Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 06:06 PM · On: Put together, Falling Apart

Cool!  A bit different from the show but I liked it.  I was especially thrilled when Bobby pulled the gun on John in defense of the kids.  yahoo!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 05:58 PM · On: Put together, Falling Apart

Wow!  Nikki is a fast thinker.  One minute she decides to got to Australia and the next day she decides to move back to the USA.  I guess that's normal for the Winchesters's nomadic life.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/11/09 05:34 PM · On: Put together, Falling Apart

A good chapter.  You have me wondering if there's more to Nikki's excursion than just to give them all some down time.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 28/10/09 07:12 AM · On: Put together, Falling Apart

My favorite part of this chapter is all the times Dean says he's awake when you know darn well he was sleeping seconds before that.  Typical stubborn man!  But ya gotta love him for that---and for being by his sisters side throughout the entire hospital stay.

Author's Response: I'm so sorry I haven't replied earlier. Real life got in the way. :) So glad you like this story. Yes, Dean's "I'm awake" is something I do pretty regularly if someone's been talking to me and I'm way past exhausted. I think it's now just an automatic response. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 04:25 PM · On: Put together, Falling Apart

Oh, how sad!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/10/09 04:12 PM · On: Put together, Falling Apart

Sudden action---yay!  I like your short chapters.  Sometimes I think I have ADD and by the time I finish a long chapter I've forgotten the beginning.

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 04/11/08 05:53 AM · On: Mistakes

Great story, loved it.  Looking forward to your next one.  K.

Reviewer: sherbear (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 11:34 PM · On: Mistakes

Great story, I'm really enjoying it, but where is the next chapter? I am all for having a bit of anticipation waiting for another chapter, but I keep checking back time and time again and still no updates!

Reviewer: tomash (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 07:20 AM · On: Mistakes

Love it, hope you update soon.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 18/04/08 08:45 PM · On: Put together, Falling Apart

Nice referance to why Dean had mentioned that the last time they had been there, Bobby had threatened to shoot John with a shotgun (Altho I can't picture John getting violent and ugly like that). I eventually got used to Nikki and the twin thing and enjoyed your story. But, still love my boys on their own sans girls in the mix. Unless they're demons and thieves (Su3). Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: nightchills (Signed) · Date: 15/04/08 09:00 PM · On: Shutting the Door

I haven't read the other Nikki story's but I already don't like the idea of a girl helping Dean raise Sam - ? Just doesn't fit. I don't like her, can't make me. Guess I'll have to read the other stories to see what the heck...  

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 26/02/08 02:25 PM · On: Mistakes

From a twins point of view you are doing really well with the connection thing. My sister and i have never been injured enought to have to go thur somthing like that but we always know what the other is thinking. Good job Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I'm kinda guessing with the twin connection, I know some that are really connected in the same way Dean and Nikki are (like my friends that were in the hockey accident. I swear Peter knew before it happened.) and I know others that still have a connection, but it's not as atrong. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Bookworm (Signed) · Date: 28/12/07 11:18 AM · On: Mistakes

good job