Reviewer: Shannondoah (Signed) · Date: 15/06/09 04:51 PM · On: A forgotten Hunt
I'm glad you worked out the kinks. The whole chapter was worth reading! Ususally the people they save accept (on some level) what happened. It's great to see someone who continues to disbelieve!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 03:25 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
This was a scarry ove for a reader to be so devotted to your writing, but it was worth it. There are many heart felt guiltyness, love, happyness, comfort, and room for coforting sleep. thanks, your still my favorite.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to scare you! i haven't written anything as dark as that since- i was 17 when i wrote that. im 10 now... there is a bloc on my writing at the moment. i recently lost a clost friend and im trying to keep my head above millions of uni books. kiara
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 03:12 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
This is something that would completely drown the character of SAM. SILENT! Like DEAN. This is a bit harsh, that you as a writer would mentaly place a character with such little strength to hurt a deon. I don't think he will be able to finish the task. Then there is DEAN! in attack mode and as protective as he can to his sibling majorly.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 02:46 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
This is one mystery that in truth I don't think that the character of SAM may not make it . I do hope that I'm wrong. He to me is looking a bit pale and the sickness is getting a lot worse.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 02:30 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
"Common Sense. Let your upstairs brain grow a bit and you'll know what I mean." I will say that those where might defined words hopefuly they don't leak out the other end. I do think that this " IT " is truly screwing with SAM and DEAN is getting a bit fidgit about it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 01/04/09 02:00 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
Only DEAN would think "How close is close?"; of course think with lower regions of the content itself. I do like the intreging setlement between both siblings decideing who will search what. It showd the civilized Winchester huan way. Also, the keen antics of DEAN trying to support and help SAM w/ a drinking contenst. This is one hot story, thanks.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 06:28 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
Funny very comedian in both of them . . . that is what I like about your style of writing. There is always pain of some sort and then coes laughter. That is GOOD!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 06:23 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
Their father is a real DICK, and has porbably always has been since the incedent of their mother his wife and copanion. Its understandable, but I would like to see a vivid image that their father would get that hard edged stick from his ass and go to the with no hassling nor questions.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 06:16 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
okay this is not cool. The syntex u use is great and it puts a lot of feeling to it. Along with vivid images that are haunting me to this time.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 06:06 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
I am feeling a bit scared, this should not have happend. I ean to me. There are times that the wrieting I read from a writer I can feel intensly what the writer or character is feeling and at times it scares me.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 05:13 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
I so love this one already. The inclouser of being a portective sibling can take a toll that is worth anything else. The composure of reaction that Dean had pressured the father figure of stateing to SAM not to lie. WOW!!!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 05:03 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
Athough, I love trully the character of SAM . . . I do hope it was him. Sorry Sam. The visual of tormant is starting to hit me seriously.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 30/03/09 04:51 AM · On: A forgotten Hunt
Wow, this is one that I shudder just by reading it and can feel the moistness of the liquid protruiding from where Dean slashed his brother.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/03/09 06:42 AM · On: Unwell
"So do I, your brother and half the female population." Dean frowned. ‘Why only half? Why not three quarters?" "Because they're either repulsed by your ego hitched or old." "I wouldn't be so sure about old with him Anna." Now that is a statement that reminde me of my husband and you did well on that. "if you are trying to reach the most handsomest coolest awesomest dude in the land you've obviously just missed him. So leave a number or sexually inspiring message and I'll get back to you." Always think with the bootom brain DEAN, but a very good opening to leave messages. THanks!
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/03/09 05:59 AM · On: Unwell
AAAAAWWWW, my baby okay 2nd baby is sick. Yes, he is my favorite character then comes my husband. I do like the imagery and the setting it is interesting, but i think its the kid that is makeing SAM sick.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/03/09 05:32 AM · On: Unwell
I adore this ironic change in SAM and DEAN. Along w/ the antics that SAM & ANNA are a cute couple and Dean agrees to it thats great. I like it.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 12/03/09 04:49 AM · On: Unwell
I promise that I wont. This is getting to be interested and thank you for allowing the character to find another love, but always haveing an Image of Jess . . . the character of anna is good and has a funny sense of huor that even Dean can agree with as well as SAM.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 11:49 AM · On: The Torturous Tale of Cat Ballou
Its okay, but don't you ever do that again. Loved the imagery work everything. I need an oncore of this or in another story thanks.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 24/02/09 11:10 AM · On: The Torturous Tale of Cat Ballou
I do hope I don't eat my humble words that I like this Anna.
Reviewer: sam (Signed) · Date: 23/02/09 12:26 PM · On: The Torturous Tale of Cat Ballou
AWAWAW!!!! This is realy getting to be one of the most rembering moments of image that the character of SAM has had in months. Thanks.
Reviewer: birdie (Signed) · Date: 10/02/09 07:27 AM · On: The Torturous Tale of Cat Ballou
hey hun. well I was drawn to the title because 'Cat Ballou' is one of my fav movies of all tjme. I'm intrigued to see you taking a different spin on the movie because in that she wasn't actually hanged as I recall but I see how this lends itself to the whole venegeful spirit plotline. i'll look forward to seeing more. I am confused tho, Kiara. as to the Anna character? am I to read Anna the angel here? or have I missed something? And if that's so then wasn't she slightly more smitten with Dean than Sam? I am also a little unsure about posting incomplete chapters? What is your reasoning in doing that? Don't quite see the merit in posting before the chapter is complete? Bird
Author's Response: hey bird, no anna is a character i created before i knew she was on the actual show itself. start at A Forgotten Accident or Never a Winchester and read the whole series and you will understand she is my aussie doc who's road tripping with the boys kiara
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/09 01:43 PM · On: Unwell
loved it!!!
Reviewer: copycat666 (Signed) · Date: 01/01/09 10:46 AM · On: Sing For the Moment
this is good stuff , don't get sad because you don't receive that much reviews , its really great ! I love it anyway and I can't wait to see where this go's
Reviewer: impalamedean1 (Signed) · Date: 30/12/08 11:15 AM · On: Sing For the Moment
REALLY good!! and btw I LOVED your banner it sooo cool! :)Jess
Author's Response: wow thank you. you guys are like the first people to review anything other than my first one in the series. I'm beginning to feel unloved! HNY Kiara
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