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Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 16/07/11 02:20 AM · On: Hold on to me

I have no words. Just... it's very emotional and powerful. Dean worrying about Camyll and her telling him not to do or say what he was about to. Then knowing Sam was going to untie his rope in an effort to help Camyll and everyone knowing it was what he was going to do. It was fantastically suspenseful!
Sam was his heart and he was his little brother's armor... Fabulous! You hit the nail on the head!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 01:39 PM · On: Hold on to me

Howdy. That's all--- just howdy? What an understatement. I love it!
Once again you've described the dreams, goals and fears of the Winchesters as if you were in their head (and you pulled me in with you).
I'm glad Dean found Sam and Camyll. Now we can find out what's wrong with Sam aside from the metal shooter.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 01:15 PM · On: Hold on to me

...felt as though someone had walked through it and left her cold. Eerie! It gave me the shivers.
I think Sam might have a bit of a crush on Camyll. It sounds like he's more than worried about her getting hurt by Dean's womanizing.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 01:05 PM · On: Hold on to me

I love the background on how Camyll and Bobby became so close. Now we see that she means as much to him as the Winchester boys.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 12:57 PM · On: Hold on to me

Good chapter! i especially liked the Chinese burn and that even thought they've had to grow up way to fast in the hunter's world, in some aspects they're still able to be kids.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 09:24 AM · On: Hold on to me

Great chapter. I love all the little details you express through the thoughts of the characters! You give us every side of the situation and explore all the emotions involved.
I don't remember you being no-one's daddy, Singer." OUCH! Way to twist the knife.
...running so fear wouldn't be able to catch up to him and wrap itself around his neck. Fabulous!
...as soon as they were safe and warm again he was going to let it rip. Ha! Boy, do I know how that feels!

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 09:14 AM · On: Hold on to me

The thoughts and guilt Dean has for wanting a normal life were expressed so clearly. I especially like that he realized he was condemning Sam for fighting for the same things Dean himself wants.
John had never laid a hand on them, he'd never have to because his glare was enough to make anyone shake at the knees. When Dean didn't melt under his father's super heat vision, John nodded and walked passed, allowing Dean to breathe. Yeah! I can imagine those laser beam eyes cutting to the truth.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 09:01 AM · On: Hold on to me

Cool! Oh the hard life of a teenager. I remember thinking myself ill-used by my parents when I was that age. Oh, to go back to such a simple time when the weight of a family wasn't on my shoulders. Dean broadened his shoulders as though he could stand any straighter than he already was. Great line! Funny that Sam's reading Ann Rice. You'd think he'd have enough of the supernatural in real life. Dean was staring Sam down so hard that the younger brother finally felt it and looked up at him, in his eyes was that hereditary stubbornness but a moment longer sharing eye contact with Dean and he was melting. Fabulous! I can just picture Dean's glare and Sam's timidity.

Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 05/09/10 08:28 AM · On: Hold on to me

First of all, fabulous banner!
I love that you started right in the middle of the crisis. That got my adrenaline pumping immediately. I'm also happy to see Camyll back in the story.

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/10 07:23 PM · On: Beast of Prey

Okay and an after thought! Poor Camyll! Seriously what must Isaac have told her for her never to have searched out Dean! Grr Isaac! lol that is all...for now...DS

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/10 07:18 PM · On: Beast of Prey

I BOW DOWN TO THE AWESOME THAT IS SCHELZ!!!
This chapter rocked! Action packed you are awesome with the fight scenes!
Fawn being a dog-person thingie queen bee...I concidered that she might be one when George was attacked...but then dismissed the idea...never thought she was the queen bee tho!!! NICE TWIST!!!
Love that the sword found him just at the right moment! and loved this line:
“Not so indestructible now are you, bitch?”
hehehe not with Dean Winchester around with his awesome sword to cut her down to size!
OMG DUDE CAMYLL IS ALIVE!!!! POOR DEAN LEFT TO THINK SHE WA DEAD ALL THIS TIME!!!
Great story yet again you wrapped me up completely in it! YOU ROCK MY SOCKS!!!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 11/05/10 07:13 PM · On: Beast of Prey

Nice development! So Marla is a dog-person! Never saw that one coming!
Loved the parts with Dean and Hakishu...lol Dean all thinking he's trying to sell him the sword LOVED it!

