Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 12/05/10 02:51 PM · On: Heart Shaped Spaces
Blood smears are never a good way to end a chapter! EEEK!
Author's Response: Next one is written... sooo I'll update soon. I'm sick anyway. Might as well make the best of it, right?
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 10:25 PM · On: Heart Shaped Spaces
Oh poor Sam! He's in big trouble, and I think Dean has NO IDEA how much. I like what you've done here, setting up this "epidemic".
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews :) And I'm happy to hear you enjoyed reading them. Yes Sam does appear to be in great trouble, doesn't he? Let's hope Dean figures out what's wrong before it's too late;P
Reviewer: Primrose (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 12:42 PM · On: Heart Shaped Spaces
I just started reading, and I do have to say that the beginning is very compelling. I can handle dark- I think. ..:)
Author's Response: Hey! :) You read American Psycho too, didn't you? I think I remember seeing your name on the review-list. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Let me know if the story causes you to need crisis counselling ;)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 08:16 PM · On: Heart Shaped Spaces
Very interesting chapter! I like that Sam was able to track down patient zero despite all the years that have passed and all the people it has passed through. Sam and Dean's appetites switching is very telling.
Author's Response: To be honest that wasn't planned. Their fluctuating appetite just happened on its own. But it's good to hear you can still make something of it :)
Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 03/05/10 07:56 PM · On: Heart Shaped Spaces
Mentioning Sam's addiction to demon blood was a surprise. yet it showed how numb he was becoming to his old life and who he used to be. The old Sam could never have thought of drinking demon's blood without disgust and anger. This is a great beginning to what should be an exciting and mysterious story. I especially liked how you described the darkness enveloping the town and its affect on the people.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing. Yes you're completely right. Sam is getting numb, as I believe he was after Dean's death and still right after Dean's return. Call it shock, but we're not as a species designed to have our world flipped upside-down and insideout on a daily basis. SO yes Sam is shocked and numb. And thank you very much for the second compliment. Metaphores are my life :)
Reviewer: penmin (Signed) · Date: 21/01/10 10:22 AM · On: Heart Shaped Spaces
I saw this posted ages ago and have only just had time to catch up on reading it...very intense, dark and I am interested to see where this goes. On to the next chapter this evening, hopefully...good one Jacq x
Author's Response: Thanks for the praise :) It's been underway for a long time because of my trip. Aaaaand inpiration is a bit low these days, but I'm slowly working on it. Thank you so much for the review and the stars :D Seems both are a bit hard to come by these days.
Reviewer: reece6521 (Signed) · Date: 02/08/09 01:59 PM · On: Heart Shaped Spaces
Amazing story! I had tears in my eyes the whole time and especially at the end. I know what you mean about depression,(it kinda runs in my family) and anyone who has'nt suffered from it should think themselves very lucky. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I wanted to reach someone with this story and I hope I can make it more exiting for ya. Heck, I know I will :)
Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 11:01 PM · On: American Psycho!
The only criticism is that I'm not sure Dean wouldn't pick up on Sam's feelings and mood, at least just a little. I gotta say having her wake up in the morgue was a bit of a shock, will she be back I wonder? Thanks for the great story and I'll make sure to look for the next one.
Author's Response: I wondred if I should have changed it, but I wasn't sure what it would do for the story. Also I was a bit selfish because the ending relates to the beginning if the third story in this 'verse.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 03:36 PM · On: American Psycho!
Great story, lots of twists and turns that kept me thinking and wondering.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it :) I'm planning a darker sequel to this one so look out! Thanks SO much for the stars. Made me smile :D
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 02:38 PM · On: American Psycho!
