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Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 08:30 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

This is going to be one wild ride.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 07:33 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

Wow, this is something I did not know of that their are two hunters that have DEMON BLOOD in them.
I am glad that no one else knows.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 07:21 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

Never mind I know what Season.
This is getting very interesting, but what I don't get is that I thought that Angels where like guides and that they would help in case of any danger.

Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 07:02 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

What season was this from?
Anyway, I like this imagery that you have placed. Especaily, the fact that calabe had a strange vision.
? is why didn't SAM see something, before Calabe.
I like the imagery.

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:32 AM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

"Funny, you know he could come back just to kick your ass"
hahahah loved the banter...please please please update soon!!

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:31 AM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

oooooo awesome!

Reviewer: Winchestergal (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:30 AM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

awww I love Mac's concern

Reviewer: Keola (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:21 AM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

awwwww Dean is just awesome!

Reviewer: Keola (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:20 AM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

I DESERVE GODDAMN ANSWERS!! bahahahaha

Reviewer: Keola (Signed) · Date: 26/12/08 12:20 AM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

hahah lovewd the ending!

Reviewer: devonshire (Signed) · Date: 06/11/08 06:42 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

nice update. keep up the good work.

Author's Response:
thank you so much for your reveiw!
:)Jess

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 16/10/08 02:47 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

thought i'll give it a second chance, as you said you would work on the Brotherhood aspect, but no, sorry, still doesn't sound good. Like i said, nothing about your writing, but it's just not my lovely Brotherhood. The boys don't interact like that, the words sound wrong. Giving up on this one, maybe I'll see you on something else.

Author's Response:
thank you for the reveiw! I did redo this chappy, but I haven't been able to fix it!! don't woory the next one should be bettter!
:)Jess

Reviewer: supernatgrl13 (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 02:14 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

Very good!! Keep the chapters comin'!!!

Author's Response: I will! and stay tuned!

Reviewer: supernatgrl13 (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 02:13 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

very good i love the conversation between them all. Gotta love caleb and Dean together!!

Author's Response:
haha yep and glad you liked it!
stay tuned!
:) Jess

Reviewer: naturalbornwinchester (Signed) · Date: 12/10/08 11:25 AM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

kwl just goes to show all we needed was a good brotherhood series 4 story to give inspiration for other ideas and other stories with writers to happen

Author's Response:
Wow! thank you soo much Dave and I'm glad that you see my story as an inspiration for other writers!!
and thank you for the stars!
:) Jess

Reviewer: deanisawesome (Signed) · Date: 10/10/08 10:22 AM · On: Once In A Lifetime

love this!!
xXaustinXx

Reviewer: CdeWinter78 (Signed) · Date: 08/10/08 11:23 AM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

Great a fellow Brotherhood fan!!!!! Liked that you were brave enough to tackle this part of the story from Caleb and other Brotherhood members (Mac) point of view. I have been itching to see what line this would take and will be keeping up with your take. Thought Mac's response to Caleb dreaming about Dean when they thought he was dead was pretty spot on - it made me smile!
Just one thing though - I thought Caleb would be angry at Sam for keeping the fact that Dean was alive from him ? Or is it that he is sooo happy that Deuce is back that nothing else matters?
Good start. Thanks for the read.

Author's Response:
thank you so much for your reveiw!!
I really wanted to do a brotherhood story that go's along with season 4 and I thought that it would be interesting to people and glad to see that it was!
You will see that in later chapters as the season progresses on, but I wanted to make this chapter kinda happy and have Calb happy that Dean is back, rmemeber that this chapter takes place one day after Dean came back, Sam probably wouldn't have the time with everything else that's going on. But don't worry, you will see a mad Caleb! And there will be some fighting between Sam and Caleb because of that!
any I've babbled long enough, glad you liked the story and stay tuned to the rest of my second chance series!
:) Jess

Reviewer: supernatgrl13 (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 06:45 PM · On: Once In A Lifetime

its good! I really like the last two passages; bout sammy!!

Author's Response:
thank you sososo much aly for revewing! glad u liked!
:) Jess

Reviewer: naturalbornwinchester (Signed) · Date: 07/10/08 11:02 AM · On: Once In A Lifetime

ha lmao love it

Author's Response:
thank you Dave!
: ) Jess

Reviewer: bia1007 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 11:54 PM · On: Once In A Lifetime

Great piece, you're perfectly catching the essence of Dean's determination to save Sam with his second chance (and I love this thought) whatever the cost, very intense and a perfect title - loved it!!

Author's Response:
WOW! thank you for your reveiw and stars! wow this really made mt day! hah I actually worte this while in science caus I was bored....anyway stay tuned for more stores in my new sries second chance!
Jess!

Reviewer: Keola (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 05:37 PM · On: Once In A Lifetime

aww I love this peom! awesoem job girl....
KeO!

Author's Response:
Thank you!
Jess

Reviewer: fredo (Signed) · Date: 05/10/08 03:23 AM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

okay, i've got to say something. Nothing personal against your writing, but about your use of the Brotherhood universe. I know it's an open series, but it's a complex and terrific universe, with a timeline, deep and strong characters, and avid fans. Maybe before entering this universe you should read more about it, study the characters, the storyline, etc.. Because your Caleb, as well as your Sam in this world, are really out of character. Your story might be interesting for people who aren't reader of the Brotherhood, as a story with some new characters, but for people like me who are fan, well practically worshipper of this universe, your story won't do it.

Author's Response:
thats okay! thank you SOOOO much for telling me and YES I will fix it! and thank you for taking the time to reveiw!
Jessica

Reviewer: jbomb (Signed) · Date: 04/10/08 11:33 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

I love Caleb he is soo aesoem!! update soon!

Reviewer: deanisawesome (Signed) · Date: 04/10/08 11:32 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

loved it all the way hun!!
awesome job and loved the way you ended the story! love caleb too!
update soon!
austin

Reviewer: supernatgrl13 (Signed) · Date: 04/10/08 05:08 PM · On: Only a few get a Second Chance

Haha great start! caleb's a lot like Dean!! Cant wait to hear the rest!

Author's Response:
haha yea!! ther best friends thas why..!!
stay tuned!
Jess

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