Dean being chosen by the sword was very cool and DUDE you know your stuff! How much research did you do to have Hakishu sound so frickin perfect!
Great chapter! Supsense building! on to the next!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 02:05 PM · On: Beast of Prey

"What does he mean we?" Sam whined. "You're my brother."
"Ahh that's sweet..." Dean tapped Sam on the shoulder.
Sam pushed Dean's hand away knowing he was being patronized. "What is?"
"You're jealous, want me all to yourself...which is understandable, I am an awesome brother." Dean boasted.
Sam sighed. "Dean, get over yourself."
Hehehehe LOVE that it is SOOO DEAN!
Hehehe love the legally blind thing..."If I could see you right now, I would kill you Sam." Dean moaned.
Great chapter! can't wait to read more but now I must deal with the mundane jobs of a single mother...dishes, laundry...*sigh*

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 01:49 PM · On: Beast of Prey

A new breed that would be unstoppable...not good! using fawn to make that new breed....even worse!
I love that Dean is offereing to help find his sister and how he identifies with Kanis' story.
Also love how Dean had no problem killing Roth lol
Great job so far...ramping up the anticipation!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 01:31 PM · On: Beast of Prey

Great first chapter! Dean showing compassion for the baddie...very intriguing! Dean identifying with the baddie...very insightful!
Love that you have Missouri and Bobby in this one! As always Missouri is impeccably written!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 01:21 PM · On: Every time It Raynes

"Small price to pay now I’m the only one you got." Isaac smiled ever so slightly. "Your mother left because of you and now Dean's leaving you."
OMG I HATE Isaac he is such an asshole!
OMG this was SOOOO SAD! poor Dean! Poor Camyll...Dude you broke my heart!
I do love how this explains Dean's aversion to letting any woman close again.
Great and heartbreaking job!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 12:58 PM · On: Every time It Raynes

Dean cleared his throat. "...Me too."
Camyll raised an eyebrow. "You too..."
"Before." Dean scratched his head. "What you said a minute ago..."
"I love you?"
"Yeah that... me too."
TOO CUTE!!! and SO DEAN!
Very sweet scene between the two love birds! and the getting caught scene was very funny too love that you had that comedic moment there to balance out the angst to come...
Poor Dean and Camyll...they're like Romeo and Juliet being kept apart by their fathers!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 12:41 PM · On: Every time It Raynes

Seriously John...*shakes head* you're injured ya let Dean drive!
This was a great chapter! really love how both Dean and Camyll find solace in each other how being with her makes Dean want to open up to her.
See now Camyll has a point about saving the day and Isaac was being stupid heading out alone on that hunt...but she was no better running off after him on her own.
Pig headed the both of them! I love that Dean wanted to defend her when Isaac is giving her hell!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 12:24 PM · On: Every time It Raynes

"Mill kicked me in the, in my...stuff and I hate her!" Dean moaned.
hehehe Camyll now now play fair with the boys no hitting the sensitive spots ;)
Poor thing tryin to impress Dean...too bad it back fired.
LOVED the teasing of Bobby about his "lady friend" hehehe picturing him in that apron :D

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 10/05/10 12:18 PM · On: Every time It Raynes

Great description! I really could picture the room as you described it. Poor Camyll I really felt for her! Not lovin' Isaac he seems more upset about being left with her to care for than that his wife left. It's almost like it wouldn't have bothered him as much if she'd taken Camyll with her.

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 07:58 PM · On: Hold on to me

Just realized there isn't another chappy yet! this is not good...not good at all!!! now I must check on this AU issue of mine to be sure that I can count on Sammy makin it outta there and then pray for Camyll!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 07:56 PM · On: Hold on to me

Poor Dean! John pushing him aside like that! And Sammy the hero! hehehe these Winchesters I tell ya! The one thing that's a relief about all this is that this is a weechester story and tho it's got an OC it's not an AU...is it??? I mean so we know that Sammy'll be okay...and Camyll right???
DUDE you've got me rushing to the next chappy now!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 07:43 PM · On: Hold on to me

AWESOME CHAPTER!!!
LOVED the confrontation between Dean and John! Go Dean! and yay John for manning up and admitting Dean was right!!!
And yay Bobby for trying to lighten the mood with Dean after!
And lastly Woohoo to camyll for thinking to throw her shoe like that!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 07:30 PM · On: Hold on to me

This was another great chapter!
Loved how Camyll knew just what to tell Sam to steel him and get him moving again.
I love the thought of Dean reading in hiding...I truly believe it too. My Dean is SO much smarter than he lets on!
Now Camyll has me more intrigued as well with this vision of her and Sam being swept away...very very interesting indeed!

Reviewer: gengen0776 (Signed) · Date: 20/04/10 06:01 PM · On: Hold on to me

Aww Bobby! I loved this chapter! I love how Bobby came to Camyll's rescue as much as she came to his!
This was a great chapter! I love Bobby and I love how you are developping a backstory for him with your OC!

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