Season 4 spoilers ahead: If only post-Hell Dean were content on the show... Seems like every episode he's looking more and more like a kicked puppy. "You thought torturing people in Hell was bad... Guess what -- I liked it so I guess that makes me a monster!" "You thought maybe God was giving me a second chance? Think again -- they just want me to torture someone!" "Oh yeah, and me caving in Hell like a sissy-girl is the reason the world's gonna end. Turns out the apocalypse is all my fault!" "And hey, my brother's a demon-blood drinking junkie and my angel friend isn't my friend anymore!" Not sure how much more I can take, honestly. So thanks for giving us a contented Dean here. As I said, if only.
Author's Response: Oh hun, I'm afraid you're not gonna like the sequel to this one very much. We'll be delving deep into the brothers' psyche and it aint gonne be pretty ;)
Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 06/05/09 09:45 AM · On: American Psycho!
I feel much better now! No body messes with Sammy, Go Dean! I'm glad your planning a sequal, I'll be sure to watch out for it.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed. I've got a tiny epilogue to tie everything up and confuse you all even more :)
Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 05/05/09 10:24 PM · On: American Psycho!
OH COME ON!!! You're killing me here. I believe you that it's not a Dean or Sam Death!Fic, but what about my blood pressure?!? You know a person could almost feel bad for the killer (almost) because you know when Dean gets his hands on him for what he did to Sam...please post soon!
Author's Response: Heheeeee.... Don't worry I'm updating this one in record speed- The wait should be minimal. I'm SO glad that you're enjoying!!! Thank you SO much for your reviews!!! :D
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 05/05/09 04:37 PM · On: American Psycho!
GAHHH!!!! That reveal at the end gave me shivers! As soon as you described the mangled corpse I KNEW it was David Bloom! It almost seemed too easy that they had a name for the guy and everything. I am SO looking forward to your next update! Your cliffies are killing me!
Author's Response: And your reviews are making giggle like a little girl! Muahahahaaaaaa!!!! *rubbing hands maliciously*
Reviewer: ReccaF (Signed) · Date: 05/05/09 11:23 AM · On: American Psycho!
OK..... this has been just AWESOME !!!!!!!!!!!!!! you are amazing- all the twists and turns-all the suspense, psychology-terror-OUTSTANDING writing!!!!!!!! Now....don't leave it this way...SAMMY....nononononono-I want Dean to kill this psycho.. you put Hitchcock to shame-this story is beyond great!!!!!! more please.... BRAVO!!!!!!
Author's Response: Ahh the master of terror... put him to shame you say? I doubt that I'm up to his level just yet, but I try to please (maybe I should do a tribute to 'Birds') :) I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying and THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE STARS!!!! Rest assured, 'more' is coming... soon :P
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 05/05/09 10:23 AM · On: American Psycho!
You're really going for the kill now, aren't you?! Sweet Jesus! Quinn and Juliette dead -- Dean unconscious and possibly in Bloom's clutches again... Sam stabbed and bleeding to death! As Dean would say, "It's not looking good, Ron." You are wicked and cruel for leaving us with that evil, evil cliffie.
Author's Response: I was going to leave it at Dean almost being blown up, but I figured that was worse... might have miscalculated on that one though... hmm...? No, but I promise to hurry on the next chapt. "Real Life" has been a bit crazy lately and sleep hasn't exactly been at the top of the list. I'll try to see if I can't find that golden middleway between non-stop writing and occasionally sleeping or working (maybe both at the same time?) thanks SO much for all your reviews :)
Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 05/05/09 09:32 AM · On: American Psycho!
I'm in shock! Juliette and Sam...COME ON!! I really don't know what else to say. Please post soon and have Dean kill this bastard!
Author's Response: HAHAAAAA! By gosh I think I've done it! And again, I promise it's NOT a death fic. Not for Sam and Dean anyway...aherm...
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 01/05/09 08:04 AM · On: American Psycho!
Thank goodness, Dean is rescued. But I have to admit I was concerned about how easy the rescue was considering what happened to Wynne in the previous chapter. But I suppose the mega explosion could well be the ultimate result of the traps also mentioned earlier. The bad guy is still out there, so I'm not at all sure Dean is safe yet. And did Diana die in the explosion? And did ...? Too many questions still be answered.
