Reviewer: kazza03 (Signed) · Date: 04/08/10 06:27 PM · On: The Chosen
brilliant series ive finally read it all and i thought it was really really good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed, its always nice to see someone checking out the older stories ;) Kel
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 04:24 AM · On: The Chosen
God . . . I should hate you for allowing it to happen and even if this is a ROMEO AND JULIET STORY it was not fair. Please make it happen that CAT comes back in spirit form to help the WINCESTERS or Singer. Thank you and if you don't mind me makeing a copy of this story that I don't know feels important for me for some reason, Thank You. Keep writing powerful ones like this CAT . . . You are cat arent you? This story is something of you in personal terms.
Author's Response: Ah, Sam I know it was a rough decision to kill off Cat and there are days when I'm certain I was wrong to do it. THanks so much to you for your generous reviewing, feel free to copy any of my stories to read, just the idea that you would want to is a huge deal to me. Thanks for reading and I'll catch you on the next one. ;) Kel
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 04:05 AM · On: The Chosen
DAMN the DEMON from HELL. She was INOCENT and filled with life ever lasting for Dean. Now, it has become a burden for not only Bobby, Dean, But more then ever SAM. Although, you are a character in a story it is as if you where real in my mind and heart. Thank you CAT . . . for making Dean know that he is something that he does know how to TRULY LOVE a WOMAN.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 03:06 AM · On: The Chosen
This SOB has better got good insurance cause this is going to realy be a bitch. Its your words that excite the story. I love it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 09/06/09 02:28 AM · On: The Chosen
As the character of SAM said, "I seriously don't like this plane of Bobbies or Deans I should not have agreed to this." I am with him on that.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 10:05 AM · On: The Chosen
Damn that should not be Sams call to confront the trrator, and beat the living hell out of him/her.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 09:40 AM · On: The Chosen
That is a toll that will bear on SAM . . . I do think they should re-thinkg their plane and come up with more then one and then pounce on them. You know trick them.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 07:45 AM · On: The Chosen
I don't know if I should chose which one is a perferect story, but i think that will give me serious headaches so as siples is this story. I'd say that your stories are superbly great. I think youd've had CAT give a litttle bit of a scare to the little tot of a girl. That would be funny.
Author's Response: Glad to see you over here, Sam. Thanks as always for your kind reviews. Hopefully you'll continue to enjoy ;) Kel
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 04:16 AM · On: The Chosen
This should be made in some kind of insureded poem.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 08/06/09 02:59 AM · On: The Chosen
Again, I don't know what it is about the story. It is laced with a bit of shakespearan. I trully love your work. Its the handeling of words that melt inbetween the situation to feelings like caramel. This is like almost an XXXX rated story, but its filled with so much emotion that it ends up being almost G rated. I like your writing its very enchanting.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 09:12 PM · On: The Chosen
This is an explosion and how the hell did Hanna Banana reach to Bobies without anyone knowing that she was coming, what a vixen she is.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 08:38 PM · On: The Guardian
This is a great story. It had ture meanings behind it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 06:19 PM · On: The Guardian
To even imagen that the character of Dean can still be hooked up for longer then a year to a beautiful girl. This story is almost like a Sonent. I like it. Thanks. Almost, like Dean is Romeo and Cat is Juleit. Shakespear Sonent " Romeo and Juliet" except this has nothing with money nor rank in socity. Its more of hunting evil son of bitchs. I sincerly Love it Emensly.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 05:45 PM · On: The Guardian
The Character of CAT is really needed. The setteling concept of word and thoughts that you have placed is remarkable that the sens's leave an alerting call. The dialogs that are in this story is again amazing. In how the thoughts of the sibling conqure to settling one anothers worrie. This is an aoutomaticly a killer story, and keep doing it cuase it does leave a killer mark for e to keep reading your material.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 07:11 AM · On: The Guardian
Thank you for placeing a couple of lines that has left a setemant of FAMILY. It is even chilly to feel what they are feeling as if the moment of its arrival where to be merly mila seconds togo for its prey itself.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 06:24 AM · On: The Guardian
This is the type of story's that most writers that I have read should place more of. FEELINGS, and not be afraid of them. This is defently a ture peice to keep around and I have enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Again, thanks for all the wonderful reviews, Sam. SO glad you enjoyed this one and I appreciate you taking the time to let me know. Catch you on the next one. - Kel ;)
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 05:44 AM · On: The Guardian
"You've given me so much, things that I thought I'd never have. You're forgetting that I was alone, before you. I lack for nothing in my life; as long as I have you to love me. What we have is so much more than I thought I'd ever have. You gave me a family, a brother, every time I wake up in your arms, I send a thank you to the fates that brought us together. I don't need more, I never have and I never will." What a qoute . . . man that would be a great hallark moment. I always thought that Dean had only eyes for a few girls, but the only one he trully loved and would die for was not for CAT; but for his MOM.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 05:13 AM · On: The Guardian
The spirtual effect that is laced around SAM is quite interesting.The determination that you have placed on Dean as to say that it is only for two not three. "Three is a crowd." a but harsh of a comment that Dean would state to sam though. MOtives are understandable.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 07/06/09 01:22 AM · On: The Guardian
Sorry, missed my place. Its intreaging of the establishment of a bar and Dean assists a damsil in disstress . . . hich establish a very heroric, which establishs some sort of grace. He feels that he has failed not only SAM, but also his girl. He feels that the sudden independance of steping out of the realm of hunting for a bit will accomplish an establishment of reliving stress then to go back to the hotel.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 03:10 AM · On: The Guardian
This rating sucks . . . I think the one that read's the material should decied don't you think? At the end of this story . . . I'll give you mine with my email if any ?'s need to be answered. I can not believe how emotioinal your words can truly effect the scenere of a grauios story such as this.
Author's Response: Sam, I'm just thrilled you're enjoying these stories. They're a bit rough as they were some of the first I'd ever written but honestly I always felt proud of them. Glad I've been able to move you and thanks for reviewing it means a lot. - ;) Kel
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 02:38 AM · On: The Guardian
There was always a home that was all and only HOME to the boy's and special visitors. That setting of the car was stupendus and worth the reading, the visual and mental visions are superbe. Deffenitly a story that jI would like to have permisoin from you to copy and re-read it and place it under the pillow at night.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 02:02 AM · On: The Guardian
You even scare me . . . I am not the auther of this lovely story, but to emagine these great concept single liners of yours they are great and you still have me hooked up like a fish. It makes me wonder if these lined stories or lines come to your ind unexpected and bam!! you drop everything and write. Now to me I appluade you for that. THank you for this great story.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 04/06/09 12:11 AM · On: The Guardian
It is interesting how different both brothers' react to other peoples comments. Sam is more reasonable. Your sensiblity of chooseful words between the damsel and dean are very misteq and powerful. That is a good position to be in. The reader enjoy that as I have. Your structure of the story is hugely magnatiued with a lot of energy. That is good to keep a reader hooked on.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 03/06/09 04:07 AM · On: The Guardian
This is a turly sincery, but the simple love for not only one person but for two and that is truly something good to read and trully look in and gather more info on Deans' womanly side.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/05/09 02:57 AM · On: The First
NO,NO,NO . . . don't do anything else that is not rashional enough for her I do dearly love this story.
Author's Response: Ah, Sam its so cool to see you working your way through this story, this is one of the first I'd ever written and I still have a soft spot for it. THanks :) Kel
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