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Reviewer: turch (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 09:16 PM · On: Enter at Your Own Risk

Creepy! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks. :D It's going to get even creepier once the boys end up in the house.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 08:04 AM · On: Head Trip

That was one awesome story, marred alittle by some spelling mistakes, but overall a great compelling story.

Author's Response: My grammar is the worst at times. I am actually really good at it but I write so damn fast. This story only took me like 2 1/2 weeks to write. And I usually average a chapter a day. I had a few times where I had block and didn't write anything for like days tho. But there was one point where I got 3 chapters done in one day and another time I did 2 in one day for this story. It also doesn't help that I suck at spotting my own errors. At least not without a few weeks of stepping away from a story.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 06:37 AM · On: Head Trip

Oh my, what a dramatic chapter, and Jess is blonde - you used the real Jess thank heavens.

Author's Response: Yup Real Jess. :D I loved her and thought it would be so much fun to torture poor Sammy with her. I know I'm evil. :D

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 07/03/09 04:49 AM · On: Head Trip

What a weird man Ted is. I can't decide if he's as mad as a hatter or a manifestation of Bobby.
Must do some boring real life chores, then I'll be back for more.

Author's Response: He's mad as a hatter. Actually DALDOS made a wallpaper for the story (I have it in my photobucket) and it actually has the actor that I imagined as Ted on it. I had a lot of fun writing him. He really took on a life of his own through out the story. Even surprised me a few times. :D

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 04:02 PM · On: Head Trip

Fascinating update. The way you interweave the facts from the series with the life of mental hospital Sam is very clever. This story is getting better and better, I'm now wondering just what Jess will look like, the real Jess or maybe Ruby.

Author's Response:
Thanks. It took me a while to come up with how I wanted to do the AU history. I actually had several versions one was actually even darker then the one I used.

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 03:26 PM · On: Head Trip

This story is clever and compelling. I especially like the switching between realities.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm kinda big on switching back and forth in stories usually with flashback/flash forwards. :D

Reviewer: Midge (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 02:45 PM · On: Head Trip

Have to admit, I opted to read this story out of curiosity - 13 chapters and no reviews- odd I thought.
In all honesty, I expected it to be badly written, but its not really. Your writing certainly improved the further into the story you got, I suspect you enjoyed writing the interaction between the orderly and Sam followed by the fight scene the most.
I'm certainly will continue to read as the ideas behind the story intregues me.

Author's Response: I really do love writing fight scenes. Also had a lot more fun with Sam and the AU. :D Esp later in the story with Ted.

Reviewer: shattershockred (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 02:21 PM · On: Enter at Your Own Risk

Whoa!!!

That was creepy! More please!!

Author's Response: Thanks :D more coming soon. I have been trying to get caught up on a lot of different things lately. But I am almost done with the next chapter now.

Reviewer: DeeUnNatural (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 09:48 AM · On: Enter at Your Own Risk

CREEPY! I like it. Keep going. :)

Author's Response: Thanks. And don't worry I have more coming. The whole story is actually outlined already it's just a matter of writting. :D

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