Author's Response: Don't worry. Diana isn't dead... yet... :) Thanks so much for the lovely reviews and the stars.
Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 01/05/09 05:32 AM · On: American Psycho!
I'm sort of breathless here - the net is closing in but I can't decide if it's the right net - you are doing such a fantastic job of throwing curved balls, I'm not sure what I believe anymore. Lucky me I have another chapter I can go read straight away. Well nearly straight away, I must go do some real life things first. But I will be back.
Author's Response: Good to know I'm throwing you for a loop. Trust me, the next chapters will only confuse you further (I hope) :) That was what I'm aiming for anyway. Glad to know you're still entrigued by the story and sticking with it and thanks for all the great reviews- I'd take those over cookies any day :P Uhh! And thanks for the stars!!!!
Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 30/04/09 10:03 PM · On: American Psycho!
I'm glad Dean finally gets some *cough* comfort. :) The explosion was a little surprising. Psycho guy is still on the loose...can't wait for more, does he go after Dean again? If he does, hopefully they're ready for him!
Author's Response: Time will tell if he decides to run or comes after them again. At this point the developement of the story is as much a mystery to me as it is to you :) Thanks for the reivew.
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 30/04/09 03:57 PM · On: American Psycho!
Uh-oh. I had a feeling there was going to be a bomb there. It was just too easy for them to get Dean out! (At least it went off AFTER they left with him and not before) I'm a little concerned that Bloom just let Dean get away. Are we dealing with a calm before the storm here? Or is Bloom declaring war on all their butts? Seems like he's on a silent, sadistic warpath!
Author's Response: That's all in the mystry of "The Maryland Murderer". But let me tell you this, the story is far from over and the plot will only thicken as we progress :P
Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 10:43 PM · On: American Psycho!
Wow, Wynne’s death was something else. Kind of shocking about Beatrice too! Glad Dean's holding his own! Please send in Sam already...I think we've already established I'm impatient!!!! :)
Author's Response: The plot is thickening... rapidly! There are still a few strings that needs to be tied, but it's speeding up and the next chapt should be ready tomorrow and updated the day after that. The impatience doesn't bother me, in fact I'm kinda thrilled :D! Guess it's cause of all the great reviews you keep leaving. Thanks, hun :*
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 07:44 PM · On: American Psycho!
Okay, Wynne Patrice's death was seriously disturbing. It turned my stomach. You're really writing a gore-fest with this one! lol. Now Sam needs to get his butt in gear and rescue Dean -- screw the girl dying in the car!
Author's Response: Oh the gore-fest will continue my dear! :P I plan on knocking as many of the little suckers off the story-line as possible :) Maybe I should put a warning on the chapter, huh? Thanks so much for the review. Great to know you're still enjoying :D
Reviewer: monkeymuse (Signed) · Date: 29/04/09 03:39 PM · On: American Psycho!
WOW just found this. Out standing!!! Please update soon this was great.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! :D If you like this story you may like the prequel as well (shameless advertizing :*) The prequel is called Tricks of the Trade, but don't worry. If you decide not to read it, it shouldn't interfere with your enjoyment of this story :) Thank you SO much for the review :D
Reviewer: redgriffin (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 11:09 PM · On: American Psycho!
You just had to stop there didn't you?!?! Evil writer that you are. :) Just please promise this isn't a Death!Fic. Get Sam to Dean and he'll pull through...right?
Author's Response: It's NOT a death-fic, I promise :)
Reviewer: NongPradu (Signed) · Date: 27/04/09 07:21 PM · On: American Psycho!
Ummm... Doesn't that mean DEAN is dying?!? You're evil. You know that, right? This cliffie earns you a one-way ticket to the hot box. Just so you know. ;)
Author's Response: I know I know, but all I can do is watch and giggle... Cringe a little for all the Dean-torture..
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