Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/05/10 05:51 AM · On: Right Here Waiting For You

this is so SHAKESPERIAN . . .of a Romeo and Juliet, but without the vegor of being snobs of monye and high socity marks.

I do love this one. thanks for ur generous work. u so rock.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 06/05/10 05:50 AM · On: Right Here Waiting For You

this is so SHAKESPERIAN . . .of a Romeo and Juliet, but without the vegor of being snobs of monye and high socity marks.

I do love this one. thanks for ur generous work. u so rock.

Reviewer: ritsam (Signed) · Date: 10/02/10 12:02 AM · On: Crack the Shutters

hey didi, iv never seen this one on ff. though it's cool enough but you know what...i like the second half most. umm, what can i say---u n i are the same piece of art, i mean...Sam Girl. I like it.

 Bon. 

Reviewer: mizpah (Signed) · Date: 18/08/09 04:41 AM · On: Right Here Waiting For You

‘Yet things didn't even come close to any of his dreams and now he was left with all of his hopes crushed, his life destroyed and no tears left to cry.'

This was quite a beautiful line, aptly describing Sam's continuing guilt over Jessica's death and his conviction that he could have saved her if he'd just done things differently.

Dean's concern and worry was well painted, but he sort of doomed himself and Sam with that famous line - "It's just a simple salt and burn"....oh, Dean - you should know better....

Mount Olivet Cemetery, eh? We have a Mount Olivet Hospital here in Brisbane - it's for terminally ill patients. Funny coincidence, that.

Scary that Sam looks so much like Antonio - and that Louisa thought he was her long-dead husband. Can feel Dean's pain and panic when she vanished, taking Sammy with her. And it was so sad that Louisa was so broken-hearted even after death that she refused to believe that Sam wasn't her lost love.

And trust the Winchester luck that had Sam standing at the top of a very steep flight of stairs when the ghost went up in flames.

Thank heavens Dean and Bobby got to him fairly quickly, though, and got him to the hospital. Loved the little moment when Sam woke up, saw his brother, and knew he was safe, even though he was in so much pain from the fractured arm and head injury.

Looks like Sam has a bit of a long recovery ahead of him.

Good job, hon - sorry I'm so late to the party. I've been in a bit of hibernation lately. But spring is coming to Australia, so I'm yawning and stretching, and slowly emerging from my cave.

Jules

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 05:17 PM · On: Crack the Shutters

That was really good, I love that both brothers are so willing to sacrifice themselves for the other. I hope that side of their relationship will come back to the fore next season :D

B xx

Author's Response: Thanks, I needed to get a fix on the brotherly love. Sounds like there is hope for next season. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: buttercup (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 05:16 PM · On: Crack the Shutters

That was really good, loved that both boys would be so willing to sacrifice themselves for the other. Hopefully that side of their relationship will come back to the fore next season :D

B xx

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 02:47 PM · On: Crack the Shutters

Grand one! What the spirit did to Sam and Dean was horrifying but still I can't help it to feel sorry for her, what she experienced, abandoned by the man she loved when he had the chance to save her, left to die a terrible death, all alone, that's tragic (and I'm glad she found her peace at the end). So our boys on the other side are the living proof of what it means to love someone so much you sacrifice yourself for the other without thinking, what love really means ("Your life meant nothing, if you couldn't save someone else, especially if that someone was your brother or child." So true!). You write this in an amazing way, breathtaking and touching - a truly wonderful moment when Dean told Sam he was at Stanford a few times to make sure his bro was safe and Sam answered "I know you were. I could feel you". Also I loved your John, a real dad for the boys. Dean's understanding "that maybe there was something between him and his brother that couldn't be broken..." rounding this up perfectly! Thank you so much for sharing!!!

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 02:46 PM · On: Crack the Shutters

Grand one! What the spirit did to Sam and Dean was horrifying but still I can't help it to feel sorry for her, what she experienced, abandoned by the man she loved when he had the chance to save her, left to die a terrible death, all alone, that's tragic (and I'm glad she found her peace at the end). So our boys on the other side are the living proof of what it means to love someone so much you sacrifice yourself for the other without thinking, what love really means ("Your life meant nothing, if you couldn't save someone else, especially if that someone was your brother or child." So true!). You write this in an amazing way, breathtaking and touching - a truly wonderful moment when Dean told Sam he was at Stanford a few times to make sure his bro was safe and Sam answered "I know you were. I could feel you". Also I loved your John, a real dad for the boys. Dean's understanding "that maybe there was something between him and his brother that couldn't be broken..." rounding this up perfectly! Thank you so much for sharing!!!

Reviewer: darkhunter (Signed) · Date: 06/06/09 01:20 PM · On: Crack the Shutters

A very good story,i enjoyed reading this, loved all of the lovely brotheriy moments.

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. I'm glad you enjoyed the brotherly moments. I love those moments. Hugs, Vonnie

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/09 09:45 AM · On: Tossed Around

Very sorry for being this late, I had an especially crazy week at work and am still behind everything a bit. The idea of this project is fascinating without end and I absolutely will check it out.

Loved this first scene a lot. As always you write the brothers' bond in a lovely and touching way (never can get enough of this!!) and also a wonderful John, not only a hunter but a concerned and caring dad. Bobby pointing out the difference between Dean and Sam was another highlight here (adored his "I have a feeling he and his brother will make a hell of a team one day." yep!). Really liked Dr. Manheim (that's the name of my hometown you know), cool guy and great doctor, sensing the close connection between our boys. The best part for me however was that you brought the true Sam back to us, the wonderful innocent geek boy I miss so much these days. And extra thanks for John praising Sam for his work, know this meant the world to Sam! Great read, thank you so much!

Author's Response: I understand that live can get pretty crazy at times. Thanks for taking the time to read and review anyway and don't apologize for being late, it doesn't matter as long as you liked it. I actually chose the name Manheim consciously because I wanted something really German and I remembered having a friend in school who was from their. I wanted to also give John a chance to be a real good dad for a change. Hugs, Vonnie