Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 12:01 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
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Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 12:00 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
haha bens singin!
Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 12:00 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
oh no! bens hurt!
Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 17/09/09 12:00 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
aw this was soo sad!!!!! the ending! poor ben!
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 07:23 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
Yeay! Great chapter but you need an epilogue. Dean never said he had a son out loud....nor did Ben even call him dad. What about a scene with Dean and Sam just talking about what happened before they hit the road?
Author's Response: hmm I'll take that in mind, sequel is already up under lilleloius:)
Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 06:27 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
greaaaaaaaaatttttttttt!!!!!!!!!! The inter action between all these characters are so fine and realistic!!!! Fantastic job aunti hahahaha, no realy this is lovely work and it was an honner to read it.
Author's Response: haha aunti
Reviewer: Dottyoz (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 10:44 AM · On: Grand Benediction
D'you know, this really isn't my type of story but somehow you just got to me with this one. I really wanted Dean to open up to Sam and I was inexplicably disappointed that it ended where it did. Still, sign of a great story - leave 'em wanting more :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I feel I owe you this next one because of the great review. I actually felt a bit inspired to continue on in this line of AU's from writing this one. I mean, alternate reality- or future!fics have no limits! I'm gonna have to think about this... Thanks for the awesome review!!! :D
Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 09:02 AM · On: Grand Benediction
An excellent one shot, beautifuly written.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! Glad you think so :)
Reviewer: blackcatswhiskers (Signed) · Date: 18/04/09 04:25 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
Really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next chapter Rachel
Author's Response: already updated! hope you enjoy!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/02/09 12:55 AM · On: Son's gonna rise
Again, i trully loved it and I like to now if there will be a sequal to this one 'cause I can't get enough to completely finish this story.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 11:52 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
Its all about imagery. This is becomeing one of my favorites. Although, I still think that the character of BEN is trully DEANS son and SAM could well be his uncle.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 05:30 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
This was the image that has ade me more then upset and cry, but the imagery of how it played out was well developed.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 05:09 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
For placeing the unknown knowledge to these three they could become later known as the youngest hunters. I do like the imagery, symbol, and balance. Of the four entities . . . . three kids and a pissed off ghost. Unity, family/ friend, and faith ineach other. “Dean…?” I do like that phrase. It seems ever so clear that he is his son. has to be. the imagination that you have is very creative.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 04:36 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
“Jerk.” Keo fired off. “Bitch.” Ben said in a flat voice. I hat to say this kid, but I do think BEN is Dean son's for the two quotes I pulled out. 2ndly, he acts like him, but Keo is so not llike SAM. That would be so the character of Kate. 3rdly, Keo is more like their father or Bobby. I do like the thought process you load up to Kate, and haveing a vivid imagery of that cemetary. Very weired. I like that in this story it has me useing all the sense even the silent ones . . . . like belife.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 09:08 AM · On: Son's gonna rise
It is looking good with the imagery you have placed to have a reader vividly imagen what is occuring between the brothers. The last sentance of how vivid I can view in my mind of how it would real relive and have him re-live his life as a normal person., For Sam had that and he wants his brother to have a taste of that. The is a colorful idea.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 01:34 AM · On: Son's gonna rise
Well your bewildered mind that you used early on has no come to a jolt of sensativity. I do think that BEN is DEAN son and SAM is uncle. I like the vivid attitude you placed between Dean and Mother to Ben as well as SAM.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 11/02/09 01:20 AM · On: Son's gonna rise
A sincer chick-flick. I do like the visual text of this composition and I love it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 10/02/09 11:24 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
no, I love it although your visual mantality can be pertty scary, but very vivid illiusion of that wicked mind.
Reviewer: GotTheShining (Signed) · Date: 14/01/09 08:11 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
This is starting to become one of my favorite stories. The repeated "you don't have to...." were perfect! I didn't like the part when Sam saved Ben from the cougar because I felt like it would have been better had it been Dean. But, after I read Sam's comment about "you take care of me and I'll take care of him." I changed my mind. It was an *Awe..* moment:)
Author's Response: aaaawwwww thank you so much for you kind reveiw, it really means alot to us, and were glad that its becoming one of your favorite stories, will update soon!! take care, Jess and Andi
Reviewer: Supernaturalfan15 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/09 03:13 PM · On: Son's gonna rise
sister stealers *points finger* but love it
Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:26 AM · On: Son's gonna rise
AAWWWWWWWWWWW POOR BEN!!!
Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:25 AM · On: Son's gonna rise
Keo seems excited!
Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:25 AM · On: Son's gonna rise
LOVE the song in the beginning!
Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:25 AM · On: Son's gonna rise
And despite Sam’s endless bitching Dean managed not to slap him and dump him on the road
Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:24 AM · On: Son's gonna rise
hahaha loved the ending!
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