Supernaturalville
Reviewer: bunnygirl (Signed) · Date: 13/07/09 11:06 AM · On: Damnations

Its been too long when you gonna finish honey the suspens is killing me. I am in total awe of your imagination. Quick gimme more

Reviewer: icestar (Signed) · Date: 24/05/08 11:23 AM · On: Damnations

Hi, I like this story so far.  Good penmantship, but I did't like the sibling thing, calling the boys younger and older sibling.  but you dont to that any more, so fine:)

But it's a good story.  keep on writing.:)

Reviewer: HavenRyder (Signed) · Date: 28/04/08 09:25 AM · On: Dimensions

hey i'm new here and i love your story alot good job.

Reviewer: OrganizedChaos (Signed) · Date: 07/04/08 01:48 PM · On: Damnations

Okay. Wow.

Just Completed This Story so Far, and i have to say it's such a gripping story.

Can't wait for an Update :D

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 09:53 AM · On: Damnations

i'm really curious to find out where you're going with this story. Anna being now such a perfect soldier in so little time is kind of weird. Can't wait for the next to chapters to learn more. And i miss Sam too...

Reviewer: clynn345 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 03:09 AM · On: Damnations

So amazing love it so so so so much

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 03/01/08 12:12 AM · On: Damnations

Am still loving it. I love Anna's gadgets, what an imagination you have. Why doesn't her brother like Dean tho?? I mean, he's DEAN. LOL.


Author's Response:

Yes, he is Dean, but is Joshua really Joshua?

Muahaha...if you need a reminder, go read the epilogue of Dimensions.

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 02/01/08 07:25 PM · On: Damnations

Reassure you?

Only that this was awesome!,, Gosh i miss Sam but good things come to those who wait i guess.. New character? Interesting!

Keep Writing, You doing a brillant and complusive story!

Reviewer: mymuseandi (Signed) · Date: 29/12/07 06:07 AM · On: Dimensions

I love the twist at the end......the one when the kid's eyes turn yellow....it had me going "Oooooohhhhhhkayyyyyyy......."

Reviewer: pranami3 (Signed) · Date: 19/12/07 12:57 PM · On: Dimensions

This Story was very touching....could'nt help but Cry....cry for Dean,... Cry for Anna...:(  I would give it a rating for 10.....Totally Awesome. Infact more than Awesome!!!

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 17/12/07 04:03 AM · On: Damnations

Gosh Babe! That was some Freakin' Writer's Block!

That was Brillant i love the little 'stepbackandadmirethescenerio' moments, Its awesome!

 Cant Wait For The Next Chapter .. Woop! Extra Long? *PumpsFists*

 Best Keep That Promise! Keep Bringing Us More x

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 16/12/07 01:25 AM · On: Damnations

Great update, loved it, except for it's shortness, but seeing as you promised a long one next time then I will forgive you.

Loved the part where they are washing up, so very normal for 2 people who aren't normal.  

Reviewer: clclemmons (Signed) · Date: 12/12/07 02:44 PM · On: Dimensions

WOW!! This was absolutely wonderful.  You covered every range of emotion, Thank you for a great read.

Crystal

Reviewer: kansasangel (Signed) · Date: 10/12/07 06:03 AM · On: Dimensions

WOW! blown away by this story . so many emotions . I was really dreading the ending I didnt want a sad one but knew it would happen . cried lots ( im a softy ) poor Dean a bit of happiness , normality and it didnt last long .I thought you wrote it very well .I especially liked the different view points from the characters which made it much more interesting . again im blown away and need a strong cup of tea now !

Reviewer: Akasha (Signed) · Date: 04/12/07 03:37 PM · On: Damnations

Honey I gotta say oh my god I wish I could write even half as good as you. You've had me on the edge of my seat litraly. I Started reading Dimentions and hadto print it of so I could read it in a comfy chair. Then I ran out of bloody ink so couldn't print of Damnations Ie the story so far. What are you doing to me I'm Addicted hurry up I don't think I can wait any longer especialy the Mrated version of chapter 4. I will have pleasant deams after that I'm sure. Are you going to Asylumn 2. I would love to meet the geniouse who rote these amzing pages. You should get it published. I'm Seriouse. Keep going babe your making a 34 year old woman very happy. Looking forward to the next instalment with baited breath.

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 01:39 PM · On: Damnations

Yippee another lovely chapter, now not that I'm really interested but just in the spirit of indulging you if you wanted to tell us about the S.E.X I wouldn't complain and grumble (growls low down in throat, pupils dilated and lips slightly parted in anticipation!)  Whenever you're ready - I sure am !  Birdie x

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 16/11/07 09:51 AM · On: Damnations

Alanah, you'll never stop to amaze me. Great update, loved it. I'm not a young reader, so i'll probably gonna appreciate that incredibly descriptive and very adult sex scene, though for the moment i'm good with the vision of Dean with a spatula... By the way could have been a ladle, a skimmer, a wooden spoon, i think he's attractive with whatever accessory...

Reviewer: naughtyafro (Signed) · Date: 13/11/07 04:46 PM · On: Damnations

Mindblowing!

 Brillant Writing, Im Hooked and want to know more!

Patience? Dont think i have any!

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 01:44 PM · On: Damnations

  So loved the 'I will always, always come back' speech from Dean to Sammy. Damn how good is it to tear that boy's poor heart in two?  You're gonna have me laughing with Joy and crying in anguish all over again aren't you?  Please say yes you exquisitly tallented writer you!  Birdie x

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 10:14 AM · On: Damnations

Very good!  Keep it up! 

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 09:55 AM · On: Damnations

Great job!  I hope we find out more about the thing that posed as Dean earlier.

Author's Response:

um, what are you talking about?

Reviewer: CherryTootsiePop (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 03:53 AM · On: Damnations

an update yay!  great chapter and ehem i can't wait for that err other version.  hah!  lol anywho please update again soon :)

Reviewer: Little_angel_666 (Signed) · Date: 12/11/07 03:05 AM · On: Damnations

i really enjoyed reading this chapter and can't wait for the updates.

Great work!!

Reviewer: Glyconut (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 10:23 PM · On: Damnations

WOW!! That pretty much sums it up. WOW, in a really good way. LOL. Fantastic stuff & I am REALLY looking forward to the next part.

Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 11/11/07 05:00 PM · On: Dimensions

Oh my God, that was just freaking awesome.  i need to re-read it 'cause the last chapters are all smdged from my tears but I don't know if I could bear it just yet. That's what it's like to be in love and to loose it.  You're a fantastic writer, I'm in awe.  Thanks so much

Bridie x

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