Reviewer: jennie1981 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/09 09:27 PM · On: The Devil I Own
geez one word ebonics
Reviewer: jennie1981 (Signed) · Date: 29/10/09 09:27 PM · On: The Devil I Own
geez one word ebonics
Reviewer: jennie1981 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/09 09:49 PM · On: More Hellish Than Heavenly
yea well again that makes no sence at all work on your grammer and spelling this ebonics thing is not good at all
Author's Response: okay i get the point myself and i know im new at this but maybe you could help me with it.. i know i'm asking too much but i just had a not-make-sense part idk
Reviewer: jennie1981 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/09 09:30 PM · On: Something Wicked The Way She Comes
okay you really need to work on your grammer and try to meake sence when your writing stories you make aboslutly no sence at all cant understand anything with your grammer or your spelling its horrible
Reviewer: jennie1981 (Signed) · Date: 28/10/09 09:10 PM · On: Stranded In Terror School
okay feedback im sorry im mean but did you read this before you sent it
Author's Response: of course i only copy this to my book so i could post it and i realised it doesnt make sense im trying to do a right spelling n stuff
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 01:47 PM · On: Prologue
Hey hunny. A fortuitious chance meeting ! Perhaps take a little look at your tenses...you move from past to present to past a little confusingly. Bird x
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 01:43 PM · On: Prologue
Hey Hunny. It's an action packed start and I'll go read chapter two in a minute. I'm gonna suggest that you might want to get someone to read your stories before you post as some of your structuring is a little bit off the mark. Bird x
Author's Response: yeah i know i'm bad at this idk why but i'm tryin to do it right sometimes i'm not good at english kinda spelling thing or stuff like that and it doesnt make sense..
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 07/10/09 01:38 PM · On: Survival of Absolute
Hey Hun. Well done on writing your first story and welcome to the happy world of fanfiction. I wondered if you might want to think about getting a beta for your writing as some of your sentence structuring/ spacing makes your story a little tricky to read. Good luck with your future work. Bird x
Author's Response: thnx and i really getting it and um i was wondering if you could help me with my fics and i might get the wrong idea for makin mistakes and some of the stories i typed is in my computer and others are in my books and i hope i will get it right..
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 21/03/09 08:22 PM · On: Survival of Absolute
it's good so far, but a few suggestions: I'd space out the sentences so it's easyier to read:)
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