have written.
I really enjoyed reading it. Love how you worked in the titles.
I see you have written some others, so off to read them.
Thanks for sharing your stories with us.
Lori

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 02/09/09 07:24 AM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

ah seduced by the torrid passion of the drabble...but so worth it. sweet job! bev xxx

Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 31/08/09 09:32 AM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

I counted 11 in this one, good one
Jacq

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm losing my touch...LOL But you need to count again because I think there are 14. Thanks for the shiny stars. Take care, B.J.

Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 30/08/09 01:58 PM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

This reminds me of a poem I read about instructions if you're in a fairy tale- the language is similar. This is funny because you are using so many titles from the episdoes- including Houses of the Holy which I don't think has been used yet. I don't think you should have to stop, if you're addicted. It's fun for the rest of us to read, too.

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 30/08/09 10:46 AM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

BJ, Thanks for sharing. Our dear Cas offering what he can for Dean.
Crystal

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 30/08/09 10:11 AM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

Hi B.J.,
Masterful use of some of the titles, here. The words are weighted and chosen carefully, and I really like the idea that Castiel would pray for Dean. I don't get a Sam vibe/reference from any of this, and I'm trying to decide if that's a good thing or a bad thing.
Sue

Reviewer: Swellison (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 06:26 PM · On: As the World Burns Down, A New Regime Awaits Its Turn

Hey B.J.,
Awesome job with this. I agree with you, cockraoches....yech! yuck! (runs screaming in the opposite direction)
Sue

Author's Response: Thanks, Sue! Yeah, cockroaches are gross. But at least one gave Wall-E a buddy in his movie. LOL Later, B.J.

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 04:36 PM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

Well that was just beautiful, i loved that you wrote it as a prayer, well done.

Author's Response: Thanks! With angels and God in the mix, it is only a matter of time until Dean is forced to accept his role as Heaven's warrior. My how that man fights his destiny. So glad he has one angel on his side in Cas. Take care, B.J.

Reviewer: Tree66 (Signed) · Date: 29/08/09 04:32 PM · On: Prayer for the Chosen One

Dude- never thought someone could construct a prayer out of SN titles... I am IMPRESSED and bow before the master! LOL... very cool!

Author's Response: Thanks, Tree! I guess they just know how to pick great titles. I'm thrilled you like it. Later, B.J.

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